Pirate's Sword Rumeng

The book is okay but there is no sense of immersion. Where is he from, where did he come from, when did he have a panel, etc. The first few chapters don't say anything. It's like he suddenly appeared. This is fan fiction. A person who didn't appear in the original work must know why he came out ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू ). You can take a look at - Shuzu Wuming - he gives you the same thing as someone who didn't appear in the original work. You can learn from it.

Keep it up and go in. To be honest, I feel that fan fiction is correct and beautiful when written with the help of the world view. Devil fruits and domineering are the main elements. I started to use wind, air, and electric sensors, and I forgot about other elements of the work. It didn't matter, they were all okay, but these copies of The Curse of the Sword are really not good-looking. I feel like I am writing my own novel except for the names of the fan characters. Writing more about domineering devil fruits can also make readers quarrel, which may also lead to popularity. If you write about someone who will die with a knife and someone who will die with this, most of them will criticize you. Then it was really good to write about Nami getting on the ship. It was slow-burning, felt and logical. I don't think about anything else, either childhood sweethearts or a tiger's body. Ah, after saying so much, you have already gone in. It feels uncomfortable 🤫

Come on! ! ! I am a 300,000-word eunuch!

Come on, although the writing is a bit poor.

I think it's pretty good. It's not popular. Maybe it's because the name was chosen poorly (that female swordsman in it, Kuina? The character description is weird)