The Silver Dragon's Evolution

It's chilling to think about. In D&D, mages all have very high intelligence stats, and the female protagonist of this book is a genius among mages, learning everything quickly. Why would someone raised in a slave background act so foolish in front of the protagonist? So cunning!

With writing skills like this, you're a newbie? How could that be? It's too polished. Honestly, tell me what you've written before.

Does the author have any plans to kill off the little girl and let the protagonist inherit the magical talent and the eyes?

Your dragon seems so weak! Other people's dragons are natural disasters! Yours is just a giant flying lizard that spews all sorts of things! It's so unimpressive!

That's right, it's me, Otto Apocalypse!

So they've finally stopped focusing on the development of the five-colored dragons and started targeting the metal dragons?

The main character disappears for several pages at a time, making their presence too weak; I suggest the author limit any chapter without a main character to more than one chapter. Otherwise, it's pretty good.

The biggest mistake was that it could have been a good upgrade (and easy to write). However, it tries to pull off a conspiracy plot (which is riddled with holes and I really want to complain).

Seeing this introduction reminded me of the "Classic of Mountains and Seas".

I think the author made a mistake. In the last 10 or so chapters, the protagonist, Silver Dragon, is almost entirely absent... The previous section about the boarmen was too drawn out. I feel it didn't need to be so detailed; just describing the successful ambush and capture of prisoners would have sufficed.