I'm Really Not a Big Shot

I haven't read the rest yet, but I feel that the protagonist is so childish in the beginning. A man in his thirties is arguing with a teenager. You can't tell that the protagonist is an adult who has experienced the trials of society. He just has a lot of adolescent immaturity.

The characters in the book feel like they have the psychological level of street gangsters. This is a book written in 2020, and the psychological description is not even at the level of 10 years old. If you don't ask for old foxes, don't come here to bombard me.

Let me say a few words, which are suggestions. I hope you will read them. Let's start with the advantages. 1. Your content doesn't have any major problems. Some minor logical flaws are harmless, after all, it's online novel. The overall writing style is also acceptable, and the over-the-top moments aren't too forced. In the past two years on Qidian, having no major mistakes is a plus.

The author's deliberate portrayal of the protagonist as a scumbag made me slightly uncomfortable. As a reborn individual, someone with a clear and ambitious future, is it really possible for him to intentionally become a scumbag? Or even somewhat perverted? Is such a person suitable as the protagonist?

The hiatus occurred midway through the story. The pace of development among the powerful beings in the starry sky accelerated, becoming increasingly rapid. There was only one battle at the cosmic level, the Immortal Realm arc was skipped entirely, and three or four of the Thirteen Forbidden Realms appeared. The unification of the universe relied entirely on Yang Fan's wish.

I never expected the store manager's writing style to change like this. Not bad, keeping up with the times. Just between you and me: I practically grew up reading the shop owner's books! 😁😁😁

It's well-written and suits my taste, but there aren't enough chapters. I prefer a protagonist who's carefree and unrestrained. Isn't it natural for someone with the ability to have multiple women? Why would someone with that ability become a eunuch or a monk? What's the point of working so hard to cultivate then?

The earlier chapters were pretty stupid; some of the plot points lacked any sense of normal thinking.

There are a total of 11 levels of cultivation in the main world, but the protagonist has only reached level 4 in Chapter 412. What should we do with the remaining 200 chapters? It sucks?

I'd like to ask, which consciousness descended into the world, and which novel is Fang Han's storyline from?