Starting Out as a Wandering Taoist

Can't the protagonist at least have some common sense? Oh, and his master too. The protagonist was already that old before he transmigrated to this world, so his intelligence should be at least quite high now, right? And his master knew he was frail and sickly since childhood, yet he didn't stay in one place to get better before leaving.

This is my first comment, but I just can't stand the male lead. It would have been better if he hadn't even time-traveled. He's a modern person who transmigrated, and he's still so stupid! It's just...

The writing style and the story are worlds apart! It feels like the author is writing children's literature, but with hidden metaphors! Kids won't understand it, and adults will find it childish... Probably just something written for fun...

The protagonist has such a sharp tongue, always arguing about everything. Perhaps the author wanted to portray the child's cleverness and wit, but it just feels like a spoiled brat who'd cheer even if he were beaten to death.

Having read up to chapter twenty-two, I was truly disgusted by the protagonist's intelligence. Having read novels for six or seven years, this is the first time I've hoped to see a protagonist get played to death. It wouldn't be unjust for such an idiot to be played to death; he deserves it. A transmigrator? His intelligence is even lower than that of a peasant from a feudal era.

Just a little suggestion, please forgive me if I've missed anything. 😄 If you can't write about politics well, can't you just leave it at that? Wouldn't it be better to gloss over it briefly? That way, the characters seem more profound, and the author avoids having to provide endless explanations, which makes all the characters in the book seem incredibly stupid, like children playing house.

The protagonist is incredibly stupid, and so is his master. They're being played with so easily; it's unbearable to watch.

After reading fifteen chapters, the protagonist is terrible. Despite being a transmigrator, the story fails to portray him as such. It would have been better to just write about a native protagonist.

The main plot is about getting into trouble and being chased by various powerful demons; it's a terrible storyline.

It's normal that this kind of writing style isn't popular. After all, the protagonist is a Taoist cultivator who can exorcise demons; even at a lower level, he's extraordinary. For a mortal to be so pretentious and contrived to swindle money is disgusting. I really can't stand it. My suggestion to the author is that if you're writing for entertainment, go ahead and do whatever you want. But if you want to make money, please study the writing styles of the masters and analyze them carefully.