Struggle to Cross the Immortal Pass

I don't know how to tell whether it's fairy grass, food, or what else, but if you can watch it, at least you can watch more than most. It doesn't forcefully pretend to be cool, and it doesn't engage in some messy plot. Automatic subscription is enabled and daily recommendation votes are given. The student party can only do this one step.

This book is good and has the flavor of fireworks. It is not suitable for newcomers to read, and it cannot be read at a glance, otherwise it will feel like you have missed dozens of chapters. I haven't seen such a good book for a long time.

When I saw the introduction to this book when it first came out with one hundred chapters, I thought it was good. After reading the first fifty chapters, it was still in line with my expectations. The setting and writing are good, and I feel that the author has grown a lot. I hope it will be as good as ever when it unfolds in the future. It's expected to become a masterpiece, come on!

Forage! The protagonist is mentally mature! Not a routine!

Can you add a few more chapters a day? I feel good after reading the beginning

I gave a reward of 1,000 before and thought the introductory part was really well written. 1. But in fact, the battle of chess can be written in detail. Don't mention the more interesting settings in the novel at once, otherwise it will make people feel that they are in vain. What is a good novel? That is, the things inside still have value in reality. In addition to the principles of how to behave in the world, some small settings that make people shine are the wonderful writing of the novel. For example, in some novels, the genres of Go and Xiangqi, or even the creation of a game, are highlights, but it is a pity that the author is not willing to spend time on them. 2. Baishanmen is a failure. Even if the protagonist wants to find a mountain gate that suits his golden finger, the writing method is too deliberate and rigid, which of course makes us dissatisfied. What we are dissatisfied with is that the author could have let the protagonist refuse the instructor's invitation in a more tactful way of communication. After all, he is a "traveler", and two people in two lives are not even willing to write about this bit of human sophistication? 3. In the setting of universal cultivation of immortality, there must be bugs that cannot be touched, such as the conflict between the family line and the master-disciple line of the sect. The author has not encountered it in his writing so far. He hopes that the fundamental world view of the novel will not be ruined in the future.

The history of the struggle of a young man from a mountain village in the context of ancient people cultivating immortality. So far, I have clicked on the automatic subscription and waited for it to be released. Just because the total number of chapters in the author's last book is a bit short... Promise me, can you make it longer?

Coming from the Immortal Road with a Knife, this book is even better than the last one! I finished reading it in one go and it still wasn't enough, so I'll add more!

It's boring to watch after entering the mountain gate.

Can you stop being lazy and book it all? The recommended monthly pass is available every month, and the minimum is 2 updates a day.

Has the author changed in Chapter 63? It feels disconnected from the previous chapters and has no coherence. There is no time to waste before your practice is complete. The former protagonist in Chapter 63 has an online IQ and acceptable qualifications, but why does the style of painting in Chapter 63 change suddenly? He is just a 17-year-old kid who thinks he is extremely smart, but in fact he is wasting his time. I don't like waste materials the most! Cultivation, like modern entrepreneurship, requires wisdom and perseverance.

The choice of protagonist is puzzling. You obviously have no background, let alone a golden finger. Someone appreciates you and cultivates you, but you deliberately offend him. May I ask if the protagonist has any treasures that cannot be seen in the light that people are afraid of knowing? If the protagonist has a clear idea of ​​his future spiritual path and takes the old man with him to answer your questions, then that's it. Unfortunately, the protagonist has nothing, and now even his qualifications have become worse than others in the same class. You are not required to go to another Shanmen family.

I read the first chapter and it was very good. Congratulations to the author!

Now it feels like Chifeng Sect is just one name composed of countless small sects! No cohesion at all! There are no signature moves or signature techniques of the sect! It just means that it is composed of many islands. . .

If you haven't written a book, don't be an armchair person and influence the author.

The writing is good. Although it was confusing for a while, I quickly adjusted it. The updates are too slow, and I am afraid that I will die. Nowadays, I can't blame the readers for piracy. There are so many eunuchs who are killed but not buried. They spend money to eat flies. Come on, the author.

This author's writing style is indeed very special...

Don't write it down! Put together an outline.

When I used to have numbers on my name, I read the book The Immortal Path and the Knife Holding by the author. The first part of the book was well written and very innovative. Later, I just flew away and stopped reading. This book is very stable and innovative in the early stage, but I am afraid that you will miss it later.

It feels like the protagonist just has a little money and he has no sense of urgency to spend more money in subsequent realms. He is addicted to pleasure and wants to waste money on buying maids to raise elixirs and so on. There should be a wake-up call to make him realize that he has other means of cultivation that he can have without spending money. {"NickName":"burning fields","UserId":151400808}

Pig's Foot has been successful in building orifices on the mountain for so long, but his wife has never appeared... The normal situation is "Husband, you succeeded!" On the contrary, his wife is nowhere to be seen. It's strange.

Either write it well or stop updating it. What kind of trouble are you going to make by hanging on like this?

{"NickName":"","UserId":151400808} Boss, did you stop writing it or did you change your vest?

It's a good book, but it's a pity, especially the chapter about Le Zhi's apprenticeship is well written. The author is still at the starting point and has not considered continuing the story of Immortal Pass.

{"NickName":"burning the field","UserId":151400808} Reading books secretly, why don't you come back and write a book?