Virtual Doomsday Era

That friend's sister is a little disgusted.

I'll give you a reward of 500 coins, keep writing, it's pretty good

This book will be a hit!

There's a sense of déjà vu from someone who was shot in the head more than ten years ago, but the writing style is like copying a tiger from a cat.

This novel is so awesome. I really like this type of novel.

Why are the covers all the same?

Whenever I see that the damage of a sniper rifle is only a few points higher than that of a pistol, I feel like I have been force-fed a piece of shit and vomited. Can you imagine that a green sniper rifle with an enhanced +8 damage is only a few points more damaged than a green pistol with an enhanced +5 level?

The design of this book is still very good, but after looking at the first picture, there is a demon sister, and I know that the protagonist is a tool person without autonomy, and a person whose behavior is easily changed by others. If the sister or any other woman says something, the protagonist will find various reasons to be a suitable dog. He will not resist and accept everything.

Come on, write your own, and don't be influenced by people with ulterior motives. The book is good. There are flaws, but the flaws don't hide the goodness.

The author hopes you will take a good look at it: 1 First of all, you are really weak in the description of female characters. I suggest you either read it and learn how to write it, or try to write as little as possible, because there should be many people who are persuaded to quit. 2 Let's talk about the advancement of the plot. The theme of your book is quite good, but I don't know if the writing is not enough. Your plot advancement feels stiff and confusing. I hope the author can optimize his outline and read more excellent works of the same type. 3 This is the most important point. If you don't pay attention, your book will either cut it or "let yourself go". Your monetary system has completely collapsed. I have seen you say that you feel like it is about to collapse. I have read more than 300 chapters of you, and I can confidently tell you that you can let go of your feelings. Are you really collapsed? For a person worth tens of billions of apocalyptic coins, do you feel it hurts to buy something worth ten or twenty thousand? Do you understand the concept of tens of billions, and then the next chapter will go out with 5 billion? You can really say whatever you want about your money. I won't talk about combat power. I can only tell the author that if you optimize your outline in time, most of your books will be mediocre. I hope the author can take a good look at it😵

What's the relationship between you two (manual funny)

The natal skill consumes a lot of energy, the protagonist himself is not very energetic, and even leveling up didn't add energy, which made me drunk.

1. It's hard to describe the punctuation marks. Whoever sees it will know it 2. Why don't you add more spirit? Life Skills ➕ Skills ➕ Shield ➕ Control ➕ Group Damage ➕ Displacement... While emphasizing the importance of attribute points, they are also making a fool of themselves; the Life Skills will not disappear, so can't they change careers? 3. MM Which ancient era is this thing from? Those who didn't know thought you were there. 4. There are too many villains in Shabi, and it's not like they are all mentally retarded. But the protagonist can't run into them all, right? 5. Looking at the introduction, you will enter an apocalyptic game later... It's really better not to write "sister", it can't be handled well...

Why is it that in 0202, there is still such a mentally retarded plot of forced buying and selling? There are all kinds of classic stupid plots. I am convinced.

What does the editor think🤐🤐🤐

This book can only be read in a skip... The heart of a Yamata no Orochi would be given back to a Japanese woman just for a piece of news. No fool would do this, okay?

It's a little awkward... I said in the previous chapters that equipment was scarce. In a blink of an eye, I started to farm n rats and exploded n pieces of equipment 500 scorpion monsters + one elite monster... Single farming... Really cheating

If you are short and weak, you can't write more words. If you have too many words, you don't need water.

Nowadays, novels about online games are generally popular in three styles: 1. Technical flow (the protagonist leads the team to defeat strong opponents) 2. Plot flow (the protagonist is invincible among players, mainly describing NPCs such as super-god mechanics). 3. Main God Style (recruiting players to invade another world) No one is as popular as you. It is really a new style.

How wonderful it would be if I didn't have this sister. Now as long as I have my sister, I feel better.

It's obviously mental skills that are his destiny, but he keeps adding points evenly... It feels like a meaningless, opinionated protagonist. The most problematic thing is the author, not the protagonist.

It's extremely toxic, and every female character in it is "superb". The protagonist says she's not a nosy person, but she's minding her own business at the same time. When the protagonist fights the boss, he must drop good things, and he also buys equipment with a second ID (classic poisonous plot)

Xiu'er, when your sister is talking to her brother, Li'er, Li'er's? Brother, Li'er is late

This author also wants to be beautiful, and it is impossible not to curse people. When you go shopping and you see a stall vendor, and you pull out a piece of cake, don't you curse him? If you don't hit him, his life will be good.

Emmm author, like the current war zone competition, I don't feel much at all, and I feel like I'm wet. Also, doesn't it feel weird to start a match in an online game without level 20.30? It seems like twice? I understand that the author wants to make this online game world very huge, the game is very difficult, and various positioning skills are very important, but readers generally don't like this, and who doesn't like a flashy one? I haven't changed jobs at level 20, I still have very few skills, and my talents and skills are still very strong. Now the game is just a matter of seconds. What are you looking at? Netizens felt very embarrassed after what the author wrote. Now the author has trapped himself. Skills are difficult to obtain, and there are very few of them. There are many such restrictions. The author is actually a little anxious. In the early stage, he can develop some small side plots or main plots. He should mainly fight monsters and defeat bosses. Isn't there also hidden maps and so on? Also, the part about grinding war trees with the girl from another group is actually okay. You can write it like this. The competition is written and considered in the middle and late stages of the game. And the protagonist and the fat man went to the secret realm and then inexplicably took them to the man in black and played with guns? There is also a character who seems to be the heroine inexplicably. The plot is very confusing and incomprehensible. In short, the early game was not interesting. After writing this, wouldn't it just be a game? What about the war zone competition in Red Rock City, then the competition in Xuanwu City, and then the competition in the four main cities. I have also been writing about other supporting roles. The supporting roles are playing supporting roles, and they are definitely not as good as the protagonist playing supporting roles. The important thing about online game writing is never the competition (that's the main thing about competitive writing). Anyway, in the early stage, we should focus on the plot and boss fights.

His language skills are a bit immature, but he's pretty good when describing battle scenes. Overall, he's pretty good.

Full order, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Already ordered. It's well written. A master is not made in a day. Come on.

If I were to rate this book, it would only be a 6.5. The main author's control over the development of the plot is too weak, the description of the characters is insufficient, and the logic is too lacking It is not suitable for the current book world.

It's quite poisonous. If this really happened, why would the government do it?