The Ice and Thunder Sword Immortal

After watching this, I felt uncomfortable with the fact that the heroine is clearly in her 20s and almost 30, and her temperament is like that of a child. The tone of her speech made me embarrassed. It always feels weird.

The writing style is quite immature, and some of the plots made me feel embarrassed☹️

At the suggestion of some cuties, the director changed the original name of "Gou Ya's Cultivation of Immortality" to "Ice Thunder Sword Immortal". Thank you for your support and recommendation! Welcome everyone to give your opinions! 🌻🌻🌻

The protagonist is relatively silly and sweet. Maybe he is too well cared for by his master and doesn't know the dangers of the world. I don't know if he will grow and change in the future. The protagonist's sect is also a rubbish sect. It looks righteous but is very rubbish behind the scenes. It only gives the protagonist a good image on the surface. The protagonist is protected so much that he cannot see the dark side of the sect. It hides filth and evil behind the scenes. In the sect, Jindan Zhenren openly recruits a large number of female cultivators from outside the sect to serve as maids and then disappears (when the cauldron is harvested and turned into mummies and die). It's not clear whether there will be any more naughty operations later.

The heroine's name is too unpleasant to persuade her to quit.

The heroine is too holy. She gives things to everyone. She even talks back and attacks the demon pets she accepts. Her character is too weak. Without the halo of the heroine, she would have died hundreds of times ago.

After reading six chapters, I feel like a primary school student writing an essay! It's okay for newbies to check it out, but it's better for old bookworms to say goodbye.

In the opening chapter, the heroine is very arrogant about her golden fingers, but her temperament is that of a cute little one, which makes her a bit speechless. It doesn't matter if the routine is old, you can pull it off with your writing, but if your writing isn't good, it's boring.

The author's writing is very beautiful. I have invested in it and collected it. I will give you the tickets in the future!

The writing is so poor that I can't even stand the free chapter 😭