Simultaneous Time Travel: Starting from American Comics and Standing in the Heavens

Running account. It's uncomfortable for those who listen

Doesn't Marvel's magic borrow a loan from the Devil? How does the protagonist use magic when he only has a hanging ring?

It's this kind of golden finger again, and all the mentally retarded plots immediately force the protagonist to reveal various abilities.

The author has not synchronized to QQ reading

The setting of this garbage book is not rigorous at all. You should first figure out what magic is in the Marvel world, and then write about it. What the hell is this? It's awesome when I get Genkai. I can read power immediately. It's so awesome. I couldn't survive even three chapters and died from the poison.

In recent months, a large number of novels have been published. I have read them all, but I have not followed them all to the latest chapters. The author of this book may need to cut the book now. I will discuss the current status of this type of literature with other books. In fact, it's not just about the universe, but also astronomical novels, fan fiction, invincible novels, and behind-the-scenes novels. These are the online novels that I have read more in recent years. In the past two years, there have been a lot of new authors, studios, and smart book writing. Neither bragging nor slander, the latter two are just making money, there is nothing much to say about this. I don't want to talk about them either, everyone knows why. It's boring to talk too much. Let's talk about the current status of 99% of authors at the starting point. Generating electricity for love does not count, nor do mainstream celebrities. The former generally does not put books on the shelves and is purely written for fun. The author does not care whether it looks good or not. The latter is already a stable job and has cultural foundation. Some of them have even written short and medium-sized novels or stories that have been published in magazines before, but of course not all of them are like this. Writing online articles is just work for these great gods. There are also some representative online articles that the great gods redeem from simplicity. But it is undeniable that people put in a lot of effort when writing books. Rhetoric, story concept organization. The arrangement of characters is all a lot of thought. For example, novels such as the full-time thriller Ye Hei Xiao Huohuo (there are many more examples) have one thing in common. There are no bloody plots in the plot (that is, plots that are particularly unreasonable or unreasonable if you think about it). The character descriptions are soulful and have distinct personalities. No matter who the supporting characters in the four books I gave examples are, people who have read the novels will basically remember them, and can even remember the character of this supporting character. And now, 99% of these online writers write stories that are bloody and unreasonable. This is what readers often call poisoning. Either the main characters and the supporting characters are all unified, they are all female characters A and B, and a group of A and B talk to each other and add names. Recently, a new way of writing has appeared. It's a conversation between a and a, or a and b. Then the author himself narrates and explains. Why do I say this? I will explain it to you from the current situation to the background of the characters. Make the conversation feel reasonable to the reader. To put it nicely, this is stacking armor for yourself, or it can be said to be the number of words in water. To put it mildly, it means that the author himself is not confident and feels that his writing is not good. They also have to crazily force words into the readers' minds. One chapter is updated every day, one chapter has more than ten pages, one sentence is correct, and two or three pages are explaining this dialogue. The plot doesn't advance at all. It took about ten days to write, and I finally pushed forward a plot, the description of the battle or the climax of the plot. It took such a long time to prepare for it, and then I finished it in a few sentences. What a slap, a thunder and a fire, the enemy is dead. Drive high and go low, thunder is heavy and rain is light. It's so cool that readers can't see it, but you still want them to buy it. I read what the author said about his family situation in this novel, and I sympathized with him. But that's human nature. But sympathy for you can't make others pay. If you don't subscribe enough, you still can't write well. But I still have to say it. This year's same article. Just read the previous chapters. You write well. I'm going to make a comparison here, and I'm talking about the comparison with Chuanwen inside this year. Because this year, the writing on the same clothes is not very good. I fired up the map cannon. If you don't believe me, check it out for yourself. I've seen them all once. Some have read two to three hundred chapters and some have read seventy or eighty chapters. I didn't read it later because I felt that the writing was sorry for my wallet. In the words of Yang Xiu of the Three Kingdoms, it was useless. It's a pity to throw away tasteless food. That's my personal suggestion. It's free to watch, no need to spend money. Because I wrote that I was sorry for the money. I once saw that authors who wrote well at the beginning would leave some book review suggestions to the author later. There are two situations when I encounter it. I read my book review and listened to it, and then responded with a good attitude, but I don't want to change it. What I'm talking about here is not changing the work according to my wishes, but not changing the problem, such as the slap in the previous battle description. People just don't change. That's what I wanted to write. There is also a situation where the book review is deleted or no reply is given to me. Then, everyone knows the results. Even if their grades are worse, they can earn first place. The great master never writes fanfiction and astronomy because it involves the copyright of adaptation. Fans and gods are unable to talk about movies and anime. If you make little money, naturally there will be no great writers, and I don't expect the current group of authors to write masterpieces. The simplest thing is to read the original work and check the information before writing. The plot is well organized and the characters fit the original work. Take Marvel as an example. You can imagine that when Black Widow meets the protagonist twice, she can say to Lu Dan, "I believe he is a good person and he will not do anything that harms XXX." Yes, I have only seen the plot. I don't know which author has watched the Marvel movies. The requirements for writing fan fiction and heavenly texts are much simpler than original texts. At this level, I can't even give you a soulful character template, let alone write original texts. Nowadays, Internet article authors don't think about why the results are not good. The original characters have no soul and the plot is poisonous. It's cool to have thunderstorms and light rain, but there are still headline-grabbing parties selling dog meat over sheep's heads. This has become a common problem among these authors. I don't want to read more of the original work to understand the character relationships and background stories, and I don't want to improve my writing skills. To embellish the plot and fight scenes. I don't even want to come up with a fun plot. Then he said his grades were not good. I think there may be too few fools in the world who are doing their best to make money. It may sound ugly. But it is the truth. Lies are not sharp swords, but the truth is the sharp knife. To say so much is just to show my anger. The novels I have read recently are really hard to describe in one sentence. Most of these are the issues I mentioned. I guess I'm not the only one feeling this way. The new batch of writers are as extreme as LoL's Yasuo, either 0-11 or 11-0. There are a few veteran authors who write well, but I don't see any new authors who are outstanding. The previous book written by Invincible Liujia Zhutianliu has been completed. I have read his new book. It may be a short-lived flash in the pan. The new book is so different. 😮‍💨 I never attack people when I leave book reviews, I only discuss the works as they stand. The author of this book has encountered difficulties in reality. Let me give you a suggestion: give up writing the book and do something else. Let's talk about it after we get through this hurdle. Because based on your current writing, I can clearly say that if you don't get popular, it's not a blow to you. The truth always hurts. It's impossible for any reader to know that your writing is not good and still pay money to read it just because of your actual situation. I might as well make a charity donation to you. If you want to write about this kind of astronomy, I suggest you read more original works and analyze the characters' personalities before writing. Not everyone is Tang San, who can make bloody dramas popular, and Tang San also reaped the dividends of the times. There's no way around it now. Come on, everything will be fine.

When I saw the introduction of the adventurer protagonist in the introduction, I was not in the mood to read it.

I got poisoned and died just after reading the introduction. It's a bit crazy to criticize me for not understanding the values ​​​​of ordinary people.

On Zhihu, if you call me to fight, I won't find fault with you, but at the starting point, what do you have to call me?

The accumulation of tens of millions of words feels useless to you. It's easy for rz to watch. Let's not talk about the plot, and the writing style is even worse...

You can tell what level the author is by reading the introduction.

Marvel Magic, the worst possible start

Invest one by one so quickly. Just saw the results today and 13 people invested. 😅😡.

Good guy, after reading hundreds of answers from the author, I finally know about the Tutu vest.

When I saw the episode about Wan Hao, I knew I had to watch it 😜

I'm really speechless, I was so decisive before. As a result, two mages knocked on the door. One of them insisted on killing the protagonist and even let them run away.

The good-looking heroine of lol is Tongtong Supermarket. The female character of DNF and the female NPC are also Tongtong Supermarket🥵🥵🥵

Tutu Tutu, I grew up reading your inspirational stories. Now it's No. 1 On Qidian's new book list. Come and see me 😫

Coming from Zhihu, Tutu is also a level 4 author who has written excellent works. Why is this book so disappointing?

Pay attention first and wait and see. I want to see what a second-hand BYD looks like

Come on, I believe you can get through it👍👍