Pirates of the Netherworld Swordsman

As a professional troll, I will not list the advantages, but directly talk about the disadvantages: 1. The second-level atmosphere is too strong... The psychological activities of the protagonist give people the feeling of an out-of-touch junior high school student... Suddenly traveling through another world, and then cursing, he is a navy and a Roger. Is it possible? Don't you first adapt to your body and environment? It doesn't reflect the logic that adults should think about. As for soul sorrow and so on... I just think that the author is paying tribute to his youth in the second grade 2. I have to say that there are too many psychological descriptions and dialogues. Is the author writing a drama? After roughly flipping through the following chapters, at least 50% of the words are enclosed by ""... Use narration when it is time to narrate. The psychological description is best through the external environment-actions, expressions, etc., Plus some concise and direct descriptive sentences, so that readers can feel it, instead of "I am so angry." The advantage of novels over comics is that they give people more room for imagination. I think that allowing readers to imagine/resonate with readers is the essence of novels. 3. In terms of plot and outline, the starting point of the protagonist is too high. The strength of the lieutenant general in the opening chapter, the general with more than 100,000 words, does not seem to be a Zhutianliu. I estimate that the eunuch of 300,000 words will not exceed 500,000 words at most 🙂

The logic is very rigorous, the fruit ability analysis is in place, and the timeline is clearly organized. Come on! No eunuchs!

A great pirate novel. This is the only pirate novel I can read. The writing and plot are above average. It can be seen that the author has carefully read and studied pirates. Come on! ! ! (One

The writing is quite good. As a ten-year-old bookworm who has been exposed to online novels since the sixth grade, I still like this book, so I couldn't help but invest in it. Then I read the updates and felt a little panicked. I hope the author can work harder and stop being a eunuch. In addition, the updates can be more powerful, thank you! ✊

As a Haimi, I have also read a lot of Pirates fan fiction. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. Author, if you have already written about the protagonist's powerful generals at the beginning, then you need to master the rhythm. If you write too fast, it will collapse. I look forward to your original crew and have your own story of hegemony. Also, don't let the general and the Yonko not be on the same level. The Yonko can kill the general alone. This is a bit poisonous. It's okay to be more imaginative when developing fruits. After all, this world is idealistic. Just don't be too buggy. You can have a heroine, but don't collect it randomly. I hope the author will make a big update. If nothing else, all orders are available. This post is proof!

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. The underworld represents the destination of death, and it feels similar to the ability of reincarnation from the dirty earth or the zombie. Moreover, as one strives for the highest, each peak has its own unique skills that can make others despair. For example, Whitebeard's earthquake can stir up the entire sea area, affecting a large number of countries, making the world conquer and furious, and dare not attack at will. It can also double the shock attack in battle. Ling Ling's body of steel is basically the most talented being in the world of pirates. The Soul Soul Fruit makes her invincible. Coupled with her natural terrifying power, she is always fighting in groups. Kaido's immortal body has super resilience, and combined with the most balanced fruit, it almost makes people despair. Even for Blackbeard, I couldn't make myself stronger, so I made everything with fruits weaker, relying on my advantages to defeat the opponent. Even if the second-level Douglass and others have their own unique skills, the protagonist should also develop his own advantages and inaccessible areas that are different from ordinary people.

It was written by a child, in the style of a middle school student, with purple eyes, purple skin, and only purple hair. Can you know how to rise from Mount Lu to dominate the dragon?

If you want to deny that the generals and the four emperors are equal in strength, it is recommended that Shanks and Teach be expelled from the four emperors. After all, one is designated as the general, and the other runs away when he sees Akainu (please don't yy There is no need to fight, the original comic description and If the life card is nailed, you are a coward) Secondly, the Blackbeard Pirates, who were in charge of the war, were knocked down by a set of giant Buddha shock waves, and the White Band without white beard➕Jinbei➕The Shemale King was dragged and beaten by Akainu alone. If you agree that this is not a record, then I can't help it. By the way, don't brag about Garp. The strongest sailor designated by One Piece Volume 1000 is Zefa. The Valley of the Gods incident was 38 years ago, and the Green Pepper incident was 30 years ago. Eight years after experiencing the Valley of the Gods, Garp actually wants to practice boxing against Green Pepper? Please don't brag about how powerful Green Pepper 500 Million is. Ace 500 Million was defeated by Akainu in one move, Jack 100 Million was taken away by Fujitora with one move, and Jack was even in a cat-dog wheel battle. By the way, Garp is currently 78 years old, and 38 years ago he was 40 years old. Compare this to Shanks, who is currently 39 years old and was 33 years old when he became the Yonko. Aokiji is even more exaggerated. He already has this level of strength in his twenties. If you don't believe it, you can watch O'Hara's memories. You are looking at your Garp's record. He fought against the Golden Lion and joined forces with Sengoku. He picked up the head of the Red Earl alive. It was a fake to win Roger. The Valley of the Gods teamed up with Roger. However, Roger was associated with many strong men of his own. In addition, the Rocks Pirates were not famous at the time.

I think the four emperors are definitely stronger than the generals. It is certainly possible that the two generals can kill the four emperors, but we cannot take into account the peak whitebeard. Whitebeard can still cause damage to Akainu when half of his head is knocked off in the comics, such as If the strength of the three generals in the top war were to go together against the peak Whitebeard, I think in a deadly battle, Kizaru would survive and one of the others would die. If Kizaru didn't go together and the other two would constantly attack with ice and fire in turns, both of them might be seriously injured and eventually their strength would decline. It is said that Kizaru will survive because Whitebeard may consider replacing one regardless of Kizaru (Kizaru is fast)

No, it's normal for you to retain your physical fitness through soul penetration, but how can you retain your swordsmanship, physical skills and domineering spirit? It's not like you swallowed his soul, then it's still possible.

After reading the first forty chapters, leaving aside the plot in Xihai, I really want to complain about the New World. The protagonist went to a country to cooperate with others, and then others agreed. I won't talk about Del Rey first, but I will talk about Fishman Island. The king decided to plant the flag because of a prophecy. I don't remember the original book very well, so I won't say why the king made the same decision. The point is, does the protagonist have the ability to protect? Just go plant the flag and see if you leave, Dre will be beaten. He also promised to let others walk on land, fearing that it would not attract the attention of the navy and the Tianlong people, and then send people to the island to catch fish. No one knows where you are, protected by that hammer. He said he wanted to protect, but then he turned around and said it was too peaceful and wanted to create some turmoil. You don't think that planting a flag can protect you, do you? Especially when your own crew members are weak compared to each other, and the entire ship can be attacked by yourself. Is it possible that you come here every time something happens?

Why do they all like to write Chinese and Secondary Chinese essays? The more I look at the protagonist, the more he looks like a second pillar, showing off all kinds of pretense. The same goes for fruit abilities. Several original fruit abilities are put together to become a new fruit. Alas, it's another routine article. After reading a few articles, I can guess that the next eight achievements will be the protagonist's rapid improvement in strength. Along the way, there are all kinds of pretentiousness. When the tiger's body is shocked, fans from all walks of life kneel down and lick it. Those who look at the protagonist for a second time, those who are dissatisfied, and those who do not kneel and lick immediately are destroyed by the protagonist with a snap of his fingers. In three years he can conquer the sea, in five years he can be invincible, and in ten years he can cut through the sky with his sword.

Author Renren Fruit's angel form is a fantasy beast type, right? 😅

Can you still hold on?

Very good. It suits my taste. Can you please hurry up?

Sixteen, you have grown up, you have to learn to read ten chapters a day, otherwise what will you do in the future?

Can anyone who has not watched One Piece tell us about the power levels of One Piece? Those who have never seen it look confused 😵

Come on, I'm investing. I'm not very good at talking. I just don't do anything that doesn't exist. Well, come on.

By the way, I've traveled through time and space, and I've never seen a protagonist capture some Celestial Dragon girls for a meal?

Little clever ghost

After watching a few of them, I acted like a bitch when I met the characters in the plot. Fighting for hegemony is not a child's play house. The protagonist is a psychopath.

Thanks to the author, the new book investment income is 291 points, keep up the good work!

The author is really a rare pure person

Why don't you write about the Thread Fruit? Actually, everyone who watches One Piece likes to see the development of the fruit, the unexpected surprises, or the Fruit of Cause and Effect.

It's better to finish writing. In the end, I'll beat my aunt to death.

No more writing? Don't have to watch anymore? So long

It's really well written. It's flesh and blood. It uses the world view of One Piece to create its own path.

Can this be completed normally? !