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I saw the first few pictures, they are all poisonous and I can't stand them anymore I won't accept any refutation, thank you.

In a book where the main character's name is not based on the background, why isn't your name Uchiha Aotian?

I didn't read it too carefully before. When I saw the new chapter, someone said, "Although there are some logical illogicalities at the beginning, it's really fun to read." I wanted to ask him about the illogical logic at the beginning, but I thought about it again and read it again. It's not too late and I don't want to bring bad luck to the author. I re-read it, and I personally feel that most of the plot problems are not big, but Chapters 14 and 15... Danzo sent people to kill the protagonist, and wanted to blame Uchiha. He led people directly in front of Ichiraku Ramen and Naruto, and then cleared the area along the way (I think Danzo does not have the ability to directly clear the entire village without going through three generations), or on the main street. The chapter title of Chapter 14 is: This Danzo is really stable... This operation... Stable? Are you really not considering Tsunade returning to the village? Not to mention that the protagonist has already said Danzo's name in Ichiraku Ramen. The operation itself is no different from clearly saying that the one who wants to kill the protagonist is the Hokage. Moreover, in the eyes of most people, the relationship between the protagonist and the third generation is relatively good. This basically... Forget it, let's not talk about it. The logic of these two chapters does not make sense and cannot be refuted. Just reading these two chapters, I almost thought that this was Zai Fei, a brainless black Danzo, speaking of wisdom* as sound... Oh, but the author's writing in these chapters is not bad. Come on, author

This novel feels like a mindless novel to me. I gave up after seeing the main character getting a Byakugan. If a Senju gets a Byakugan, will he explain his genetic mutation when fighting in the future? Or did he save the Hyuga family and give them away? There is no logic (personal opinion)

How can I put it this way? There are a lot of poisonous points. After reading ten chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The author's logic makes no sense at all. There are too many pretense and slap-in-the-face plots.

Don't just suck in a breath of air when it's okay. You kept sucking it in during this fight. It reminded me of the novel "The Three Young Masters of the Tang Family" I read ten years ago.

This is the best novel I have ever read. Please update it soon. I finished reading this novel last night.

I feel like this book has no heroine, no passion, no excitement.

What is this, what support does the author have to finish writing it? How does this thing achieve results? Spend money! Extremely poisonous!

It's really fun to read cool articles, but if you want to be more serious... I won't be able to stand it when I go to other worlds later.

Has the evil spirit revived the eunuch?😰

"I understand the philosophy of the Nidaime better than Sarutobi. Your Wood Release will return Konoha to the glory of the first generation, and the revenge of the Nidaime should be returned." Xu Fan chuckled: "Sir, Danzo, you really respect your teacher, and for revenge, you don't even care about the death of your subordinates." "Everything is for Konoha." Danzo looked like he could sacrifice his life for the country at any time. Seeing Danzo's face, Xu Fan decided to have some fun with him. "Oh, after revenge, what happens next?" "You mean to agree to join forces with me?" A trace of doubt flashed in Danzo's eyes, but he raised another question. "Sarutobi Hiruzen is old, and he actually relies on the people of Konoha to die in exchange for peace. Konoha has fallen to this!" Danzo: "..." "The descendants of the hero actually need to change their surnames to protect themselves "It's ridiculous!" Danzo: "..." "It's sad that White Fang's sword was broken by someone from Konoha!" Danzo: "..." (Sarutobi Hiruzen is pleased to be crowned the Pot King, and next, the old Pot King Danzo is inflamed  Danzo: At that time, Sarutobi wanted to snatch the title of Pot King from me, but I actually refused, but... Well, we are old friends after all, can he not give it to me if he wants it, hahahahaha) "Although you have gone astray, at least you still remember the glory of Konoha." A glimmer of understanding flashed in Danzo's eyes, and at the same time he identified Xu Fan as a dangerous person. "But you and I are not joining forces, but cooperating." "Cooperation?" "At seven o'clock in the evening, the Thousand Hands Clan will talk in detail, and you will be alone." "The Thousand Hands Clan..." "Yes, the first clan." "Okay! " ……………………Seven o'clock………… "He actually came, but it's really impossible to be a person, but he didn't come in, so just treat him as a person, let me think about what to do next. " Xu Fan's temples had veins popping out, and he looked outside the clan and said to himself. "You're coming." "I'm coming." "You shouldn't have come." Danzo: "???" "Ha, just kidding, let's lighten the mood. Have you figured out how to cooperate?" "It depends on what Mr. Xu Fan thinks." "..." Xu Fan thought to himself, where does this Danzo come from? He actually calls others adults. Danzo saw that Xu Fanxin had no reaction, and felt happy for once. The child was indeed still young, and he was so proud after calling him an adult. He should wait a while... "Ahem, Danzo-sama, if you don't worry, please talk about it first. After all, it is a good idea." "I think Lord Xu Fan can take a look at my right eye before cooperating." "Please start your performance." Danzo kept telling himself in his heart that after a while, the other gods would activate to make Xu Fan look better, and removed the bandage wrapped around his right eye. "Tsk, tsk, Sharingan, Danzo, you are indeed on the wrong path." "Bye God!" "Sharingan illusion, Danzo, have you forgotten my last name?" Xu Fan looked at Danzo with a smile on his face, thinking to himself I was almost killed by this ** show, but fortunately I have a high skill (magic) and a (free) chip (epidemic) "How could it be?" "Fortunately, you are still Lord Tobirama's disciple. You are really stupid. What use do you have?" Xu Fan's smile became dangerous. "Sir Xu Fan, I just want to help Mr. Tobirama test your illusion resistance." Danzo began his explanation "It turns out that Mr. Danzo was testing." Xu Fan seemed to suddenly realize. "Yes, this is a test. Ninjas should develop in an all-round way. You are Lord Tobirama's disciple, so you shouldn't have too obvious shortcomings." Danzo said in a deep voice, as if he was doing it for Xu Fan's good. "That's it, then let me test you too!" As Xu Fan said, he took off Danzo's right hand and right eye. "You are really disgusting, Lord Danzo." Xu Fan looked at his hands and eyes. "Ah!" "Shh, don't speak too loudly." Xu Fan put his index finger between his mouth with a gentle look on his face. Danzo stopped in response. "That's right, Lord Danzo, how do you usually give orders to your roots?" Xu Fan created a wooden clone and turned into Danzo's appearance, with a kind face. Danzo looked at the clone that looked the same as him in shock. "It would be better for Danzo-sama to be good." Xu Fan was like coaxing a child, speaking the gentlest words in the gentlest tone. "Xu Fan, are you going to betray Konoha!" "It's really humorous that Danzo-sama is still saying such boring things at this time." Xu Fan made a happy sound and waved his hands. ification

Shen Nong couldn't bear it anymore and persisted for more than ten chapters. Let me talk about the poisonous points that I feel are more poisonous. First of all, the protagonist's name is a bit ridiculous, called Xu Fan, Senju Xu, and then the protagonist is an ordinary person. He can actually sneak out of the village. Even if Konoha is weak, it is one of the five major countries. How can it not be discovered by even an ordinary person? ? ? And the protagonist went to a ninja school at the age of thirteen. Can you believe it? Others graduated at the age of twelve, but he went to ninja school at the age of thirteen, just like you have entered the society and you are going to college again (not to mention that in order to complete the task or become a ninja, he can even sneak out of the village, but he can't sneak into a ninja school? He belongs to the Senju clan and becomes a ninja, right? Is it such a simple thing? He is so strong, tell the third generation, he will definitely become a genin), and his timeline in the end is also very confusing. He just saved Hinata, and then ran to study with the prince and the others (Hinata was only three or four years old when he was captured). The author didn't even check the information and came to write about Naruto. I was also drunk.

That's how it should be, let's continue to be invincible and rewrite the fate of every character who makes us regretful!

I was relieved to see so many Shen Nong being poisoned to death. Fortunately, I reacted quickly. I read the introduction and stopped reading. I really thought that the names of Japanese people were chosen casually, and they almost made me laugh to death. The introduction is really more poisonous than cold words. Farewell!

The author's inspiration is limited, but the reader's inspiration is unlimited! If you have any good ideas, please leave a message!

I invested a lot, although I don't want more refinement.

While telling everyone, I want to remind you that I am a mortal, and tell everyone that my name is no longer Qian Hand Xu, my name is Xu Fan. . . . Then why don't you just call me Qianjufan, emmmmm, do you want to tell everyone that I am patriotic, or that I want to always remember my previous life? . . Is it necessary? To write a Japanese comic fanfic, you have to have a Chinese name. . Pretentious

The timeline is so messed up. Hinata was only two or three years old when she was captured. You are almost ten years older than Hinata. Sasuke, Naruto and Hinata are all in the same year. Itachi is five years older than Sasuke, and Shisui is three to five years older than Itachi. The male protagonist is almost older than Shisui, only one or two years older than Anko. At such an age, do you still have to be in the same class as Naruto and Sasuke? Or is he a student of Iruka who is about the same age as him?

Just being a dog to Sarutobi Hiruzen is extremely poisonous. Warning of the risk of highly toxic poisons, please protect yours👀.

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I saw Chapter 3. Death from poison. First, Konoha Village is very big. There is only one gate at the exit, and everything else has barriers. Go out after a few hours of detour? Second, as far as several ninja wars are concerned, Konoha is about 2 days away from the nearest border. This is the world of ninjas on the go. How come you feel like you're a normal human being and you're the main character all at once? Thirdly, was it not the right time for Kumogakure to grab Hinata? Fourth, obtain Hashirama Cells and Chakra Burst. It doesn't count if Hashirama Cells are solved according to your system. Will your Chakra Burst scare the elite Jonin on the other side and feel fear? What you got was not Hashirama's cells, but Hashirama's reincarnation? Fifth, after rescuing Hinata and returning to the village, I couldn't see Hizu on the way? He sneaked into the village again and placed it at the door of the hospital. Sixth, the most stupid thing is here. The protagonist returns to the village, and Rizu rushes to the battlefield. While everyone is searching for clues, Hizashi runs over from the village and tells Rizu: Your daughter was rescued in the hospital? I understand, Hizashi can fly Thunder God. Write a book well. When writing a fanfic, at least check some information? Just write like this and just pay for the manuscript? I poisoned myself. Everyone, that's all. I don't know if I should delete it. Farewell

Just say it briefly. The protagonist's name is Xu Fan. I just can't figure out why so many people who have traveled to the second dimension insist on using Chinese names. Super inconsistent.

Play a game of Solitaire and prove in one sentence that you have watched Naruto. I will go first. I, Madara Uchiha, would like to call you the strongest!

A trash kid who has not yet entered the ninja school sneaked out of the alert Konoha, and also rescued Hinata from the Kumo ninja jounin. Don't talk about the three golden chapters, the author persuaded me to quit in the second page of three pages of black shit, the author needs to be better

It was so poisonous to me that I couldn't hold on for two or three chapters. I could barely hold on until a group of elite jounin couldn't catch up. I couldn't kill an ordinary pig's foot of twelve or thirteen years old. I want to know, why are the elite jounin in the Naruto world so rubbish? As a Kumo ninja, his speed is top-notch in the ninja world and he cannot catch up with ordinary people. The precise kunai technique he trained brutally also fails when facing ordinary people. No matter how hard he shoots, he can't hit an ordinary person. In short, there are so many shortcomings that I don't know where to start. At least be serious and think about the logic!

It's really poisonous. After reading 30 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

Uchiha Itachi traveled through Douluo, opened the Sharingan, awakened the three artifacts, killed Xiao Wu and all the female characters, used Xiao Wu to deceive Tang San, and forced Tang San to commit suicide. Book title: The God of Uchiha Itachi of Douluo, click in to read it. Naruto's mother and Konan are also in Douluo, and all members of the Akatsuki organization are resurrected.

Yes, it's a very good book in my opinion. I didn't read it without reading a few words. You successfully attracted me into it. Let me explain in advance that I didn't read the comments, so I don't know whether it is good or bad in the eyes of others. Come on, author

The protagonist Qianju Xu, what a strange name is this. Even if he was called Xu Fan in his previous life, if he changed his name, it would not be a combination of the two surnames. After all, his surname would still be Qianju Mingfan. Even if he is called Qianju mortal, it would be better than this name