The Mysterious and Chaotic World: Starting from Blacksmithing to Gain Experience Points

Recently, starting point, the author can write any kind of evil, any subject matter, and any kind of plug-in into mainstream sadistic novels.

The pig's trotters couldn't bear to part with the modern body, so they directly traveled through time and space physically, chaos! Why aren't you trying to bully the world? After all, is it reasonable to be so weak after having such an amazing physical experience?

Blacksmithing Plane🤭

Abuse article, the more I read it, the more disgusting it becomes.

It was a good watch at first, but I didn't want to watch it anymore after the strange scene came out

The most disgusting thing is the one who tortures the protagonist

I just want to watch people pounding the iron all the time, why is it so complicated?

It's come and gone, it's average, and the character dialogue is like NPC, but there's nothing poisonous about it, it can be used as food and fodder.

The protagonist is too stupid, especially one with this weird style. He doesn't run away from danger but still wanders around. He is just the protagonist. Without the halo of the protagonist, he still has less wandering. There is absolutely no need to follow the complicated plot, which can easily cause visual fatigue. If the protagonist's character description does not adapt to the world, then there will be no future. It is the people who adapt rather than the world revolving around the protagonist that will not be toxic. The biggest development of these panels is to be consistent. Diligent is born to be obsessive. There is a book of the same type that is very consistent. Those trivial matters are discarded and dedicated to panel Diligent, leaving interesting points. Of course, the rest depends on whether the author's imagination can be expanded logically. This kind of expansion can be expanded as long as there is imagination.

It's so well written. Play with those imaginary things in a four-dimensional world, or even a five- or six-dimensional world, treat old monsters as fools, and others will know what you are thinking in a second. It is indeed a good article.

Weird flow? Grammatical system? Hit your head?

The subject matter and concept are quite good. I haven't seen many similar ones. It is fresh and attractive to me, so although there are some minor problems, I can still watch it. Let's talk about a few things that feel problematic. First, I write not too seriously, or in a hurry, and there are often places where the context does not correspond. Second, there is too little foreshadowing. The forging master, Taoist Xuan Qing, and the traitorous shop owner all seemed to be very good and decent people in the previous article. They were all reversed in the later period. Maybe the author wanted the reversal effect, but the turn was too hard and caught him off guard. Third, the rhythm is too scattered. I almost couldn't watch it a few times. I need to find a way to connect the emotions and the plot and refine it. Don't change scenes easily, change mini-maps, open strange places, and it is like this when I was photographed in Colorful Town. The originally coherent plot is broken, and it is easy for people to not watch it. The world of Alien Soldiers is already exciting enough, and there is really no need to learn the setting of secret corners. Fourth, change your name. Your name is too vulgar and vulgar. It is completely incompatible with the interest of the world system of Yibing. It is no different from the system flow of Qidian Street There is no big problem. The author should work hard to hone his writing.

I'm so panicked when you don't put it on the shelves. I'm so afraid that you're a bad eunuch🤐🤐

What's going on? You've opened a new book?

I haven't read the book yet, but it's a genre that I quite like. I'm going to add the last book you wrote two years ago to my bookshelf. I hope it won't be called Eunuch.

If you don't do it for yourself, heaven and earth will destroy you. The word "wei" in it is not four but two. It refers to cultivating yourself and improving yourself. Stop making jokes. This sentence is not a fig leaf for selfishness!