The World Enters the Age of Navigation

Does the author have hidden secrets? Please send me the title of the book so that I can support it. Book shortage

I said, brother, can you please stop overpowering the main character? It's so uncomfortable to watch. While saying how awesome he is, anyone can give him a 50-50 fight. There is also the patriotic character. While saying he is patriotic, people with official backgrounds come out to provoke. Isn't this conflicting? In a world where force is king, there are so many brainless people who have been killed. The world is so big that it is impossible for the official to find him. The writing is a bit frustrating.

， The four stages so far. Comparing the current level of Pig's Knuckle [Middle Realm Extraordinary] with the known [True Realm Extraordinary] ability to move mountains and seas, this span is very unreasonable. With each stage of progress, the corresponding strength should also be significantly improved. But to be honest, since entering the extraordinary realm, I personally feel that the strength of the so-called extraordinary realm is not obvious in battle, and I cannot feel the [power] of the extraordinary realm. The author must give a clear positioning, or have a positioning in mind that can be used for comparison. In the world system, realms are divided into several classes. What is the "strong character" of each class, and how does the pig's trotter itself highlight this "strong character". The world is entered step by step, [low-level worldview, middle-level worldview, high-level worldview, top-level worldview]. The [worldview] at each stage should have a corresponding [realm bottleneck]. To highlight the [power level], it is necessary to show: under a certain level of world view, the corresponding [realm bottleneck] should have [strength dominance]. ★In a world where the weak prey on the strong and strength is respected, only realm and strength can highlight the [strong character] . ★Strength, speed, attack range and power are based on these three. Realm ★Level 0 ★Level 1 (pseudo-extraordinary 1~9 stars) ★Level 2 (extraordinary Low realm ~ high realm) ★Third level (real realm) Take speed as an example: First level (speed) unit: how many seconds per 100 meters Second level (speed) unit: how many meters per second (within the speed of sound) Third-order (speed) unit: speed of sound (supersonic) Fourth-order (speed) unit: several times the speed of sound Others Comparison with cultivation First-order/Qi training (Extension of life: ① Long life of a hundred years ② One hundred and fifty years) Second level/foundation building (Extension of life: ① two hundred years ② Three hundred years) Third level/Golden elixir (Life extension: ① four hundred years ② six hundred years) Probably: First order (speed limit) within the speed of sound/burst at supersonic speed Second order (speed) minimum sound speed Only when there is this [strength dominance] gap in battle can the [power level] that the realm should have. If there is no [strength dominance], it means [you are a miscellaneous soldier], [you are a stronger miscellaneous soldier], or [you have not yet entered the threshold of strength], [you have not yet started]. No matter what the situation, the author strives to create a [magnificent] world! As for the current situation, it can only be said that it is "not smooth". I personally understand this as "the pig's feet have not yet entered the gate of strength and realm, that is, they are not in the flow." The Pig's Knuckle Team is now just a slow and directionless survivor without seeing the world clearly]

Since it is a rebirth, I suggest that the protagonist should give full play to his advantages as a reborn person. In The Super Mechanic, the author always reveals the later plot and the advantages that the protagonist can bring to the fore, and the description of the fights in these important plots should be more delicate It's best to reveal the outline like Super God Mechanic. In the first copy, we know that there will be the enemy World Tree in the later stage. This is a climax and will attract readers. If you continue writing like this, these small copies may make readers feel tired. Now after reading your book, I know that the humans will fight against the Zerg in the later stage. This is a good copy. Keep writing well! Also, after reading your article, I have some feelings about myself. There is a lot of room for improvement. The shortcomings are: 1. The protagonist has obviously occupied several opportunities. How come the Qianlong team suddenly appeared and has become an official supernatural being like the protagonist group? If it is reasonable in the early stage, it can become an official extraordinary. I feel that it should be the kind of official power and big conglomerates who use human resources to pile up. How come four supernatural beings, the Jiang brother and sister and Qianlong Xiao, suddenly appear. 2. Could you please tell me the star rating of the extraordinary profession? Then I can't figure out whether the protagonist's profession has more advantages or others are more powerful. Also, if there are eight stars, nine stars or ten stars, can you make it clear which profession is the strongest? The protagonist will not encounter a nine-star profession in the future and be hammered to the ground! These two points are still the same as the sentence: where is the protagonist's strength and where is the leading advantage? Can we first use every opportunity in the article to reveal the later opportunities? As the protagonist of a rebirth stream, your advantage is that you know all kinds of events and opportunities. In the most successful rebirth streams I have read, without exception, the protagonists have very clear plans for their future, and the dungeons are well connected. Small dungeons are interspersed with large dungeons (herein referred to as the climax, commonly known as the highlight moment of a certain protagonist). The problem you are stuck in now is Small copies come one after another, and you don't know what level you will reach in the end, and you don't know if there will be a large copy. In this case, you will not be able to attract more readers, and at present, your various small copies are the same and everyone will be tired in the end. This is also the most important reason for the decline in your subscription data, not piracy. If you pursue quantity without ensuring quality, you will not be able to reach a higher level (I know you don't blame me for standing up and talking without backache, sorry I am lying down 🤓) It is very difficult to pursue quantity while pursuing quality. It depends on how you choose. I suggest that the author should clarify the next ideas, commonly known as organizing an outline. I really don't want a book with potential to end up unfinished

I feel that the author's book is inconsistent. In the front, he says that the protagonist's profession is very powerful, but in the back, he feels that he is no different from others. He has received so many opportunities, and there are people similar to him everywhere. The epic equipment and the runes of heaven and earth are also not strong. After getting so many good things, the protagonist feels that this one is similar to him, and that one may not necessarily win. He only pretends to be cool in his heart, and is a coward on the outside.

I would like to make some suggestions. The rhythm of the story is pretty good now. Please don't turn it into an online game-type article that keeps grinding monsters and upgrading. More content about daily life and popular science about the ocean can also increase the appeal and create the characteristics of an ocean survival adventure. The following is the content of the article that I personally want to read. If you don't agree, just pretend I didn't say it. I think the content of global sailing-type articles should be more diversified (to increase my knowledge) and not to focus on killing, adventure and upgrading throughout the article. The writing style should be broad and powerful. There are many magnificent wonders and scenery on the ocean, and transitions can be used. I don't really like the protagonist leading a big force (because it involves many people, and the description of events often has many flaws) Happy New Year!

The book is good-looking, and the main character is not that big of a hero. It is quite common sense. The world of sailing is so big, there are trillions of opportunities, and everyone is adding fuel to the fire. There must be many masters who can fit the worldview created in the book. Compared with other works of the same type, they all fail at the beginning, and it is easy to run out of things to write later.

Stargrazer is actually very good. If updates keep up, the results should go up.

There are obviously so many opportunities, why do so many people have the same strength as the protagonist 🤔

The protagonist is such a big loser. I really can't figure out why so many people have reached or even surpassed the protagonist.

A world as majestic as Star Sweeper is gone? I promised not to be a eunuch.

I can watch all the free ones, but now I pay to watch your paid ones. No matter how slow the update is, I will be sorry for my small money! Let's talk about guarding against theft. If you don't guard against theft if you are a tentacle monster, you will get better results! The overall novelty is well written! Come on and update more, I will use my tickets to buy your updates 🤝

It is best for the author to write less about the country. There is nothing interesting about the country, unless your writing skills are very good. Also, writing less can avoid making mistakes, and there is no need to think too much about avoiding lightning. The starting point is very strict, and if you do it a little bit, you may get a seal.

Star Sweeper is actually a good book. If the author didn't insist on it, he would have died. It's a pity that a good book is still on the bookshelf. Hey, it's a miracle that a book written like this can become popular.

I found a problem, the demigod's body is thirty meters, his explosive step is ten meters... And he can teleport... He can't go even one step far... Don't you consider upgrading? Otherwise, I don't dare to think about the picture. If I don't change it, I won't be able to see it anymore😓 It's outrageous. When I look back, it's really outrageous. If a person's body is 100 meters away, you can dodge ten meters to thirty meters, and you'll hit someone when you reach out. I suggest multiplying the displacement by several times the National People's Congress

If I ask for leave again, I will definitely not be given another chapter a day and next month. . .

So far, the overall situation is good, the author has kept the pace, and it is considered a good book.

I don't quite understand why many authors like to have a companion at the beginning? It's either a fat guy or a girl. I haven't conceived the plot. Should I let the supporting character start the plot?

As a new writer, the author is relatively good, but there are many poisonous points. First, the male protagonist has always been a nanny. When he sees a beautiful woman, he has +100 favorability, which is more likely to be killed by men. Straight men are cancer, and the emotional scenes are poorly written. Second, I got goosebumps when I watched "Fu Di Mo". Third, the protagonist group was upgraded quickly. I didn't grasp the rhythm well, it was just about to take off, and then it started to be leisurely and leisurely. It's not unreasonable that the male protagonist was a waste in his previous life, and he was reborn, and he turned into this slut. As of now, I feel like it has started but ended. Fortunately, the subject matter has been relatively popular in the past two years, so I haven't gotten tired of it yet, and the results are pretty good. Now the four teammates are all tool men, and none of them stand out. It seems that more teammates are needed. It obviously feels that the author is having a hard time writing it, and he is not very looking forward to the subsequent plot. Finally, I hope that the author can break through himself, become a god in one book, marry Bai Fudi, and reach the pinnacle of life.

Well, it has been more than 24 hours since there has been an update, no leave, no statement. The so-called decline in grades, don't you think this happened more than once or twice? This has proved that we can no longer have even one ten thousandth of expectations for this book. Personally, the remaining trust and patience in my heart have been worn away time and time again. This book can only be put on the "Morning and Evening Eunuch" bookshelf. If it is updated, read it. If it is not updated, just leave it. There is no need to stick it to the top of the bookshelf. Recommendations, monthly tickets, and rewards are not necessary. The rest is up to the author.

It's really tiring for people to watch updates like this🥵

Students do not deceive scholars 🙂🙂🙂

🙂All booked. So far, the plot, content, theme, and setting are all very good and in line with my taste. Come on, author, please update, don't be a eunuch! ! Recommended tickets and monthly tickets are given to you

The author wants to get good grades and look at what others do! In the past, his 2 updates were ranked between 1 and 2 hundred, but now he is close to 100 🤝 It's just a suggestion, not a requirement, for fear of scaring you into writing as a eunuch

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The setting of this book is particularly strange. It is repeatedly said later that under gunboats, no matter how strong you are, you will only be like that. In this case, what's the point of being extraordinary? Why not follow the legion stream? The protagonist pursues an extraordinary state of reality, which is just a joke under the gunboats There is also development power, and it depends on the gunboats of the Galaxy Alliance. If you want to be on equal footing, according to the author, it will be gone if you mobilize hundreds of steel armored ships, so why do you do this?