The Dark Wizard's Farming Diary

The rest of the book is fine, but it feels a bit long-winded and cumbersome, which really affects the reading experience.

The protagonist cannot be ordinary without a golden finger. The protagonist has at least one golden finger and enlightenment. There is no cheat at the beginning, so the protagonist needs to be enlightened. No matter what happens, the protagonist will not panic, he will just think calmly, and the decision made after thinking will be absolutely implemented. If there is any obstacle, he will crush it The protagonist does not have a golden finger at the beginning, and his performance is ordinary. He panics on the stake and is confused in the dungeon. It was unbearable. I let the doctor and his family go when I left. I guess I will cooperate with that lord in the future When writing fantasy, you cannot write about the protagonist being an ordinary person. The fantasy must show the charm of the world you write from the beginning. It is to let readers follow the protagonist to see the world. If the protagonist travels through time, readers should also be allowed to see the collision of different systems, different civilizations, different ideas, and the results of the collision. The result must be attractive, otherwise the writing will be in vain If the protagonist is an ordinary person, there will only be the struggle of the protagonist, and the struggle of the protagonist is generally used to reflect the contradiction between ordinary people and society, or to express the impermanence of fate The author can give an example. The protagonist does not have a golden finger, and is extremely ordinary. It is a good fantasy work, not only novels, animations, comics, but also

It feels a bit like kayaking.

Is it a eunuch when it's released?

After reading the first forty chapters, the story itself is good and worth writing down. I just want to talk about my impressions of the writing. First, there is too much emphasis on immediate description, describing scenes and processes in a way similar to camera switching. However, this narrative method lacks emphasis on the subject and also damages the coherence of the plot. A typical example is the description of war scenes and processes. The second is a writing style similar to that of Japanese light novels. Sometimes the subject is deliberately placed very late, or simply omitted, which makes it feel a bit awkward to read. Some people may say that "you will get used to it after reading too much", but this style of writing that uses foreign language grammar does not bring a particularly good effect to the narrative. On the contrary, it limits the scope of the audience. Therefore, I hope the author will consider whether this should be done.

Introduction Boss, so what is your main line?

The IQ is pretty good, but the story is not much, and it doesn't seem to have much to do with the introduction. I'll keep it for now and look at it later.