I Will Be Crowned King

There has been a book shortage recently. I saw the author's new book from the wizard and ran over to read it. Because I am an old bookworm from Digua Wen to now, there are fewer and fewer books that are neither white nor poisonous that can make me excited to read. It is rare that the author has written such an interesting book, and I really can't help but want to give the author some advice. Of course, the author's writing skills must be much better than mine. I just wrote a few random sentences from the reader's perspective. The shortcomings mentioned below are all personal pretensions. In case other readers see it, don't stop reading this book. It will fill the gap after finishing your mystery. Worldview structure: The author's writing is impeccable, making me feel like reading a mysterious prequel Character description: It feels a little lacking, and the main characters are not three-dimensional. It is recommended that authors describe a character's strengths rather than their minor flaws. For example, for the captain in Mystery, the keywords that immediately come to mind are hairline and forgetfulness. Old Neil, the reimbursement method. Brother, Curly Baboon, etc. In Feng Yue's Apocalypse, the main character is set up to be a golden cowherd (now he is a golden cowherd) (at the beginning of the book, the protagonist is so handsome in his current body after time travel, it makes people choke to death). Feng Yue's protagonists are all gold medal handsome but not annoying, and can still make jokes in the later stage. What impressed me the most in this book were the two people. I am not your lieutenant and real estate cannot buy true love The main characters gave the author some big and small suggestions. From now on, the protagonist is a person who likes to set up traps in advance and loves to play with his IQ. In terms of plot, can it be described that the protagonist designs A to deal with the enemy, and then uses B after the enemy sees through it and slaps him in the face? The protagonist designed a routine ABC, and the enemy's routine went to E. The protagonist was completely devastated and felt that the enemy was so dirty. If the routine couldn't be matched by yours, I would act like a gangster and kill you. The protagonist's design reached G, and the enemy knelt down just after hitting A and before exerting force. The protagonist stepped on the enemy's face and shouted, "Give me my feelings and hair!" There is no need to forcibly lower the enemy's IQ and it is fun. There is no need to make the routines too complicated, just learn from the routines in My Senior Brother, as long as the readers feel wow, there are so many deep routines. The role of the detective feels quite important, but I didn't draw any vivid details for my first appearance. Can I highlight the setting of the venomous mouth? For example, if I talk to the protagonist on the train more words, I can see that the protagonist is a virgin from the facial features and behavior, and I have a little girl who is not a brother and sister due to heredity. Young people should not be bad imitators. He is arrogant and loves to show off his IQ, but he has to ask others to help him when describing his powerful relationship The sister character shoots a gun and memorizes recipes during the battle. When the protagonist asks him what he is doing, the sister replies that girls should always be familiar with these skills, and she feels that she feels more powerful when she shouts like this. After winning the battle, I will cook the dishes I just memorized for the protagonist! Power system: From the current point of view, the author's power setting is quite complete, but now that the protagonist's two skills are sharp, I am afraid that it will be bad if the author follows the conventional routine. It is recommended that the author not play the skill flow, but learn from the mystery to establish a foundation and set the advantages and disadvantages before playing the imagination flow. For example, the protagonist's spell can transform between solid, liquid, air, and particle states (earth, water, fire, and wind). Ju X is a solid-to-particle transformation, and Rui The secrets of black magic use other people's cognition to modify cognition, etc. It is recommended to learn from Steel Refining, the ideas in it are very interesting. Plot development: This is very good, it feels no less mysterious. Especially the part about dividing the loot after the fortress is conquered. There are so many good things in this warehouse. When you open it, you can see that the part about withdrawing money from the bank is really great. But at the beginning, who was beating whom, and whose castle was a bit messy and hurtful. Originally, it would be easy to confuse readers if there are too many names for Western fantasy in China. Adding war scenes and various place names would make the confusion even more confusing. I suggest the author name the country or place more clearly to represent the real world. Even if you attack Luoshanya, I can still remember it. It is difficult to describe war. It is recommended that the author add characters like Commander Li and the Second Battalion Commander, as well as the romance of cannons.     ：，，， The description of the BOSs battle in the first paragraph feels a bit biased. Either you show off the protagonist's IQ and get a couple of incendiary bombs, or you show off your sister's marksmanship. The author's description is not bad, but the main feeling is that Betag did not mention it. It is recommended to learn from Fenghuo's Snow and Harmony Sword. Li Chungang did three things. In the first battle, he wrote about how powerful the red armor of Fu Jiang was. When it came to Li Jian Shen Shen, he wrote the sentence "One Sword Immortal Kneels." In the second scene, the swordsman walked in various waves, and Li Jianshen cut the river with one sword. In the third game, no matter how fierce Xuanyuan and his son fought, they could not withstand the words "Sword is coming." Li Jianshen's Betague directly broke through the sky, right? The fun of fighting is all due to the support of your peers. Finally, I wonder if the author can finish it after Luo Liba has gone on so much. Not considered a spoiler. Although there are so many bad things to write about, this book by the author is the one I am most looking forward to in the same genre after I felt mysterious. I write so much in the hope that the author will become a big hit. The author most definitely has his own ideas and outlines. What I wrote may not be correct. I just hope it can open up a new way of thinking for the author and bring some ideas. Finally, why are you still not popular? Write more quickly! Just after Mystery, why don't you fill in the blanks of this type? It's not popular because you didn't work hard to find an editor who works hard for PY!

I invested 500 points and bet on 88 lucky bags. I liked the author's writing style from the beginning, but I was a poor student who didn't get on the bus, and now I'm in college. Book everything this time.

Wow, I really think it's pretty good-looking. Why are people reacting so strongly? The logic is fine, the character design is not broken, and the images of each officer in the Storm Legion are also well portrayed. Are there any problems? Where is the wisdom? Do you really like to read three chapters of a relatively cool short story?

I have been following this novel since the year before last, but I temporarily stopped following it when it was updated last year. However, I recently read this novel again and found that the performance has not changed much. I looked at the comment section and basically criticized the author, so I couldn't help but say a few words. This novel has always been very good to me personally. It is one of the few novels that did not have any poisonous points for me throughout the whole process, especially the poisonous point of Hantu that caused an uproar in the comment area at that time. To me personally, it is simply a fairy grass. I even think that a colonel is taller than a lieutenant colonel. If Clovis directly made the protagonist a general, it would instantly become a poison for me 🤭 I can only say that my personal opinions are different, but one thing I agree with among all the negative comments in the comment area is that the author's structure of the mysterious test system is indeed too confusing, which shows that the author is not writing this way. However, the author's portrayal of war, military affairs, and political intrigues does show that he has a profound foundation, but the problem lies here. Although the readers of Qidian appear to be a whole on the outside, they are actually very different. The requirements of readers of different categories for refreshing can be described as very different Take this book as an example. It is classified in the fantasy genre, and the book also has elements of mystery. Readers must hope that the author will write about fantasy epics where the power is attributed to himself. However, the author has written a lot of military genres and wars. But has this attracted readers of the military war genre? No, because the existence of the mysterious test means that the protagonist is unable to use war to solve problems in many situations, and the protagonist's weakness in the mysterious test puts him in a passive position in many incidents. The so-called conspiracy has little effect in the face of absolute power. This resulted in fans and authors on both sides not being pleased. So I sincerely suggest that the author can write a pure war novel in the next book. It can be a medieval background or a Victorian background. It can be promoted to a noble or self-proclaimed king. However, the mysterious side needs to be abandoned directly, because only pure categories can attract fans of a single category. Try not to mix too many elements of other categories into one category of books. The result will only be thankless.

This style of war in the Napoleonic period, lined up to be shot, fell in love with each other, the protagonist launched the Great Revolution, seized power in the Brumaire Coup, sent the old king to the guillotine, and then crowned him and snatched the crown from the Pope 😆😆

Strange, why is this book not so popular? I feel like the writing is good, the logic is basically self-consistent, the words and sentences are calm and there are no mistakes Is it a problem with the subject matter?

If you want to wear the crown, you must bear its weight! Are you green today? (0/1)

Name: Age: Gender: Beliefs: Power of blood: (you can only introduce abilities) Magic type: (only the Old God Sect needs to fill in) Occupation: General resume: (Legal citizens of the Kingdom, and tourists from all over the world, please fill in your certificates accurately as required)

It's really amazing. A caster who is only one step away from the third level, a calm Wild Hunt Knight, and an unawakened heir of one of the three major families with the blood of the apostle, successfully surpassed at least two levels and killed the blasphemous mage who had fully prepared the spell. It is really amazing. It's amazing. After so long, I heard that the follow-up plot is very powerful. Friends who are interested can try to watch the follow-up.

Why do everyone feel that the protagonist has been fighting and has not developed his strength and power? At the beginning Unit: A certain line infantry regiment of a certain levy regiment Rank: Captain Official position: Supervisor Subordinates: None Strength: Blood Knight Now Department Team: Beluga Port garrison—Storm Division Rank: Colonel Official position: Storm Division Commander, Beluga Port garrison commander Subordinates: Five thousand veterans who have fought in the war Strength: Blood Knight, fifth-level mage.

I have been writing about fighting, but my power has not increased, my strength has not increased, I have been in a daze, I have been treated as a tool, and I have no goals... It is more than one million words...

The only impression I have of Lisa is this picture

Anson Bach Long live Your Majesty! ! !

The author has something! I can honestly say that the plot arrangement of this book is by no means inferior to that of "Lord of the Mystery" and "The Great Watcher", come on (ง •̀_•́)ง✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

I dare not look back. Can the author tell me if this is true? There was an armed riot involving nearly ten thousand people. The night before, a powerful stranger with a mysterious identity came up to kill the leader. The others just talked to themselves and let the stranger become the gang leader? Do you want to cooperate with him to riot? Not to mention that the identity is not suspicious, the protagonist might not recognize the second-in-command in the gang, right?

I feel that the protagonist should escape from the clutches of the Rune family as soon as possible, otherwise it will become "I will be crowned as the hook of the Rune family"

It's quite interesting to share with everyone the correspondence between plot forces and real-world prototypes. Empire - The prototype is the Holy Roman Empire, the only empire within the Catholic sphere of influence. The seven knights correspond to the seven electors. Clovis - corresponds to the geography of France + the economy of Britain. The country's name comes from "Clovis I", the founder of the Frankish Kingdom. Saint Isaac corresponds to Newton. Franz corresponds to Talleyrand(?). Northport - Influenced by both the Empire and Clovis, there is also an independent trend of thought, corresponding to the lowlands, Flanders and the Netherlands (i. E. Modern Belgium and the Netherlands). The Cecil family may correspond to the Orange family, who were born in the Empire and against the Empire. Hantu corresponds to Northern Italy, which is the area that the author describes in more detail. The ice peaks at dawn correspond to the Alps. Thun corresponds to the Kingdom of Piedmont-Sardinia, connecting France and northern Italy. Thun may be the transliteration of Turin, the capital of Piedmont. This branch was also the royal family of Italy that was later unified. Corresponds to the Grand Duke of Thun proclaiming himself king. Carindia corresponds to the Republic of Venice and nearby Carinthia, the Veneto region, the most famous republic in northern Italy. "Carindia" is the transliteration of "Carinthia". Aiden should correspond to Switzerland, and the mountain people + are between the Empire and Northern Italy. In the book, the author has been classified as a land of vastness. Mist thinks the geography should correspond to the Lombardy region, and Mist may be the transliteration of Milan (?) Iser thinks the geography should correspond to the Spanish region, and the culture is also similar to Spain. It was once mainly Islam and then converted to Christianity through the Reconquest Movement. Of course, the more important thing is that Princess Freya corresponds to the crazy girl Juana. She innocently believed in love but was caught up in political misfortune. Thank the author for giving Juana in this world a good ending.

To be honest, I didn't want to read the chapter when the Stormtrooper returned to the capital of the kingdom. It was boring. The protagonist had achieved such great military exploits and was able to defeat almost all army officers. He could not even be named a brigadier general, but also had to be hidden. It was meaningless at all. As the bishop and the Rune family behind him, it was useless at all. That The bishop also said that he was afraid that the protagonist's identity would be exposed, etc., So he gave the protagonist a position as a local garrison. It was not interesting at all. In exchange for such great military achievements, he was ostracized and treated as a tool. With all due respect, don't have too high expectations for the ending. It is probably not a sad ending, but he will be the king of a small kingdom at most. It's boring.

It's so confusing. You lied to three organizations at the same time. Each organization made up lies. Are you sure you can continue to make up lies? Moreover, the affairs of the three organizations are so messy when they are handed over together. They fight here and lie in the morning and fight and lie there in the afternoon. If you lie too much, you will always be exposed. Not to mention that you have been lying everywhere. Can you make up one line and then open another one? Moreover, none of the four organizations believe him and they are all monitoring him. So, the people monitored by these four mutually hostile organizations will not meet? And that sister can obviously slowly explain that she will go to school for a few years and then come back to help. Any other reasons, I think they are all lies. From the time I opened the book to the end, I never met anyone who didn't lie to me. Pathetic protagonist. Lie to the lieutenant general, lie to the mage, lie to the bishop, lie. . . Be human.

It was a novel many years ago. I read it for a while and found that the writing is quite good. It is still excellent even now. I personally recommend finishing it and then starting a new book. It is so half-dead that I have no desire to subscribe.

What's not popular is that after watching it for a long time, I didn't know what Golden Finger was, and it abused the main character. Without the advantage of being a time traveler, he still relies on his poor military knowledge from his original identity. It's strange to be popular

A fine war article, but the downfall is that it seems that anyone can bully a spell caster. Aren't ordinary people afraid of death? The spell casters of the old gods are much stronger than ordinary people, and their upper limit is higher than those of talented people, but they are actually bullied by ordinary people.

6. I came here from the comment section of Steel Fire Law. This book is so eunuch.

At first glance, it still feels like a mysterious and murmuring poem, but if you really get into it, you will find that the author's writing skills and plot design are really a bit rusty. This kind of plot is pushed by others, deliberately sets up character conflicts, wipes people's butts for no apparent reason, and works as a fire captain every day, but after putting out the fire, there is no loot, just to generate electricity for love. Why are you writing an opera here? The most fundamental problem is that the protagonist has never had his own thoughts and goals, and has been pushed away by others. Just be a dog of the big family, but you always have to take into account your own interests, right? How many times have you deliberately created plots and trapped yourself in it for the help of the inexplicable people around you? Others wrote that Qianli knew how to integrate the plot, but the author simply put what you wanted to do on the table. The most obvious one was that while talking about how dangerous it would be for the little girl next to you to be discovered by the black mage, your little girl was dressed up to attend the banquet, and the girl captain commanded the storm group to fight bravely. . . . I was afraid that Master Black wouldn't notice, so I didn't even think about hiding it. . . Does this method of creating plot conflicts make readers look like fools?

Dear author, please update! ! ! I voted for you with a monthly vote🎫

It's a pity that the author didn't write it. I quite like this book.

I really like reading it, but why does the author keep updating it? Don't be a eunuch

Hey, holy shit, bro, two updates in 8 months

Good books are not popular, are there any new books?