I'm Really Not a Big Shot

I haven't read the rest yet, but I think the protagonist is very childish in the beginning. An uncle in his 30s is irritated with a teenage student. It's hard to tell that the protagonist is an adult who has experienced social baptism, and he has a middle-class air.

The characters in the book feel like they have the psychological level of street gangsters. This is a book written in 2020, and the psychological description is not even at the level of 10 years old. If you don't ask for old foxes, don't come here to bombard me.

Just say a few words, it's just a suggestion, I hope you'll read it. Let's talk about the advantages first, 1. There are no big problems with your content. Some minor logical loopholes are harmless. After all, it is an online article. The overall writing style is okay, and the pretentious part is not too stiff. At the starting point of these two years, no big mistakes are considered excellent. This is the advantage. 2. Start by pretending to be a boss. This is a relatively popular theme in the past two years. Although the popularity has dropped, there is still a wave of leeks to be harvested. This means that your development prospects are good and there is still room for you. 3. The theme of the heavens is a bit tired of aesthetics, but the idea of ​​​​matching the last metaverse is good. Although it is not a pioneer, it is not too backward. Let me tell you some suggestions 1. There is actually no big problem with your rhythm control, but the number of updates is not an advantage. This also leads to the consideration of book maintenance when updating, reducing the activity of this book. Of course, I can't blame you, it's just bad luck. If it was a few years ago, your updates would have been quite small, but in the past two years, you have been bitten by the beasts, especially the tentacle monsters that dominate the list now, which are quite hateful. 2. Climax. The excitement of the climax is not intensive at present, and it cannot give a sense of surprise, and there is less calculation. You must know that the boss starts out, either invincible or wise. Otherwise, there will be too many flaws. After all, some antiques that have lived for hundreds, thousands or even several epochs cannot all be regarded as idiots, right? 3. You can add some off-site remarks, that is, interact more with readers. If the author has something to say, you can use it at the end of the chapter. After all, if you want to copy a book review, you must first make the book review popular. Otherwise, why would you copy it? Moreover, popular book reviews can also increase reader stickiness. The above are all personal thoughts. If you like, can you add more details? I hope it will be helpful to you, and I hope this book will reach a higher level.

The author deliberately describes the protagonist's scumbag nature as slightly uncomfortable. As a reborn person, a person with a determined and ambitious life, is it really possible to go out of his way to become a scumbag? Even a little perverted! Is such a person suitable to be the protagonist? When a normal person has such an opportunity, he will only try his best to increase his strength, and even do whatever it takes. How can he pretend to be a scumbag and be a scumbag? The quality of a work does not lie in its originality, but in the setting of the process.

In the middle of the break, the starry sky power began to accelerate, faster and faster. There was a fight at the cosmic level, and the fairyland chapter was skipped directly. There were three or four of the Thirteen Forbidden Worlds. The unification of the universe depended on Yang Fan's wish. The original phantom of the final boss was inexplicable. The final ending did not achieve the highest level, indicating that the protagonist of the next book may have the same framework. Also, no more updates🐴

I didn't expect that the store manager's current writing style would become like this. Yes, keep pace with the times. Quietly: I grew up reading the store manager's books 😁😁😁

The writing is quite good, and it suits my taste, but there are few chapters, which is not enough to read. Still, this kind of casual protagonist is comfortable to watch. Isn't it natural to have the ability to have a few more women? Do you want to be a eunuch or a monk if you have the ability? Then why do you have to practice so hard?

The previous chapters were quite boring to read, and some of the plots didn't have any sense of normal thinking.

There are a total of 11 levels of cultivation in the main world, but the protagonist has only reached level 4 in Chapter 412. What should we do with the remaining 200 chapters? It sucks?

I want to ask, which consciousness came to the world, and which novel by Fang Han is from