Starting Out as a Wandering Taoist

Can the protagonist's IQ be made online? Oh, and his master, the protagonist was that old before he traveled to this world. Plus, his IQ is at least very high now, right? Moreover, his master knew that he had been frail and sick since he was a child, so he didn't stay in one place for treatment before leaving. His master didn't care about the protagonist's life or death at all. His master also said that in You Fang, he became an immortal even if he lost his life. Pig's feet have no cheats and their IQs are relatively low. I'm drunk that he can still survive until now.

This is my first comment. I really can't stand the male protagonist. It's better not to write about the male protagonist's time travel. Modern people have worn it and he's still so stupid. It's really

There is a huge gap between the writing and the story! It feels like the boss is writing a children's book, but there are some metaphors mixed in! Children cannot read it, and adults find it childish. . . I guess it was written for fun...

The protagonist has such a venomous mouth and always makes excuses for anything he says. Maybe the author wants to show the child's cleverness, but it feels like he is just a naughty child who will applaud even if he is beaten to death.

After reading Chapter 22, I was really disgusted by the protagonist's IQ. After reading the novel for sixty-seven years, I wanted to see the protagonist be played to death for the first time. This kind of sb being played to death is not unfair at all. I can only say that you deserve it, time traveler? This kind of IQ may not even be comparable to that of the country folk in the feudal era.

Just a little suggestion😄Don't blame me if you don't get it right If you can't write about politics well, why don't we just write about it? Why don't we just brush it off in one stroke? It not only makes the characters unfathomable, but also prevents the author's writing skills from requiring various explanations, making the entire character in the book very retarded, like a child playing house. To be honest, I skipped through the chapters of "Havoc in Heaven". Also, are you really a disciple of Tao Ancestor? Where is the magic weapon? I finally managed to assemble two magic weapons in my daughter's kingdom, but I never used them. Why do I keep them? What about giving birth? Also, I was originally looking forward to the bronze sword, but it turned out to be called the Heavenly Emperor Sword. Is this the age of not yet passing the second grade of middle school? And in front of the Jade Emperor, do you think it's appropriate to hold the former emperor's sword? As for the dignified Emperor of Heaven, would he use a man-eating demonic sword as his imperial sword? I'm afraid this is not the ancient Heavenly Court, but the Demonic Court. Even if it is called Yuantu, it is more in line with the previous setting than the Heavenly Emperor Sword I didn't hold it back for a while, sorry!

The protagonist is too stupid, and the protagonist's master is also stupid. He is being played around with, and he really can't stand it.

After reading Chapter 15, pig's feet are so rubbish. As a time traveler, the pig's feet do not reflect that the pig's feet are a time traveler. I might as well just write about local pig's feet.

The main plot is to cause trouble and then be chased by various monsters, which is a stupid plot.

This kind of writing technique is not popular. After all, he is a monk, and he can also kill demons. Even at a low level, he is extraordinary. For a mortal to be so pretentious and cheat money, is it disgusting? I really can't stand it. I suggest that if the author writes for entertainment, you can do whatever you want. If you want to make money, please go check out the writing techniques of the great masters and study them carefully.