Former School Master

The basic framework of the book is very eye-catching, and the previous chapters are also good. The system flow adds Cthulhu and Xuebawen, and there is a hint of steady flow. There are some well-written jokes, such as the setting of Ice Muscle Jade Bone Kung Fu, which is very interesting to watch. But later I saw that after I entered college, it became a mediocre pretentious and slap-in-the-face story. The plot was basically just non-stop pretense and slap-in-the-face, and the routines were all familiar. Every female character who appeared was stunningly beautiful... The author needed to improve some details, but it always felt like it was a bit lacking in taste. Still continuing to chase, come on!

Personally, I feel like this book gets worse towards the end. ① It was originally established as a system for humans to resist demons. However, several main storylines in a row showed that human beings had no resistance. The entire county capital of Zenith City was wiped out at once, and then another city was changed. As a result, human beings were like weak chickens, as if without the male protagonist, they would be wiped out immediately. ②The distortion in the book setting is that when exposed to mysterious existences, whispers will appear, causing biological mutations. As a result, human immunity will become distorted at every turn, just like HIV. The demon seems to be immune to distortion and can use this evil god at any time and any evil god at any time. Why is it so mysterious that it can also distinguish between camps? It also emphasizes that the resistance is very high. If the resistance is very high, the evil god can be played with, right? ③Think about it carefully. The demon side has the blessing of the gods and is not afraid of distortion. The demon side has no traitors but has two or five people in the human race. The demon side also has rune technology. The demon side can't stand all kinds of heavy casualties when it casually messes with the human empire. The demon captives are still so brave. Let me ask who is the protagonist.

Hmm... I think this book is a bit nondescript. Your academic system is obviously not compatible with the funny style. The academic system is too routine and boring. It is said to be written in a light-hearted way, but the article still seems too serious. The whole world of this book is very dangerous and makes people unhappy. I personally think that the system can be made less rigid and more ridiculous, and then the protagonist can complain and make people laugh (ps: The system itself is terrible. If you want to write a mindless and exciting article, you shouldn't use a scary world view like Cthulhu. I can't figure it out.( ´ﾟωﾟ)? It's enough to be a little more special after time travel... I'm just saying this, I'm so stupid, please don't scold me, don't scold me, don't scold me, please ask me three times for important things 🥺

The biggest poisonous point in this article is that the author forgets the previous article too easily 😅

The subject matter is brand new, and it feels like a new genre has emerged.

Author, do you think two updates a day are a bit too little? 😁 It wouldn't be interesting if I didn't get a 10.

The author's mathematical logic is quite poor

The only book that I don't feel poisonous or embarrassed at all when I read it now! Super praise! ! !

A lot of ambiguous women, harem stallions?

It's a pity if no one reads a good book.

Well written, worth reading, recommended. Come on

Come on, this client is getting harder and harder to use as it changes.

The main character's foundation for survival is the system, and he suddenly breaks away from the path of becoming stronger in the system. He has to rely on himself step by step to get through it, and he relies entirely on the help of the system to survive and become stronger. The plot is a bit awkward. Personally, I feel that the focus has shifted to exploring system functions + hard training + adventures, adventures, puzzles, historical truth + combat power. I personally think this is more coordinated.

Chapter 130 could be called a very good book before, but in Chapter 130 I was poisoned and died directly from the poison!

Advantages: The world view is very good, and the plot of the first 100 chapters is quite good. It can be said to be a very fine product! Disadvantages: The main line is vague, a hodgepodge of multiple systems, IQ drops from time to time, there is no climax plot in the middle and late stages, and the upgrade is very slow. In general, it is a pity, a very pity. As far as I am concerned, the initial impression is much better than that of "Lord of Mysteries", and I thought I could see the book become a god. As a result, the plot that was about to be released began to plummet.

I don't understand why women are always used to set off the male protagonists. Please be considerate of female readers. When I read the portrayal of women in the novel, I wanted to blow their heads off.

The saying "knowledge is power" is not just a saying. The protagonist is obviously stable and likes to research, and he also has the best research auxiliary device such as the Academic Master Space. As a result, he is wandering around every day. The author arranged many adventures, but it turns out that they are useless and useless. Going to a martial arts school obviously makes you safer, but you don't supplement your knowledge. Entering a graduate school, you practice martial arts every day to improve your energy and blood. It is obvious that human beings have little knowledge of occult knowledge, which is why so many people are deformed. The protagonist is obviously aware of this problem and has research aids, but does not use them.

Come on, author, don't be a eunuch. It's best to save more manuscripts during the new book period. Come on, come on (ง •̀o•́)ง (ง •̀o•́)ง

You can change your name. In the past, you were just a walk-on. He was always on the go and triggering events. He didn't have time to study. He clearly said that he was a safe route. I think the protagonist said the most cowardly words and died in the most urgent way.

The writing of Black Moon Mimetic World is broken, the power system "jumps left and right", and the ending plot is difficult to describe in a word. Well, let's talk about it if this book can be written to more than 1,000 chapters.

There are indeed remarkable things about this book. What moved me the most was the love between Wu Song and Diao Chan. In order to save Wang Mang, Zhang Fei turned against his sworn brother, the Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun. Especially when I read that Guo Jing gave up his position as the leader of the Sun Moon God Sect and wandered around the world with Junzi Jian, I burst into tears.

It's uncomfortable, but it looked fine from the beginning. From the beginning of more than one hundred chapters, the IQs of all the characters plummeted. Especially before the release of chapter 130, the protagonist was given a fatal blow to his intelligence and persuaded countless people. The author was very cruel to himself 😰

The front part looks pretty good, but what is all this in the back part? Does it have anything to do with the word "student master" in the back part? I'm convinced. The back part just contains all kinds of adventures and a lot of bad words. The level is too high, it's really alas!

The civilian protagonist encounters the sequence BOSS. The protagonist "can't beat it." The system "is invincible for a limited time. Take it and get a reward." The young man who succeeded in meeting the Nth BOSS met the protagonist. The protagonist "can't beat him." The system "takes the invincible potion and gives you a reward." The future protagonist meets the evil god. The protagonist "Fight..." The system "Invincible skills, take them and give you rewards." The protagonist "I want to say that I have beaten him!!" In the end, the protagonist discovered that the system was his long-lost parents! !

It took more than 600 chapters to get promoted to Sequence 7. I'm also drunk. Isn't this the same as a superdimensional warlock? It took more than 1,000 chapters to reach level 1 😅😅😅😅

How can I put it this way? I read Occultism, and the title of the book gave me the feeling that it was mainly about old-time Occultism. Most of what you wrote in it was about martial arts. I'm convinced. Goodbye.

The world view is getting bigger and bigger, and more and more settings are given. However, the protagonist is still so weak, and the major forces are so ridiculous. So much writing and ink is spent, but it is of no use when something happens. Every time the protagonist is assassinated, forget it, it is twice.

I just finished reading Chapter 100, and I was disgusted after the scene-stealing plot was introduced. Overall, it opens high and goes low. There are too many main and branch lines. The author obviously cannot grasp the rhythm. It's a pity.

When something happens, I always want to try it myself first. It has nothing to do with the character of the top student in the past. If it weren't for the big boss behind me, I would have been killed many times. The reason why I don't die is because I am the "protagonist"

It starts high and goes low, and the writing style is very different. The first part focuses on the academic system to increase knowledge points, but the later part basically never uses the system to slap people in the face and fight. It has a feeling of urban cool writing. It must have been replaced.