Sunny and Cheerful Snape at Hogwarts

After reading Chapter 31, I felt inspired by the story of Xue Ni. The plot outline of this game, I guess, is that ordinary people and wizards coexist directly and peacefully? Compared with other fanfics about leveling up and fighting bosses that respect the original plot more, whether the author sets the protagonist as a greasy-headed monster who "runs through the entire plot and has a complex identity", or has a freer story background and future plot direction, it all implies that the story plot is becoming more grand. But this also tests the author's writing skills. But judging from the author's previous achievements - I think it is worth reading. He is a good writer of this book.

When I glanced at the title of the book, I had no desire to read it. I have been recommended several times and tried to get into the trap. As of today, the plot is good, and even better is the description of the group portraits. The main and supporting characters all think, have ideas, and have clear logic. The chase is even more uncomfortable. It is recommended to capture the dark room and finish it all at once (😄). Highly recommended, different fandom, different plot.

There are many advantages of this book, such as smooth writing, vivid characterization, strong freshness, etc. If I were to list them all, I would probably write one or two hundred words. However, I am currently experiencing a gout attack and I don't have the patience to do this. I can only condense it into one point: it allows me to stay up late during a gout attack because this book attracts my attention very much. It is a spiritual food that allows me to forget the pain. Okay, now it hurts again, I won't say more...

My friend Sansan-chan provided several more fun hairstyles after getting her short ponytail done For the record, the professor called me and I wore it 🤓 There is a double ponytail version The same style as the six-legged skeleton They are all unseen versions (`ヮ´ ) This is the last one, there are enough private photos

I sincerely give the author a suggestion, just write this fanfic well, stop thinking about your originality, just accept the fate of the great humanities god 🤓

After struggling for a long time, I decided to draw it in a style similar to a picture book. Regarding appearance, I read the previous chapters for a long time and could only confirm that Patty has brown hair and blue eyes, and Xue Ni has black curly hair, so there is a lot of free play👉👈

Please recommend Harry Potter fans. Here are the ones I have read and finished so far.

When I posted the last book review, I had just finished reading The Werewolf Incident, which I had not finished the previous time. Although it was not as good as the story of Blood Mud, it was still exciting. I thought it would be good all the way. Should I say it was path dependent? I think it's path dependence. The same is true for the previous book. Maybe I haven't said it before. I also read the previous book without a savior, but I encountered the same problem as this one. I didn't have such an idea at first, but the result disappointed me. Before your novel is put on the shelves They are both exciting and attractive enough. I basically read them all night long once I read them. Even the second time I read them was because I wanted to read the new chapters and was afraid that I would forget the plot and ruin the reading experience. But as soon as it was put on the shelf, something went wrong. This was the case with the last book and the same with this one. Are you obsessed with Black Deep Remnant? I understand that there is no savior, after all, that's the intention. Removing the bookshelf can only be said that I don't like it, but why is this book? The beginning is so exciting, and although the subsequent events are not so perfect, it can be said to be very good, but why is it so dark and incomplete as soon as it is released? Are you obsessed with this? Maybe it's because I've read too many Conan fans, but I've always stayed away from undercover plots. What a great story at the beginning. Even an adult can have exciting and romantic adventures in Harry Potter, and the original intention is just for the love of others, just because Simple love, no complicated reasons and no interests, just because the protagonist wants to do it, so "Come on, brothers, let's start our big adventure". It turns out that it is an undercover and a scam. Alas, I am really tired of it. See you in the next book. Just think of the monthly ticket as that romantic story

1. The magic left by Harry's mother in the original book actually does not say when it will expire (it also shows that love is eternal) And there is no need for close blood people to replenish the magic. These two settings are actually the protection set up by Dumbledore to hide Harry's magic (Well And Dumbledore's magic requires the love of blood people to take effect, but this magic did not malfunction until Harry Potter was 17 years old) 2. In other words, Voldemort cannot use magic to hurt and kill him before he gets Harry's blood to resurrect (security key). As for why not to use physical methods, maybe Voldemort is "not smart" 3. And Lily's magic exists in Harry's blood (hidden in the skin) Voldemort is reborn with Harry's blood The curse existed in Voldemort's body at the same time. Voldemort had always wanted to kill Harry Potter personally, but Voldemort's soul fragment was not protected. Maybe this also led to why the final battle failed (Because Voldemort had the key, he was able to cause harm to Harry and used the Death Curse. The magic level of love is above the key, so he was immune to damage, but Voldemort's soul fragment was not protected. So it was Voldemort who killed Voldemort) After the original Voldemort was defeated, he turned into a cold corpse and no one cared about it. It was not like in the movie that it was wiped out in ashes

The author writes better and better. The Defense Against the Dark Arts Professor is still roughly based on the framework of the original work, while The Savior is completely unique and creative. The original part that is based on the original work is the most exciting. Especially the atmosphere created in the first two volumes, the kind of depressing tension caused by suspense, until the end of the volume, like a ignited spark, detonated the whole audience. Then this one, by far my favorite. It's like a road movie comedy from the 1980s and 1990s, with a bright background and a slight sense of age. The sun shines on the car body and makes it slightly hot. There is a free wind outside the window. The laughter of the protagonists strings together small stories. Onlookers will not be nervous, but will only smile knowingly, because the little comedy episode of the road movie will definitely have a happy ending. The ending of The Savior is a little hasty. I hope the author can reach a higher level in this article. I also thank the author for bringing us such a warm story and a honey-flavored summer.

(It was too short. I finished reading all the chapters in the current update in one day, so I read it again from the beginning 😢) I felt very uncomfortable when I read other soul-traveling novels before, as if the original character was directly transported through the original character as a holster (it has little relationship with the original owner) It's just the same name, so it's entirely possible to write about the original protagonist. Why must the soul travel? ) So when I read the fanfic, I prefer to read the original protagonist, but this book is very comfortable to read. The protagonist who travels through the novel maintains a subtle cooperative relationship with the original owner instead of immediately erasing the original owner. The protagonist's current character and the way he treats others have always been consistent with the word "sincerity" (I like the setting of opening the skylight and speaking frankly. I feel that people like the protagonist should be able to live happily whether they are wizards or Muggles) I particularly like this Harry. Many times when reading HP fanfiction, I feel that although it follows the original timeline and story line, The three protagonists of the original work were completely marginalized or re-created by outrageous OOC, but this book writes Harry in a very original way, especially the werewolf plot, which really makes people feel at ease and say "he is completely a Gryffindor" 😌 He is willing to stand up for his friends, brave but not reckless, and can stay calm and think about countermeasures when facing danger. In the paragraph reviews and chapter reviews of several early chapters, you can see the discussion "Harry will probably enter Slytherin if this continues." Don't worry, read on slowly. The more you read, the more you will feel that Harry is still a Gryffindor (after all, the teacher's influence is really very positive)

Come on, the big writers of HP fanfiction have returned one after another. This is

The more it goes on, the less interesting it becomes. The road story at the beginning is the most amazing. Although it is written in an anticlimactic way, I thought I would take Harry around to travel and witness different things. But in the end, it will either solve another case or get entangled with Barty Jr. I have seen too many dramas like this and it feels so boring.

Every time I see the bright sunshine in the front, I automatically think of Snape in the back and think of Trump...

Hey, the pace of this book was obviously very good, but unfortunately it fell apart halfway. I felt that I could write two million words, and I could also write about leading the Boy Scouts on various adventures, describing the growth of the children, the role of the autograph book, the subsequent plot of Grindelwald, and the struggle of Voldemort's back-up. I feel that there are many, many plots that could be written, but it is a pity that they all died. Oh my God, it's so uncomfortable, so uncomfortable! The author is publishing a new book quickly! ! ! Without you as a Harry Potter fan, life would be dark 😭😭😭😭😭

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Good luck. At first I thought it was a skit about Hai Chuan's practice. Now after reading it, I feel that it may not be as good as The Savior, but the quality is definitely not bad. Hai Chuan's writing skills are still the same as before.

As I get older... Reading decent novels is a bit disgusting...

No wonder I have no favorable impression of Malfoy, a scumbag who built the Vanishing Cabinet to let Death Eaters into the school and cast the Cruciatus Curse. However, there are so many people on the Internet who like to whitewash Malfoy. Snape and Malfoy in the novel are much worse.

In fact, I don't quite accept traveling through time with Snape, but the author set up that the original Snape would act as an inner complainer in the protagonist's body, which saved a hand.

The first 10 chapters are simply a masterpiece to pre-order! Then I went to my grandma's house and talked about investigating the case. Who can tell me whether it is worth subscribing later?

After reading this book, I felt it was really bad.

Why aren't Harry and Hermione together in the original novel? It's been so long since I've seen it that I forgot

Where is your new book? Have you opened a trumpet account?

This book was finished so quickly. How about you write another timeline, or a Harry world where Voldemort doesn't exist at all?

1.22 If the investment is not updated for more than 7 days, the investment will fail. ? ? ? I will die if I finish the whole book.

Additional refinement?

Some of the White Devil extras are inconsistent and original writing is particularly difficult. In the finale, the positive side has more Horcrux Dumbledore to worry about, the magic power is enhanced to prevent fishing Snape, and the external brain and magical props provider Doraemon is Doraemon; the negative side is missing the socket monster Tom and his crazy friends, and the pure-blood shit stick is missing; Grindelwald and the wizards have lost their spirit. In this case, it is written that there is a powerful mysterious villain, the White Devil, and Merlin's ripped socks, it is like treating all the characters as giant monsters, and they are pressed to the ground and rubbed from their combat power to their intelligence. It would be even more outrageous if it were a comedy where everyone acted to celebrate the protagonist's birthday. Just like in the Quidditch match, when Harry was invincible with his Firebolt, Hao Min suddenly suppressed Harry with his flying car; or like to remember the past, Snape and Potter drank the sex-changing potion at Christmas and cosplayed with Lily and Lily when they were children. It doesn't have to be dark or dark. The villains are of lower quality, and there is no plot to support the busy Snape; in Hogwarts, Draco and Harry are side by side; Lockhart and Moody are also the Defense Against the Dark Arts professor, and Lockhart steals the role of "always alert", and Moody rehearses plays for the little wizards; Percy becomes an astronaut and persecutes socket monsters; Dumbledore Grindelwald travels around the world... I still hope that the data will be better and the author will write more

I was looking through the bookshelf and found your small-sized book. I saw at the end that your new book was called Big Sea Ship. After searching, guess what, I'm reading this book now. Pay attention to your health and get back into good health after writing this book before writing stories about rescuing people in need.

Booked to Chapter 197, book friends, is it worth reading the following chapters?