Outer Disciples' Path to Immortality

This book is average! There are many typos and illogical sentences, which seriously affect the reading experience. In addition, the IQ of the protagonist in the early stage is not above the line, and there is no resistance if there is no bullying, which makes it difficult to watch 😰😰

It feels too abusive. Isn't it good to farm quietly? Why go to the abuser when you have nothing to do?

It has the flavor of the world of cultivation, but the character of the protagonist is different. Although Zuo Mo is greedy for money at the beginning, he will not give up his life for money. This protagonist belongs to the series that takes money but not his life. During the Qi Refining stage, he was tricked into stealing things from the Nascent Soul Powerhouse. As a result, the protagonist instantly got on top and let go of his hands and feet to take various things. How dare he take the egg of the snake in the Nascent Soul stage? If a young monk in the Qi Refining stage got such a thing, wouldn't he tell others clearly that he stole it? The protagonist provokes the younger ones and the older ones, but he does it in one step and directly provokes the big boss in the middle and later stages.

Ll Am I the only one who feels this way? The more I write about it, the better it gets!

Go out and pick up a high-level monk as a slave, haha

This protagonist is the kind of person who has no realm and no combat power. He always says that his ability is the most important, but in the end, he has no combat power at all. So, what's the use of becoming a single spiritual root? Still a piece of trash

It looks pretty good! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us and give us advice!

The story is very creative, but it is not rigorous enough and is too casual!

The author's plot is too childish. Just like a child, the story comes up one after another, without any normal logical relationship, and the plot is not rigorous at all. Stop watching

Why are there so many complicated levels of spirit stones and monsters? The first level of monsters corresponds to the monk's Qi refining, the second level of foundation building, the third level of golden elixir, and so on. There are so many levels of spiritual stones. Just go to the middle or lower grades. It doesn't smell good. No wonder not many people watch it.

Why haven't you updated the eunuch's book? This is the biggest trick on readers.

Don't mark the new work by a newcomer. Just don't read books written by newcomers. Everyone should understand why.

Forget about the flow of waste materials, even the elixir making is too simple, a single medicinal material can make an elixir

Don't subscribe to me anymore, focus on coding, call me if you need support

It looks like this book is going to be out of date!

It's very well written, not bad. It's really a rare fairy grass. Everyone, don't miss it when you pass by.

It's well written. Everyone has their own thing, okay?

Good morning, it's a new day, work hard to code!

I'm out of power, the solar is charging

The author is good at writing books, and although the first one is not perfect, it is still wonderful. The imagination is wild, the writing is just right, and the style is unique... The potential is not yet fully realized, but the future is promising. I look forward to your second work!

This book feels like it has an emphasis on spontaneity, which does not mean that the characters in the book act casually but that the author writes it casually. How should I put it, if you are willing to polish it, it can be regarded as a good idea, but it can be seen that the author wants to write an article more to satisfy himself. If sixty points out of one hundred is considered good grass, I would give this book fifty-four points, and the difference between good grass and good grass is six points 🤭

Those viewers who gave negative reviews, do you know how to read the book? This work just doesn't highlight the protagonist. I really like this style of work

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are disturbing, please mute me.