Xuanmu Xianyuan

Except for the slightly poor description of the fighting, the other contents and plots are better than those of ordinary immortal novels. They have flesh and bones.

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I just feel that the setting is a bit confusing. If the first level corresponds to Qi training, the second level corresponds to foundation building, and the third level corresponds to Zifu, etc., It would be nonsense to casually kill second-level monsters during the Qi training period.

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Beautifully written. Cheers to the author.

Every chapter is so "short and weak!". The number of words is too watery

One chapter is 1,000 words, that's not okay! There should be no problem with the setting, the writing is not too bad, don't have any poisonous points, adjust the structure, chapters should be merged and merged, read more books by great masters, you can't control it in the early stage, what the master writes, you should also write, at least the plot of each chapter must move forward.

The content has little to do with the title of the book, it's a twist.

Weird family tradition... At the beginning, I thought the prices were great! It's not easy to build a foundation and not operate together, but separate the mountains...

Really, this novel is well written, but the introduction is not very good, but it looks good. I read it in one sitting.

After seeing the seventh level of foundation building, I didn't want to read anymore. It must be that the author is too lazy to upgrade the skills and write something meaningful. How can something written without care be different? How to write something new? It's the same routine all over the internet!

It's well written, not a harem novel at all

Who is the main character? I haven't seen it after reading a few chapters

Doesn't this resume sound like a novice's article from ten years ago? ? Farewell

After reading Chapter 110, the protagonist barely has any foundation. This is a rhythm that requires thousands of chapters.

Two recommendation votes every day, cheers for the author😄

This is a writing practice, and there is no cheat code for the rebirth system. The sense of immersion is a bit poor. The map also has no sense of substitution of ancient Chinese names. Of course, there is no mention at the beginning that both parents are dead and there is a younger sister, haha.

In this world, the most indispensable thing is to fight on the street

This was too hasty, so it was just over.

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Not bad. The writing is just stiff and lacks a sense of empathy. I feel like there is a discrepancy between the introduction and the content

The story is quite interesting, adventure group of 5

J crewLL Good medicine but bitter taste

Just looking at it! Why did it end suddenly? Is it the finale? Or is it the end of the chapter? It's too scary! ?

Mortal Stream"Half Demon Immortal Fate" uses treasure land to promote books The protagonist's IQ is now, not a stud

This plot is so fascinating, it's a bit like a short play

The book is a good book! I just didn't handle the relationship between the characters well! The names we call each other in the relationship are so confusing

So what is the protagonist's golden finger? It feels like any elixir will be found by the protagonist. There is no reason for anything. It's very confusing.