Journey to the Stars

Crush the darkness with thunder. I hope I will have this sentence when I write it later. I feel more excited, so the author should give it my best!

I'll give you two monthly passes and give it a try.

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The author came out and asked if this chapter can be republished

The subject matter of this book is still very good, but there are very big problems in the character relationships and plot handling. 1. A couple in name only after getting married less than half a year ago. Logically speaking, I haven't had much contact with her, and I don't have much affection. I mentioned in the previous article that I was "even a little afraid of her", but then I looked like I cared about her and directly called her my wife? Just kiss someone's sister directly? Including later saying that my sister's talent is not good, and a few chapters later saying that she was given potions, and it is not difficult to break through with her talent (it was mentioned before that talent has little effect on breaking through the first level), it is inconsistent again. I don't know what the meaning of the character sister is. 2. My wife's father said, "My daughter is so talented that she can't get married and let her get married!", And reluctantly explained the reason why the protagonist got married (in fact, the daughter with high talent will not be in a hurry to get married, and he also said that women will get married before breaking through the first level) It will have an impact. To say the least, even if you want to find someone to marry, with Luo's talent and the background of the Luo family, it won't be difficult to find someone with better talent? Do you have to find someone with no status in the family and low talent like the protagonist? ), I saw that Sanyang Body directly agreed to the marriage. 3. It is said that the uncle's family is very good to the protagonist, but the uncle's family are not mentioned many times in the whole text. He treats his wife's sister and her friends, whom he has known for less than half a year, better than his uncle. In fact, it doesn't matter if you don't write about the uncle's family. Then please don't give your sister so much plot. Later, in the coastal city plot, he just made a phone call to inform his uncle, and rushed to protect his sister in person. In the protagonist's heart, his uncle's family is not as good to him as a person he has known for about three and a half years? 4. It is said that the protagonist's brother's family has great power, but the brother is not taken seriously. Why and how can he join the mysterious organization where he found it? 5. Why is Su so nice to the protagonist? The protagonist is just an apprentice. Even if the protagonist is asked to help her fight for resources, it can be regarded as a transaction. There is no need to be so nice to him. Not to mention that the protagonist has an affinity with the thunder attribute. She can ask Master Stargrabber to rescue the protagonist. How difficult is it to find someone with the thunder attribute? Since the protagonist has borrowed the high-grade star stones to buy things to improve his strength, why not go directly to Su's small vault to get those good thunder-attribute items. They will pay them back later anyway, and this period of improving his strength is particularly good. 6. The plots of the female characters are all weird. Why do they have to block attacks for the Holy Maiden of the Phoenix? Why did you save her before? Emotional scenes are written in a mess. If you don't have the ability to write a harem, don't write one. Write one first. This book can be read by skipping the emotional description. The author should write less about women in subsequent chapters and focus more on improving the protagonist's strength.

After seeing 50, if I accept this kind of husband and wife relationship, it is simply very toxic. I am most afraid of the kind of relationship that usually means no contact, and will try my best to save someone if something happens, and then they will look at each other. It is super disgusting and outrageous. This book looks very good, a bit depressing, but it shows the helplessness of little people. Reading different books at different times will have different feelings. If it was before, I would feel aggrieved, but now I can only say that it is okay and acceptable.

This book is a bit like mortals. Mortals are mediocre in the early stage, but start to exert their strength and become gods in the middle stage. The difference is that the early stage of this book is very encouraging, and the subject matter is easy to retain. From the middle stage, it is extremely exciting, and it is obvious that the author's strength is getting better and better.

One person wrote a letter in blood requesting to suppress his ex-wife's family. This cuckold can't stand it.

The out-of-circle index is so low, highly recommended

The front is not very good, but the back looks pretty good after not licking the dog.

Can anyone tell me, after reading a few chapters, it was said that Level 2 can make you invincible in coastal cities, but within a few chapters Level 2 can only be used as an escort on the train? There are still 3 copper coins for a day's living expenses for a family, and a mobile phone of 299 copper coins... Is this already broken...

There are many ways to eliminate the woman named Luo. Why do you use this method? This will really disgust the readers 😥

The subject matter is good, the first part is pretty good, but the second part is not so good. I join forces in a daze without knowing anything. At least you need to know what price you have to pay and what you can get. There is also a protagonist who really can't make friends like this. He doesn't even ask the protagonist about his wishes. He just introduces the situation and directly makes the decision for the protagonist to join the force. Even if he is a good friend, he has made decisions for his friends without authorization many times. Those who disrespect their friends like this will sooner or later turn against each other and become enemies. Withdraw first!

If you don't know how to write about feelings, don't write about it. It's really against your will to write about it, and it's hard to persuade someone to quit!

The front part doesn't look good, but the back part is very good. I will keep following it. The author just needs to maintain his level and update more.

I read the book reviews if I didn't feel right, and was immediately put off. In this day and age, there are still people who imitate Mr. Jin and cuckold the protagonist. Not to mention you, the author, even if Mr. Jin were resurrected and wrote a cuckold book, he would still be in trouble. Fortunately he wrote it decades earlier. Otherwise, he will also be a loser author.

Please revise the previous chapter quickly. I just said that a family does not necessarily have a first-level star-grazer. Most of the deans of the star-grazer academy are only first-level star-grazers. Later on the train, when the villain was causing trouble, he said that there were only Level 2 Star Reavers guarding the train, and then started to find trouble with the protagonist. Just because you said it is so rare and precious in front of you, is it starting to get messed up in the back? ! ! This plot is too poisonous. I heard it would be better later, but the first few chapters really discouraged me from doing so. I really can't stand it anymore, so I'm posting this.

It's hard for you to become stronger, and you bring a family of relatives and friends with you. I'm not selfish, but you have too many ties. You don't have parents, and you have a wife who is in name only and has not appeared in hundreds of years. There is also a sister-in-law, and a lot of unimportant characters. After writing, the author even forgot how many relatives and friends he had in the early stage, and they didn't appear in the later stage. So why did you write about him in the early stage...

Is the author female? A friend writes like a best friend, it makes my scalp numb.

The protagonist has always been given the label of being calm, but then when he went to fight monsters in a dungeon for the first time, he became ignorant and acted randomly. If he were really an ordinary person, it would be okay to be so brainless. However, since the protagonist comes from a small family, would it be okay to be such an idiot?

It's a very good book. It's a eunuch.

It is really a good book. I suggest the author pick it up, polish it and continue writing. If the author can persevere, this book will definitely have a place at the starting point.

All monthly passes have been given, please update soon.

Personally, I think it's very interesting. Good luck to the author. 1. I like such a huge world. Every world is fresh and fun, and I feel like I won't get tired of it even after 10 million words. The setting of clones is great; the population is measured in trillions, the lifespan of a looter is millions of years, the family is millions of years old, and Su Yan's cultivation and seclusion at the second level is measured in years and decades, which is unclear. 2. I like the character of the protagonist Su Yan. He is cautious, low-key, flexible and adaptable, and does not care about the judgment of others. Unlike Long Aotian, who rushes around all day without thinking, yelling to fight and kill, his dignity is above all else, and he adopts the beautiful girl as his younger brother without thinking. 3. Brother Zhao Yang is very interesting and I look forward to Su Yuezhi's next development. 4. Personal opinion, the only thing I don't like about Luo Yanxi's plot is that it's abrupt, like the brainless dragon Aotian. Fortunately, the Luo family is offline. Just survive the Luo family plot.

So far, the writing is very good, the world view is very grand, the combat power system is not bad, the writing style has improved a lot compared to the beginning, and I can see that the charm of the book has been reflected now. In short, the overall evaluation is not bad. Ps: It's just a bit short

The monthly ticket has been given. Although it is a small one, it is indeed the first monthly ticket I gave out at the starting point. I had watched it for free before, so I didn't order it. Sorry, haha(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

I heard that the author was going to stop updating, and I was so scared that I hurriedly bought the original version.

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I saw this book during a limited-time discount. It was not free at the time, and then I ordered it. I read it until about two o'clock in the morning. I really couldn't wait for the limited-time discount because it was so well written. I hope the author will update it more in the future. It's not enough 🌹🌹🌹

Didn't the recent chapters describe the Fallen Angels' invasion of Kyushu World? Kyushu World is a large world after all. I think if the protagonist reaps the benefits, he can let his own power Xingxiu Palace come forward to help Kyushu World tide over the difficulties. After that, the Xingxiu Palace can develop in this large world. Although the Jiuzhou World is a new interface to the large world, it must have its specialties. Isn't the Jiuzhou Cauldron the representative? Directly let the endless master of the Xingxiu Palace come forward. With the cowardly character of the fallen angel, he will definitely not dare to fight after knowing that it is the Eastern China World. Wouldn't it be better to obtain the resources of a large world? It could even make the Kyushu world a subsidiary world of the Oriental China world. As long as Su Yan reported it, he would definitely make a great contribution. Why doesn't the protagonist have this idea?