Me and My Riverside Tavern

After reading more than thirty chapters, I just can't see the atmosphere of Jianghu anywhere. (If we insist that people who drink are all martial arts masters, we call them Jianghu. I have nothing to say) What is Jianghu? A mixed bag of fish and dragons, from all walks of life, from high to low, from smart to idiot, from benevolent to shameless, etc. It is called Jianghu. It turned out that the people who came to the tavern were all masters, each one more elegant than the other. Each one is more upright than the other, and all of them are gentlemen. It's all the same template, without any highlights. Each character is lifeless and has no unique style. The Jianghu tavern I want to see more is "a group of people from all walks of life sitting around bragging, chatting, anecdotes, etc. One word "lively" is Jianghu." Instead of making it like a rich club, lifeless, well-behaved, and empty of people. If the author really doesn't understand, just go to a lively old-fashioned teahouse and take a look. The other theme, "wine", is even more featureless. In addition to being delicious, it is also good for practicing martial arts. Just gone? For example, the second characteristic of "plum blossom wine" is to "dispel cold". The author should capitalize on the special effects based on this "dispelling cold" characteristic. No one cares whether the result is the same or not. Jiang Rou only mentioned it once, or even not at all. So is it funny that you came up with this "warm-repelling" setting? And after having the second kind of "plum blossom wine", the protagonist intentionally or unintentionally said that the first kind of wine, "lees wine", is not considered wine. Are you mentally ill if you despise and belittle "bad wine" in all kinds of ways? He is simply a scumbag who likes the new and hates the old. Other books written in this way give readers a "funny" feeling. The feeling this book gave me was really "disgusting" rather than entertaining the audience. Every kind of wine has various characteristics and positioning, including "grain wine", which should also be the same. Instead of "forgetting the old love when you have a new love" The third kind of wine "Tourist Drunk" is the same, and its characteristic is "dreaming". In the end, it's really just an ordinary drunken dream. Brother, you are really funny. You give me a kind of "Maotai" worth thousands of dollars and drink it like a few pieces of bulk wine. I don't know how to drink at all, so I might as well drink boiled water. He is obviously a rude man who insists on pretending to be a gentleman. A good topic, but the article is wrong. Each wine has no characteristics, and the only evaluation is "it tastes good, better than all other wines". Brother, with Dim Sum, it's not difficult to copy a review from a professional wine reviewer on Baidu. To put it simply, I didn't see the two highlights of this book: "Jianghu" and "Wine". Also, the defense setting is a real dog, which can only deal with settings above Grandmaster. The protagonist doesn't even have any strength at all. What a waste of time? It is also revealed that you can ask someone to buy it for you, but you have to buy it yourself. If a rich man invites hundreds of servants, can't they each buy a pot? If you have to come here once a day, the halo of wisdom will be greatly enhanced. The entire book should be overhauled, except for the core, which should be cut and rewritten. Tavern: It must be lively, and it should have all kinds of religions. There are countless talented people inside, and everyone has their own powerful "skills". Everyone from beggars to emperors can appear in the tavern. There are countless "odd things" in it, it's up to you to carefully search for the truth and falsehood. This is the home of everyone in the world, and everyone can find the warmth in their hearts here. Wine: Unlimited free basic wine is provided to satisfy people's greed and thirst. Various "specialty wines" require each person to complete a task before they can taste it (the tasks vary depending on the person and the characteristics of the wine, and there is no fixed task and difficulty. The only difficulty is "wonderful", and whether it is completed or not will be judged by everyone in the world). For example: I want to drink "Tourist Drunk" and tell a wonderful life story. Only when several people in the tavern agree that they like it can they get a portion of the wine to taste today. As "plum blossom wine" "dispels the cold", you should do a heart-warming good deed. Only then can you get the opportunity to taste wine today. Defense: It should be changed to frighten people of all classes. At first, it can only attack the weak ones infinitely. There are only a few high-level attacks per day. Slowly increase the number of times and the level of dealing with them. Simply put, "It is not absolutely invincible, but it must be invincible." There is no need to pursue this point deliberately, just focus on writing defense occasionally. After all, the focus of the book is not "fighting" In other words, adding a few plates of peanuts and other food is not good for drinking on an empty stomach. There is no need to specifically write about food, because the focus is on "wine". So don't put the cart before the horse and create a "gourmet show" The Jianghu should have the flavor of the Jianghu, which is made up of continuous short stories of the Jianghu. Of course, the focus is on the world inside the tavern, not the world outside the tavern. The story should not take place outside the world every day, and the special effects should not be used to describe the world outside. The above are my suggestions

Open a post to give some suggestions, everyone is welcome to discuss 1. Drinking wine can increase your internal strength. I personally feel that it is not a good starting point from such a high level. To put it bluntly, shouldn't a green forest hero with low strength and shyness deserve to drink here? 2. The rules of the tavern are fine if they reflect the personality of the protagonist, but they are not beautiful if they are dictated by the system 3. They are just some powerful characters, not ordinary people, and lack the smell of fireworks 4. There is wine! No vegetables! Can't stay overnight! Personally, I feel that the business scope is a bit narrow and there is no internal flavor.

After reading a few chapters, it was too vulgar. Since it is a tavern, it must have the atmosphere of a quack. These are all written as daily trivial matters. For example, Miss Jiang and Uncle Zhang could write that the weather in the south of the Yangtze River is as unpredictable as the rivers and lakes in the south of the Yangtze River. In the pattering rain, the sound of carriages can be heard gradually approaching until they reach the wine house and stop suddenly. When I was young, a strong man pushed in the door, about forty-five years old, lean and strong, wearing a green shirt, a knife, and black shoes with water marks. Standing at the door, looking around, then turning around, he answered outside the room. He stepped through the door with embroidered shoes, dressed in rich clothes, walking dignifiedly, with willow-leaf eyebrows, peach blossom eyes, slightly pursed lips, and a slightly pale face. Seeing the exquisite decoration of the tavern, a smile appeared on his sad face. Zhang Ming could tell at a glance that this pair of master and servant was unusual. Even in the rainy Jiangnan, the most beautiful girl in Jian'an City did not want to wear such gorgeous clothes. Jiangnan in August was too hot. Isn't it a little bit of a Jianghu tavern? The main thing about Jianghu Tavern is not the wine, but the people. A young hero, a scholar, an old man, a passionate guest and a ruthless lover, secretive calculations and an innocent heart... Can any novel really be published in Sanjiang? I almost want to write.

Really, I quite like this kind of inn and tavern writing. But I don't like what you are selling here, what I like more is the kind of people with various personalities, with different dreams, setting off in different directions. Originally, they would never cross paths in their lives. But because of the tavern, they were connected by fate and stories happened together. Or get together by chance on a cold day, tell our own stories, laugh together and say we regret meeting each other so late. As for whether the wine you drink is magical or not, who cares if it can increase your martial arts. In fact, I think the system will be removed, and there will be no need for so many bells and whistles, no need to travel through time, and no need to have outstanding martial arts skills. The protagonist is a native, who makes good wine, makes a group of like-minded friends, and has many stories. Some of them he has personally experienced, some of which he has not been able to experience personally, but can be told by his friends. Wouldn't this be more comfortable? Drinking wine can increase internal strength, which will lead to some people coming to the pub with "impure motives". His gathering is not due to fate, his purpose is just to improve his skills. When there are more people like this, the tavern will lose his soul. Everyone came just for a little skill, drank and left. If you have to control the whole system, it will be uncomfortable to be a boss. How can someone with outstanding martial arts skills resonate with others without a chivalrous heart? Having said so much, it's actually just one sentence. I want to read a purer story.

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I lost interest after seeing the mandatory rules of the system. The protagonist is not invincible and has so many rules in the martial arts world? Let me ask you a question; if Ding Chunqiu comes to drink and wants another pot after drinking, if you sell the wine or not, if you don't sell it, you will die if you can't beat him! Sell, the system forces you not to sell, you will die! Rules are made by the strong, even in modern society, the law is based on force!

This setting is quite good, but the original setting is only interesting, and with the author's polish, it becomes vulgar. The rules of the system, what time and what time must be done, a person can only drink one pot a day, etc. It is really unnecessary, there can be rules, no fighting, hurting others, causing trouble, no matter who he is, throw them all out, instead of just kicking out the grandmaster, but he is an ordinary person, a slightly more powerful Xuan level can kill the protagonist. What is the meaning of this kind of setting, those who are more powerful than the Xuan level can be thrown out, and those who are better than him will be blinded. Is the foreshadowing of this setting also going to be like Dihua? Letting others imagine how awesome the protagonist is is turning him into a loser, and there is no need to be serious about it. Firstly, you have written an introduction. You are a daily oriented person, and you also have wine. Firstly, there is no need to engage in hunger marketing, and secondly, there is no need to sell it too expensively. What is Jianghu? It is the three religions and nine streams. It is the life of a trafficker and a pawn. It is the arrogance of a young man who is full of blood. It is the responsibility of a hero to all living beings. It is the vanity fair. It is insincere words and involuntary actions. It is an old man who has escaped from poverty. , Sitting and drinking a pot of wine, telling stories on the road. It could be about seeing someone who couldn't bear to eat human flesh on the roadside, or it could be about struggling and finally seeing the hope of life, instead of not being able to get in, leaving two cents and a love for the Lord. In this kind of novel, the protagonist is just a listener. Like us readers, the protagonist can make a summary of himself after listening to the story. It can be a poem, such as a love letter. At the end, the protagonist sits alone in the pub and pours a glass of wine. He is a drunk tourist, but before he drinks, he thinks of the drunken boy who made a joke during the day. "The heart illuminates the moon, and the moon illuminates the canal. Some things are indeed more intoxicating than wine." The protagonist of the book should listen to stories that are either sad or full of hope from a detached perspective, and slowly pass through the small rivers and lakes of the tavern, showing the elegance of the big rivers and lakes outside, instead of a bunch of young men and young ladies coming to drink every day, being polite, and then blowing on the wine after drinking, and only saying one or two sentences. Nothing can be compared with ordinary wine, as the author said, vulgar. In the world of martial arts, some people drink because they want to drink, some because they want to drink, some because they can only drink, and some people drink it when they see the wine there, not just because of how awesome and sweet the wine is. To put it more vulgarly, a scholar who has failed the exam drinks from frustration and talks about national affairs; a Jianghu man who has not avenged his revenge drinks from patience and hatred. It's about sadness and numbness. A heir of a sect who has just come out of the martial arts world has great ambitions in his heart. He says that the sky is high and the road is far, and the dragon is swimming in the sea.      ， I sincerely recommend that the author, or if you have any author friends who are passing by, use the above ideas casually. Please write more good stories. I feel like the author also wants to write a less vulgar story. Just say a few words. Hope to adopt

After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't help but browse the chapter table of contents. I couldn't stand it anymore, it was boring. . . It was all in the small shop where I listened to people talk about all kinds of news, about so-and-so's life story, so-and-so's past, and how so-and-so was doing recently. . . Really disgusting. .

There are a few bad points in the first few chapters, but if you can resist them, this book will be pretty good. 1. The protagonist is the tool of the system, such as pricing and purchase restrictions. The system has the final say 2. I saw some mindless passersby gambling again, and the protagonist still dared to block him. This is a martial arts world, killing people without blinking an eye. The protagonist does not know martial arts, and he can calmly bet with guests on whether the wine is good and 40 taels. Money 3. One or two for a glass of wine, four or two for a bottle of wine are just initial. Although I don't know the purchasing power of two, it must be very high 4. The most important thing is that the author knows how to set up. As mentioned before, this wine has no special effects, and then a guest came and drank it and said that it increased internal energy.

If you don't look at it, get out. Don't be blind here. So I'm getting out!