Who Cares About Childhood Sweethearts When They Can Become Immortals?

I have to force my way down to the ruins, can't I wait two days to change the skill comparison method? Is the exercise so important? Can't pass the college entrance examination without studying? I went to this ruins just to learn the martial arts competition a few days in advance. Taking the risk, promoting the plot is too forceful. It is more reasonable to kill the protagonist's father and make the protagonist have to go.

Chapter 14 said that the protagonist's parents are both foundation builders, but the protagonist's mother has not shown up yet. After practicing bone training, he has to practice visceral skills. His father can't be contacted and he doesn't know how to find his mother. He has to go to the Kunba ruins. Is Bengbu really living in Bengbu? The protagonist's father knew that his son was a physical training wizard before, but he didn't know to leave the visceral skills when he was on a long-term mission? Aren't you afraid that you won't be able to come back? It's time for the competition, and my parents haven't even said a word of greeting. Are they all on a long-term top-secret mission?

Killing a chicken won't do it. . . When I was in high school, I saw people hang themselves (I went to study early in the morning) and died like that on a tree by the roadside. I didn't feel any emotion at all.

Find a meditation technique or exercise, and report it to the authorities. If you suspect that someone is using mental techniques to affect the mind, isn't there a lot of idiots and mentally retarded pigs' feet?

Just take a look at this introduction. After all, who the hell is in love when you can pursue the extraordinary? Wouldn't it be nice to just create an infinite world and experience it when you have the ability? He can handle all kinds of people.

No, wouldn't it be enough to arrange for the protagonist to pass the exam smoothly? Isn't it disgusting to have such a cliche plot where the protagonist must be attacked during the exam? It keeps dragging the pace?

The later it gets written, the more vulgar it becomes. I have been pretending to be a pig for any age. When will I turn into a real pig? This is a magic book. If I write it like this, I will be on the street sooner or later.

If you don't want to rush into the street, don't be a pig and eat a tiger.

The protagonist, a small six-level Foundation Builder, first used the prototype of the power of Chaos, and then a wisp of the Power of Creation, in a battle with an opponent who was equivalent to the peak of the Foundation Builder. The opponent is even more exaggerated. All things will end and chaos will resume. Is your foundation building so valuable?

The writing at the end is too cliche. I am also constipated and like to get stuck in chapters. I can't feel happy at all.

To be honest, I was attracted to Qingmei. Whether it was chasing her husband in the crematorium or slapping him in the face until the end, in general I was attracted by the tendency of the villain to slap the protagonist in the face. However, this plot was completely an ordinary cheating practice, practice and practice. All I wanted to watch was a small early stage plot, and then it disappeared.

It is so difficult for top plug-in geniuses to build a foundation and consumes so many resources. What can be done with the Golden Elixir Nascent Soul in the future? The foundation building requires level 4 materials, the golden elixir does not require level 6 materials, and the Nascent Soul does not need to reach the fairy world.

Compress eight high-grade spiritual stones six times and compress nine times 120 high-grade spiritual stones. Wouldn't that be at least 1,800 coins 12 times? Some novels of Shangpin Lingshi are worth one to ten thousand. It is equivalent to the eldest brother starting with 18 million spiritual stones to build the foundation. What I hate the most is the fear that the pig's feet will be too invincible and start to require resources one at a time in order to level up a small level. With this kind of money, I should at least have the Golden Core Nascent Soul. Can't I just focus on one person's combat power? Let's look again, I hope I won't die from poison

What can I say about this book? So far, I don't think it has any bad points. But the writing and dialogue are too traditional and retro, making it difficult to relate to them. This style is more suitable for traditional fantasy and traditional immortality, a bit like the style in the early days of online writing. Nowadays, the writing and dialogue of online articles have been modernized. All kinds of memes, complaints, and jokes are readily available on the Internet. The main thing is to have a relaxed and down-to-earth atmosphere. Give me an example. Like the opening scene where the protagonist and his good friends were having a fight, and were sneak attacked by their good friends. At this time, the protagonist's modern dialogue should be like this: Okay, okay, I didn't expect that you, a thick-browed and big-eyed boy, would not follow martial ethics and sneak up on me, an eighteen-year-old comrade. I advise you young people to waste their tail juice. The summary is that the author's writing is too serious and serious.

I don't want to read even a single chapter of this mysterious world.

The plot in the early stage is really discouraging to me. Why does Han Feng, the "male protagonist", have to write the tea with tea? Can't you just write a shrewd calculation? Not to mention Xu Ji's nameless anger in the early stage. Is that a plot correction? I have to write this conflict between Situ and the male protagonist, right? And write Situ so rz, Han Feng Just chatting over tea can sow discord between two people. Don't you advocate that second-generation people also have high vision? Then Han Feng is not just an investment target? Besides, Situ hasn't tested him in half a year? Just this training match, I feel that Han Feng's fighting talent is incredible? Before we co-authored the book, we didn't practice together in half a year, right?

Did the author have a childhood sweetheart that he didn't lick, so he arranged one for the protagonist?

I'm a bit disappointed. The early writing was pretty good, but the later adventure of fighting monsters was not very good. It was mediocre, and there was no explosion after it was released. 😭

The lower ruins are a bit of a stretch. When his father went on a long-term mission, it was impossible not to leave behind the resources and techniques that would be needed later.

Where's Qingmei? To be honest, I'm here to see Qingmei.

What nonsense is written? You, a fourth-level Qi practitioner, think about this and that every day. What kind of son of fate, the mastermind behind the scenes, does it have anything to do with you? What the hell are you worrying about all day long, even if you find out about it? Killing someone with one punch on the fourth level of Qi training? It's all a bunch of nonsense, the fights are also described as fighting, pretending to be a pig, eating a tiger, and playing hooks are slow and slow, hahaha, fighting is normal.