The Ice and Thunder Sword Immortal

What I found unusual about this was that the female lead, who is almost 30, acts like a child, and her tone of voice made me feel awkward. It just felt really strange.

The writing is rather immature, and some parts made me feel quite embarrassed. ☹️

At the suggestion of some lovely readers, the sect leader has changed the original title "Dog Girl's Immortal Cultivation Journey" to "Ice and Thunder Sword Immortal." Thank you for your support and recommendations! We welcome all your feedback! 🌻🌻🌻

The protagonist is rather naive and innocent, perhaps too pampered by his master and unaware of the harsh realities of the world. Whether he matures and changes later is unknown. His sect is also a terrible one, outwardly righteous but inwardly wicked. It only presents a good image to the protagonist, who, being sheltered, is blind to the sect's dark side.

The female lead's name is so awful it's off-putting!

The female lead is too saintly; she gives things to everyone, and even her own demon pet talks back and attacks her. Her personality is too weak. Without the female lead's halo, she would have died hundreds of times over.

I read six chapters, and it felt like a primary school student writing an essay! It's okay for newbies, but experienced readers should probably avoid it.

The female lead's overpowered abilities at the beginning are ridiculously impressive, but her personality is surprisingly cute and innocent, which is a bit baffling. It's okay if the plot is formulaic; good writing can make it compelling. But if the writing is also weak, it just feels bland and uninteresting.

The author's writing is excellent! I've already invested in and added it to my favorites. I'll give you all my votes from now on!

The writing is so bad I can't even finish the free chapters. 😭