The Transmigrated Immortal Maiden Is No Easy Target

I discovered that in novels about cultivating immortals, relatives who are good to the heroine will always die in shame. What is this to highlight? Grandpa Silly Ya doesn't want to read it even after the patriarch is dead. There are too many such novels about cultivating immortals without family affection, so I don't want to read this type anymore.

If you don't have CP, just look at which ones are cultivating immortals and needing to take care of their families! . Speechless.

After reading more than 20 chapters, it didn't feel like a fairy tale as I imagined. It felt like a daily house fight. I felt that the protagonist's speech and style were a bit childish. The pace in the early stages was too slow, and it was hard to watch when the main text started. 😭😭😭

I can't practice properly, I'm always fighting with the Nascent Soul Spirit Transformation, and there's no one else who can't get past this level.

Don't let the trolls mislead you. It may be a little unsatisfactory in the early stage, but it will definitely be awesome in the later stage. I am here to show off my skills and I will never lie to you. Wangjiajing

This weird family still kills each other. The six-year-old child fights and kills each other. The clan rules are unity and friendship. Who are you laughing at? The clan leader is also a novice in terms of management skills. It's so fake that the clan leader's order can be stolen by a child. . . . . A lot of this book has no logic, it's written too casually, and it doesn't work without worldview and plot logic. Does the author know what a noble family is? It's still a family with inheritance, but they don't have basic etiquette and virtues.

The content of this chapter is a bit too watery, which is unnecessary. The little girls who were trafficked have too much inner drama. They are only six years old. The protagonist is written to be more mature and excusable. Those few may not appear again and the supporting characters should not have so many scenes. The plot should be speeded up as soon as possible. Their backers are the Yun family. So-and-so, and then use power for personal gain, and then come out to fight, it is much more exciting than this. In the end, it can't be solved, and then the old man comes out to solve it, and then the protagonist becomes disappointed with the Yun family. Don't approach Lao Yun so early. After all, according to the paper strength you wrote, the protagonist is fifth in the Yun family. Okay, let's talk about so many problems. You can see for yourself.

Self-reliant, decisive, fearless of hardships, beautiful and kind.

Is the heroine a rat spirit? I hope it's a powerful rat, like the Void Rat God Horse

Stunning, generous, motivated