Heroic Knight

I have read more than 20 of them so far, and I have found a problem that is difficult for me to accept. The settings in the text are all in the world of Western fantasy knights and magic. The fact that the protagonist likes to read classical Chinese is not a problem, but the Marquis of the North's army is called the Jingbei Army. I really can't stand it. I have the feeling of seeing strawberry mapo tofu. I felt so overwhelmed that I was speechless every time this name appeared; and then the territory of two million ordinary people actually raised 100,000 armored and retired elite soldiers. This is very strange, because the protagonist can use his own memory to increase the productivity of the first officer of his territory, which at least shows that the productivity of this northern land is not as strong as the author said in the comment. Finally, I have always believed that a good book should have all the details, characters, plot and all aspects. The Western fantasy theme that combines Chinese and Western literary styles can only show that the author did not do his homework well or was lazy and just wrote down what he thought in his mind. I don't know what the rest of the book will be like, but I can't accept this style of writing, so I subscribed to Chapter 20 and posted this review.

The writing is very good, but there are two major shortcomings: first, the author cannot write battle scenes well, and often has troop advantages and equipment advantages that are in bad situations. Troops cannot be assigned, and there is no cool operation like a phantom shooter riding a griffon. Second, the combat power often collapses, and The enemy is often stronger than our side. One moment, the enemy's side is beaten by hundreds, and the next moment, people of the same level on our side are beaten by dozens, and we are exhausted. Some people say that racial elements should be considered, but isn't the basic combat power of the opponent in the beginning increased because of racial elements? Now that they have all been converted to the same algorithmic level, let's not do this thing where three or four of us have a hard time beating one of them. For example, the Ogre Warrior can beat the knight. If you say that the body element can't beat one on one, I will reluctantly admit it. You can't beat one on two. What's going on?

Why do I keep writing about supporting characters? There are too many things that are not the main plot.

I thought it would be a stand-alone game for a long time, but I didn't expect that people have already started recommending me tickets. I'm very happy. By the way, have you all played Invincible Heroes? Have you read the book "Invincible Heroes Kingdom War"?

This combat power is really a group of people. In the original world, the human race is divided into level 1 elite soldiers, level 2 soldiers quasi-knights, level 3 soldiers knights, level 4 soldiers earth knights, level 5 soldiers sky knights, level 6 soldiers holy realm, and level 7 soldiers god. The ogres' level 1 soldiers are quasi-knights, level 2 soldiers knights, and level 3 soldiers earth knights. , The basic level is much higher than that of the human race, and the protagonist's system soldiers are only knights at level 4, advanced units at level 4 are knights, advanced knights at level 5, advanced units at level 6 are at the basic level of the earth, level 7 units are at the peak of the earth, and advanced units are just in the sky. This has already reached the top. How will we fight after we leave the sanctuary? Moreover, the ogres and orcs are so strong, and they can fight more than a dozen each. How can the human race stand still? There were more than 100,000 ogres in the north, and 3,000 elites were able to defeat the main force in the north. However, the more than 20,000 ogres behind were scared away by 80,000 reinforcements that were not as good as the main force in the north?

To be honest, I won't give up because of the shortage of books. But eating books before and after is very serious. There are almost 5 human earth knights in total. The sky has not appeared for hundreds of years. When the same half-orc on the orc side just started fighting against a big human knight, he had a slight upper hand. Based on the timeline in the novel. Half a year to a year later. Peak earth knight, half step into the sky! If I don't mention this kind of talent, judging from this posture, I'm afraid it will be the sky in a year or two. The orcs had to suppress him carefully because he was a half-orc. There's no shortage of sky on the orc side, right? How did humans stop these orcs with 5 dragons who would never fight to the death for humans? You must know that even a golden dragon is nothing but the sky! The half-orcs are just so stupid, but the orcs can still do it. There are more cocks than the Dragon Clan! A suppressed cult leader who usually dares not to stand out, the only empire of mankind has not had a sky for hundreds of years! As soon as he came out, he peaked in the sky. Why does the state suppress this sect? As long as they go all out to play guerrilla with you, what can you do to them? So what if you have a dragon knight? With such a big dragon, how can you still hide your movements from others? I just stay away. Turn your insides into a hornet's nest. Your country has to negotiate with me and make concessions! Let me sum it up, if you can stand your ground anyway, the opponents are all good players. In order to put more pressure on the cheating protagonist, his opponents all cheated. And those who stand on the protagonist's side are all weaklings or cripples! Even though these weaklings and cripples had been facing off against the protagonist's opponents for hundreds of years. This way of writing novels was relatively popular when it first emerged, but it has become a major poisonous point later on. What you wrote was half a cool article! I didn't plan to write about any tragic battles. Even masters cannot ignore the army! There is no need for the protagonist to develop high-level combat power and be able to sweep the world. Did you write it like this just to limit the protagonist? If you really need to do this, I suggest you start directly from the beginning and limit the protagonist's development speed. Rather than how fast the protagonist develops, how fast the protagonist's enemies develop.

Generally speaking, if there is a drama somewhere, it is called the Flying Bear Army. This title sounds weird. Why don't you give the school a more Western name and call it an academy?

I think you have either a Chinese name with a Chinese background, or a Western name with a Western background. You have a Western background, Western names, and a Chinese name for the city and the army. It's okay if you give the protagonist a name like this. After all, the Celestial Dynasty passed through it, and the Jingbei Army of the Marquis of the North is really an eyesore and too inconsistent.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel a little strange. The background of Western Fantasy also involves some ancient Chinese literature, which doesn't quite match.

Let me tell you, the biggest problem with this book is that it forcibly strengthens the opponent's strength and creates crises at critical moments. Writing this way will only make people skip chapters or put them on the bookshelf to survive. Since the golden finger is so open, it is really drunk to force balance.

All I can say is that it's too cruel. This is suppression for the sake of suppressing the pig's feet. Suppression without any spare effort. From the beginning to the end, the word "suppression" is used. Occasionally, the pig's feet will explode. The pig's feet are restrained and it is very depressing. I won't mention the ranks of the troops. This is the author's setting. It's not unacceptable, but it's too damn depressing. All kinds of enemies are showing off. Humans are holding back all kinds of things 😰😰 Damn... I can't go on. 0 It's uncomfortable 🙄🙄

​ Originally thought it was an excellent Western fantasy novel about hegemony, but the result was indeed disappointing. The first three chapters were pretty good, but I really could only get to chapter 10 and didn't want to read anymore. First let's talk about the problem of the summoning system. I am really opposed to soldiers appearing out of thin air. This will make people think that everyone is a fool, especially if there are relatives such as your father. Can it really end without explanation? It will only make people think that you are forcing the characters in the novel to be NPCs. Everyone except Pigfoot is an NPC. It is just a single-player game. From this point of view, it seems that no matter how you write in the future, you will not be able to show that Pigfoot has communication and intelligence with other people. You can actually arrange a plot, for example: the group of soldiers who came at the beginning were a broken group, or they defected to you for some reason. This is great. Having the origins of the soldiers also helps advance the plot. For example, if you want to receive them, you must complete a certain task (the background of the soldier's story). Doesn't this task depend on your plot? It can be big or small. It doesn't have the final say. Isn't that good? Second, the writing method is too Chinese-style. Using Chinese style when writing Western fantasy is actually a matter of creating words and sentences. In fact, I reluctantly accept this. After all, the author is Chinese, so I can usually accept it with my eyes closed. However, just use a translation-like writing style, or pay attention to the choice of words and sentences, and pay attention to the names of people, tone, and naming of objects. Most of them do not need to be changed. As long as they are slightly refined, the feedback in the comment area will not be so contradictory. Just write that you just need to play some Western-style games and use the naming method of the game. If it doesn't work, you can just change the words a little. This kind of Western fantasy hegemony novel does not require readers to have strict requirements for Western fantasy elements. Unlike Flowers and Swords and France, this purely Western historical novel requires deep literary skills and literacy. So, in the end, this article will at most become a stand-alone article for players of the Invincible Heroes game. It can only be read by high-viscosity fans of the Heroes series. For people like me who have never played the game and are not enthusiastic about it, there are many flaws for people who view it from the perspective of novels. It's a pity that I like the subject matter…

The author please don't just add extras to the story. Chapters 46 to 59 have nothing to do with the protagonist. They are all about people who don't care and are fighting in groups. No one cares whether the son of the Marquis of Beidi dies, and no one cares whether the Marquis of Beidi dies. Spending such a long space on a bunch of endless wars between people who have nothing to do with the protagonist will only consume the readers' patience. This is not the subscription section, so you can skip it. If you get to the subscription section, you can just give up on such a long water scene. For example, you have obviously cultivated superstars, but when it comes to concerts, you always let people who you don't know and don't care about come out to sing. Brother, tens of thousands of people at the scene are all looking for superstars. How do you feel about doing this to everyone?

Really convinced, this is where the hero is invincible? What about Binghai? If you don't know how to write, just don't write! What the hell, after reading so much, only a few came out

After reading a hundred chapters, I subscribed and told me my feelings. First of all, there is no magic and the charm of the sword here. There is only a battle between two soldiers and thousands of people. The description of the war scenes can only be said to be average. I feel that the author is more than capable. Secondly, the narrative is bland and has very little excitement. The first battle against the ogre tribe in the first hundred chapters was probably the only bit of excitement I felt. And this kind of battle can be summed up as 'crushing', nothing more. The routine for the next three times was exactly the same. The high-end combatants were beheaded, and the ones below were captured and killed. Once is refreshing, twice is dull, three or four times is poisonous. Furthermore, the protagonist's heart is full of contempt for the intelligence of barbarian races like ogres, but as a reader, I feel that the protagonist is really lacking in IQ. . . While saying that the ogres have infinite magical power, and that they are all comparable to the elites of human beings, they also took the initiative to confront the ogres head-on on the plains, and in their hearts they were extremely contemptuous of the ogres' reckless behavior. Don't you know how to fight guerrilla warfare? Are you gathering the cavalry to watch the horse racing for yourself? The Air Force Griffin only has a reconnaissance role? When the enemy advances, we retreat; when the enemy is stationed, we harass; when the enemy is tired, we attack; when the enemy retreats, we pursue them. Where are they? All in all, a war novel disguised as an invincible hero is still the kind of war novel that has no excitement and no strategy or tactics. What readers want to see is either to crush the invincible, or to rely on ingenuity to defeat the many with the few, and the weak to defeat the strong. It is not to lower their IQ to the same as that of the ogres, and then fight the ogres in a mess. I am really disappointed, because I personally like this kind of strategy novels and games, but this novel does not have the crushing force of violent troops, there is no guerrilla tactics to win with fewer people, there are no ambush traps to lure the enemy deep, there is no fire attack and water attack to take advantage of the right time and place, and there is no magic or heroes to compare one to a thousand. You can at least give me a night attack on the enemy formation! The author's setting of this book really cleverly avoids all the cool points. I really don't know the reason for reading this, maybe it's my preference for strategy games.

There is really no threshold for thinking about it for a while when making settings. If you don't understand, just use a pen to calculate it. A bunch of content written by blind jb who is patting his head seems really confusing. Of course, if someone's thinking ability is an active skill rather than a passive skill, you can ignore this.

The protagonist can obviously establish a country on his own later and have his own kingdom, but he has to give it to others.

You will find that you are looking at an outline. There are no details, no characters, no life, no mixed feelings, no emotions, and only the outline of a war novel.

Name: Elena Occupation: Priestess Talent: Summoning Angels Specialty: Recruiting priests, nuns, priests, and fanatics, which can upgrade troops and improve offensive and defensive attributes Skills: Master the ultimate magic of light , Reincarnation, Holy Word of Light Mount: Flying Dragon Treasures: Skill Pendant, Light Magic Book Faith: Dragon of Light Elrath Spoken: I will let you know the weight of light culture Character: Black belly Faction: Order Introduction: Priestess with a gentle temperament and beauty, wanted to build a luxurious Dragon of Light monastery and ran around until she met the protagonist and asked the protagonist to build a gorgeous Dragon of Light monastery in exchange for becoming a subordinate The following are my image and treasures and the magic introduction pictures in the book of light magic. Disclaimer, the sixth generation of light magic and other similar magic are not easy to find, so I did not add it. Does anyone know? Please help me add it. If the handsome author sees my supporting role introduction, please reply and I will reward you. Thank you {"NickName":"Cai Wuxinhuo","UserId":209461871} Book of Light Pictures and Magic Introduction

After reading Chapter 55, I wanted to give up, but I felt that it was "tasteless to eat, and it would be a pity to abandon it." Let me tell you my opinion; the world view, system settings, and character descriptions are all quite good. It's just that the description of the war and the combat power are really hard to describe in one word. If the author can revise this book a second time, it will definitely become popular among the Invincible Heroes! How many people would not like this kind of leader Bingbing Zangtian Shuangwen~

Happy Double Day to all my good friends

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

Invincible Heroes, I have been playing it for I don't know how many years. I am still playing it now. To be honest, the novel is not very good, but for the sake of Invincible Heroes, I will give you a vote, subscribe a few, and write a review.

I hope the author can write a book about Invincible Heroes

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Seeing Chapter 10: Poison Death Question 1, what is the significance of revealing the discovery of iron ore to the Will family in Chapter 6? Do you want to give your opponent time to prepare for war? Question 2, Chapter 10: Confrontation in front of the formation. It is true that a single rider goes out to the formation to trap and kill the enemy leader, but when it fails, it is really stupid to use a giant slave to kill a messenger. Are you reminding the other party to beware of the giant slave? If you can't lure the leader, don't use it first. Wouldn't it be better to wait for the opponent's knight to charge and then use the giant slave to sneak attack? Question 3: When the two armies faced each other, it was really like a swarm of swarms rushing forward to fight. My dear, I was immediately poisoned and died. Is it okay to set up a Macedonian phalanx or a Roman sword and shield phalanx? Is it okay to use large shields in the first two rows and spears in the 34th row? Don't force readers to be smarter and read, okay?

The updates are so slow that I haven't dared to kill them. Are there any similar novels?

I don't know when the next one will be released.

Watching Western Fantasy, it's really uncomfortable when Chinese words always come out

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