Immortal Road Holding a Knife

The book is good, and the author is very careful to build a new world of immortality. A huge water polo, the city on the water turned out to be a ship, and there are floating continents above. It is different from other fairy novels. Although the realms are divided into the same, each stage has its own magical uses. To be able to think of so much, the author is not only rich in imagination, but also probably used it for a long time. Creating this world. After reading it so far, it is basically very rigorous. There are no flaws that can be seen at a glance. The dragon routine is not zz. Basically, the characters who appear and talk in it are all flesh and blood, with online IQ. However, the main supporting characters are not very impressive, which is a fly in the ointment. This is one of the reasons why this book is lukewarm. The whole book is logically rigorous and the writing is good. , I have more than ten years of experience, and I can say that this book can get a score of seven or eight, which is better than many so-called greats. The book is good, and the author is also very careful and brainless. Unfortunately, online novels are like this. It is difficult for newcomers to get ahead. I suggest that the author advertise more, or find some big guys to promote the book. Well, come on, don't give up, stick to it, you will get ahead. Don't be a eunuch, although you won't make much money, Just think of practicing writing and accumulating fans. Many great masters have come here like this and become popular after a few books. In fact, many authors will catch the trend, such as reviving spiritual energy and making money by relying on their sense of smell. In fairy tales, family books are also becoming popular now. This book is good, but it is a bit niche, but as long as the advertising is good, there will be no shortage of readers. After all, new things and new worlds are quite attractive.

The writing of this book is okay, but the protagonist is too frustrated and pretends to be a grandson wherever he goes. What's the fun part about being a mortal? There is a big golden finger who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. You see, Han Paopao is basically right with him. He will kill you and cheat you in just one copy without any negotiation. This is the root cause of the popularity of Mortal Flow in those days.

It's a bit messy. The protagonist fights with Lao Ma Tou, who doesn't know anything, and is not familiar with magic weapons and the like, and yet he wins. During this period, I used the money from selling the house to buy some talismans and spiritual weapons, and added a sword gleam from an unknown Qi training period. The sword gleam poked a hole and injured the old horse's head. But Lao Ma Tou had previously injected a cold force into the protagonist. As soon as it hit, all the protagonist's cervical vertebrae exploded. This injury is serious even if it doesn't kill him, right? But it was okay, the protagonist beat the old horse-headed mini-boss to death while he was alive and kicking. After winning the battle, I didn't do much healing. I just collected the loot without any hindrance and broke through. I was confused.

It is very wonderfully written, with grand scenes, many characters, and a strong story. As for the degree, I have a good grasp of it. Behavior, psychological activities, language, scenes, etc. Are all described very well. Chapter 110, I feel a little sad for the side branch of the family. What he did to the hero, a man. Move. I am quite picky. But in this book, except for the first few pictures, there is nothing to pick on! Already recommended in Tieba! I hope more fellow Taoists can read this wonderful book.

It's disgusting to marry the second one and give it up. Since you want to be a stud, don't write so affectionately in front of it.

I didn't want to read the picture of changing my mind about marrying a second wife. There is nothing interesting about this practice of marrying one wife after another. Not really a casual cultivator anymore. Although in reality, casual cultivators will fight for resources and make various transactions, but this kind of practice of marrying a wife, especially if you marry the second one, is likely to lead to a third or fourth. Although this kind of casual cultivator seems to be working hard for survival and resources, it is actually completely different from the casual cultivator. The starting point is much higher. This way of writing seems normal, but what is the difference between writing about a female cultivator relying on her beauty to get resources?

Did you find it? When the protagonist joins the sect, he doesn't learn anything besides majoring in martial arts. What he does is no different from that of a casual cultivator! At the beginning of the book, it is said that joining the sect is not easy. It is the dream of casual cultivators, but what happens next? You can't tell much difference at all! And others joined casually. The biggest advantage of the sect is the system, the system, but in the end, the protagonist is still like a headless fly.

The surnames are Pu and Ma. They call pork and fish meat big meat. It gives people an ominous premonition.

You don't necessarily need a golden finger level. Some opportunities come twice occasionally, and some trump cards are enough. If you have been mediocre, you will eventually remain mediocre. Only by getting stronger and growing gradually can you seize the opportunity to become an immortal. When writing a novel, you can be mediocre at the beginning and then no one will read it. You must let people feel the growth, cultivation, power, wisdom, and magic weapon of the protagonist.

After reading the introduction, I kind of want to complain. The sect is strong because of the sect's long-standing inheritance and progress from generation to generation. The reason why the casual cultivators are weak is because the casual cultivators eat the leftover soup of the sect. In other words, the sect stands on the shoulders of giants, while the casual cultivators are on the toes. According to the concept of evolution, casual cultivators have no time to stand out, have no organization and no system, which is equivalent to a wild beast in the forest who may have a flash of inspiration but it has been recorded.

Can I still read this kind of trivial article, a nerd who wants to tell others his secrets whenever he meets a beautiful woman? Leave decisively, it's a waste of time!

The writing is good, but it is difficult for mortals to stand out in fairy tales. The protagonist lacks Han Li's vial and Zhang Yan's broken jade, which means it lacks a sense of surprise and expectation. The skills have always been from mainland China, which is too bland. It's a pity that the writing is better

After reading A Mortal's Journey to Immortality, this book is the only one I can read. The protagonist is flesh and blood. The supporting characters' IQs are online. There is no cheating on the protagonist. Real mortal life is so ordinary. I like the author. I hope the author gets better and better.

The book was very good, but the harem couldn't accept it when he married Fengrun, so he left.

I'm really speechless about the setting that the ghost can be divided into defensive and offensive types. This is not a game article. Could it be that a demon made from the soul of a turtle can still wear a turtle shell? If it's talent, it would be speechless for a ghost in the Qi training period to have his own talent.

What kind of book is it? It ends at this point! If you can't write anymore, change your writing style.

Why does it look familiar, like the God of Fishing 😡

Lingsong didn't build the foundation, but 10% of her mana could match the perfection of Qi training?

Not a fairy at all, just ghostly

The writing is good, but why are the grades not so good?

After on and off, I finally finished reading it.

Good book. 🙂

Please collect "Martial God of the Early Yuan Dynasty", please give me some advice if it is poisonous, thank you 🤓

I'm still writing. Okay, keep reading.

After reading it, it's a bit new 🙂, but there are also regrets

At first glance, it's okay, but what's weird is that the author describes the protagonist's Qi training period at too much length, which is anticlimactic!

If I didn't have so many wives, I would still be able to watch

I'm quite speechless at this introduction. What does it mean that many casual cultivators can't become immortals? Why are casual cultivators called casual cultivators?

Good book. Reward 2 points and add fans.

It's too fast to become a baby, isn't it, and just give it some space after leaving the body? If Old Devil Han knew, he would be furious to death