One Piece: Almost Exposed That I Am Stronger Than Roger

Why don't you just write it as an invincible article? What an embarrassing group to watch

How about hiding it until the ending? It will definitely be fun.

Anyway, I had a great time watching it. I can keep watching it if I don't write too much.

This book looks very awkward. The protagonist is shouting Gou while showing off his strength. I am very fascinated. What is even more fascinating is that this kind of character can actually emit overlord domineering energy. What is the prerequisite for overlord color domineering energy? Can such a character have such an incredible aura? Not to mention the system ability. The settings are in conflict, right?

I really want to be quiet and just stay in Rogge Town and be an ordinary citizen, or find an uninhabited island and hide from pirates, so that 3 months can pass easily. As soon as you join the pirates, you will have to practice and capture the pirates. Sooner or later, you will be exposed, so the choice you made at the beginning was wrong.

How many chapters are there in 9 chapters? What's the use of so many inner thoughts? Have you ever seen the strong man in One Piece being afraid of another strong man? Are you kidding me?

Writing a pirate book almost exposed the author's lack of IQ

It's almost as good as a mentally retarded person

This book is so embarrassing. It opens the door to embarrassment. It's so embarrassing.

I rarely criticize the author. I think everyone will have their own growth process. Don't deny him directly. You can give him some suggestions to make him better. But as an author, I hope you find a class.

This bird book is finally finished! What the hell are you writing! I have been following this book just to find out how rubbish it can be. I have learned a lot. There is no worst rubbish, only more rubbish.

Press my IQ on the ground and rub it like crazy!

This is the most trashy novel I have ever seen among all the One Piece novels. It made me want to vomit and was so poisonous that I could die 😰

Basically all the titles of the books are: I Have Infinite Attribute Points, Skills, Invincibility, Gou, etc., And 10,000% of them are phony books!

The subject matter and the setting of the protagonist are really in line with my taste. I also think that the naval physique is quite good, but the writing is too poor, the routine is too serious, and the character description is not good. For example, it has been half a minute to a minute since the dragon released his domineering energy. People around him fell down one after another. The protagonist forced himself to wander and pushed forward. It was really embarrassing. You said I can accept it in about ten seconds. In addition, every time the dragon releases his domineering energy, the corners of his mouth will rise? Isn't this description intended to highlight the protagonist's ability to survive? But does it need to stand out like this? It feels so awkward. In the end, I felt that the character and the prototype were not consistent. When I saw the chapter title of Dragon running away, I couldn't bear to run away. In general, I like the subject matter very much, but the description is not good. It feels like a different person pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, which is very embarrassing.

Well, maybe the author has misunderstood the word "gou" 😊

I've read a dozen chapters and let me know what I think. 1. Your subject matter is actually good, but like many of Gou's novels, Gou is actually looking for trouble on his own. 2. The collective wisdom of the characters. Take Luffy for example, who is usually laughing and joking, but knows very well at critical moments. When he is running away, he hits you just because you dodge his attack and can't run away? ? ? 3. The character description is very embarrassing. A top strongman like Long breaks out in cold sweats and is nervous at every turn. How can you describe the courage of One Piece's most outstanding strongman like this? ? ? I haven't read it since, and I don't know if it will be better written later.

You're so pretentious, and you're so quick to change your mind. If you just pretend to be dead, it's over. If you get punched and it doesn't hurt, why do you need face? If you want face to go to the New World and punch the Yonko, then when you return to the Navy Headquarters and kick the general, won't it give you face?

I have read more than thirty chapters, and I don't have any other ideas. This book would have been very interesting to me when I was fifteen or sixteen years old (I am twenty-one), but now, this is it?

It is recommended that the author find a job, writing is not suitable for you

It's extremely poisonous and will definitely make you poisonous within three chapters.

This book is called "One Piece, the Strength of the Four Emperors Revealed in Three Chapters" It has zero IQ and zero perception.

You can probably guess the plot when you see the name. It's absolutely disgusting. I checked the comment section and it turns out it's still poisonous.

Emmm, Pig's Foot seems to have traveled here just to allow the world government to continue to rule the world. Does he seem to have changed something? It seems like nothing has been changed, it seems like something has been written, and it seems like nothing has been written. I am quite resistant to poison, but what War on Top showed me, the inner monologue of Pig's Feet, made it uncomfortable to watch.

Where is the report for this book? It's so uncomfortable to watch 😏

It is also a talent to write the protagonist like a staff, and it is vivid and vivid.

I can't stand it anymore after reading three chapters.

Then I played one, Lao Sha, Tai Mo Ji, then I chatted, and we chatted ten times.

In this world where strength is respected, you still hide your strength. Why did you come across here? You're a waste.

How does this author keep feeding💩 and never give up?