The Etiquette of Soldiers Is to Open up When They Meet

I'm reading it. As a bookworm of 12 years, this book is still relatively good, at least much better than most of the writings I started with. It's a good book to pass the time, although it still has flaws. I don't know what the author's original intention was in writing the book, but if you feel depressed because a website is so short that your application failed, then your ultimate goal of writing the book must have deviated. Everyone knows that writing a book is tiring, but we must also know that there are thousands of authors, but only a few are outstanding. Your first goal should be to write a good book, practice your writing skills, and lay a solid foundation for writing. Finally, I wish you can improve your writing skills and reach a higher level.

The attributes of the characters in this book are average, and there are points given by the system for upgrading, but they give up all spellcasting professions, and also give up highly adaptable professions such as monks, to work as warriors. I will say that warriors are more balanced later. . . . Even the warriors of Yamaguchi Mountain are pitiful people.

Since I can add attribute points, why am I still restricted from being a spellcaster? Others don't know that the protagonist can take up the mage profession. Isn't it clear to the protagonist himself? Hey, can't attribute points only be added to physique and strength, but not intelligence? (Because the reason why the protagonist cannot be a mage in the article is because of insufficient intelligence). Besides, the protagonist has an attribute panel. The mage profession requires intelligence, but won't the protagonist work harder and make progress through diligence? (In the novel, it is not reality, and it will never succeed no matter what).

The title of the book was based on a reckless man, but it turned out to be a protagonist with a low IQ. Such a hot-blooded title is for nothing 🤫

I skipped the chapters without the protagonist. We are still in the early childhood stage of this book. Before the protagonist has penetrated into the reader's mind, if the author still writes a lot about supporting characters and subplots, people will soon forget about the protagonist and go straight to the drama. Skipping too many chapters means abandoning the book decisively.

It's too cumbersome to write

Ask if there are tadpoles looking for their mothers in the back? And his parents are not dead. If so, see you later

I don't understand why Pig's Foot has the obsession to go home. He was an orphan before time travel, but after time travel, he has family and friends who have inherited the feelings of the original body. There are extraordinary powers in this world, and the talent is also very good. No matter how much you think, it is impossible to have the obsession to go home.

After reading Chapter 85, I felt there was something wrong. In fact, there is no problem if I want to go home or have a relationship scene. As for the protagonist who seems to be developing into a light-armored unit, I feel that the author himself has been influenced by the demon hunter and wants to shape the protagonist into a Ye Qi type. The main problem is that many things written by the author feel intuitive. For example, in the chapter about the beast tide, you wrote a long paragraph about crocodiles in the moat. First of all, isn't this city in the North? The moat has hair to keep it frozen? Crocodiles are still ordinary beasts. Can you tell me whether ordinary crocodiles can live in the cold zone, or whether they heat the moat every winter to protect the crocodiles. Another point is that the Empire wanted to develop the Forest of Bones, but it ended up building a fortress for almost fifty years, and then nothing happened. I started to think that the forest had few resources, but later the author wrote that it was rich in resources, so I think the people in the Empire were stupid and didn't directly develop it, or the other three sides of the Empire were constantly at war and had no energy to do it. Not to mention that there are many monsters in the forest. The highest combat power is silver, which describes high-speed self-propelled artillery. Then your army is obviously at the level of a battle and you can't defeat a forest, not to mention that you also have silver. Then there is the strange career system. It started out as a normal DND career system, selecting mages with high intelligence, but then you tested a magic tendency, and it turned into a traditional Western fantasy novel. Then you told me that the priests here use holy light and require affinity with the light element. Then your evocation mages here cannot use light magic. The main god of the Holy See of Light is a god of light elements. Those who do not believe in it cannot use light magic. Besides, your use of magic is related to intelligence, not perception. Finally, there is the Holy See of Light, which is a polytheistic religion. The priests of the God of War also use Holy Light, and the priests of the Goddess of Love also use Holy Light, right? Oh, I understand it is used for harmony, right?

Insufficient experience and too many poisonous points. 1. After getting the system, there was no digging at all, no leveling up, and other than life and death fights, the protagonist did not actively try to gain experience in various ways. Goldfinger is wasted 2. The emotional scene is too awkward. It is written for the sake of writing. If you are not skilled, you can get through it. 3. Adding attribute points persuaded me. I actually added points for balance. Everyone knows that the higher the attribute, the more powerful it is. When you reach 20, you will have expertise. It is actually added to three attributes on average. One warrior also added the attribute of perception. . . Deliberately lowering my IQ, I can't stand it anymore.

The title of the book is interesting, come on, come on

Everything else is okay, but the emotional scenes are just too toxic. Including the feelings towards the missing parents, what kind of psychological fluctuations does a person with basically no memory have? The heroine is even more inexplicable. I guess the author wants to push the issue of the protagonist's soul fusion, but despite the author's verbosity in other aspects, there is absolutely no description in this aspect. What is the result of soul fusion? Who do you prefer more? How much of the original owner's feelings have been inherited? Didn't say anything

Poison, dead! The author's writing is still acceptable. If you can stop describing and explaining randomly, then this book can still be read. The number of random description words in this book accounts for at least 70%, and the effective plot number is estimated to be only about 20% In other words, the author has written something that can be explained clearly in 200,000 words into 1 million, which is also amazing.

It was extremely uncomfortable to watch. The author is not lacking in ability. There are many descriptions, but he couldn't grasp the key points even after writing a lot. I could skip dozens of pages in this book, and then I could understand what the author was writing after reading the rest. The settings and descriptions are very good, but there is really something wrong with the writing. It's very uncomfortable to watch. It's too draggy. The plot is too stretched. It's really uncomfortable to watch. It's really uncomfortable to say it again.

The biggest problem with the author is that he likes to explain some incomprehensible points in long explanations, which greatly affects the coherence of reading. When I read books, I like to see interesting stories and different worlds, rather than various popular science explanations in half a chapter. Obviously, the plot can be written clearly in three to five chapters, but it has to be explained a lot in the article, and it takes more than ten chapters to finish. . .

After reading more than 600 chapters, I'm sorry that the main character is still Black Iron, who can fight against gold. This kind of strength does not match the combat power. I am also speechless and have not improved. The main plot is a bit speechless and I can't watch it anymore.

I came to the book review area and took a look. It turns out that I am not the only one who feels unwell. I thought I was too picky about reading. I left with peace of mind.

I was attracted by the introduction of your book title and have read Chapter 20. Does your style have anything to do with warriors? The segment punctuation is also inexplicably uncomfortable, and the plot drags on. The same is true for characterization. I want to portray the protagonist's personality too much, but it has no other effect except the word count.

As a man, shouldn't the aesthetic of tall and strong be the mainstream? This isn't a girl's video, it's showing off some sissy protagonists one by one.

The protagonist of Forever Black Iron has to suppress the level if he can't write anymore. It's boring.

Author, you really don't need to write about the protagonist's obsession with returning. Why return to Earth? Start a war between two worlds? Then the earth will be beheaded infinitely, and you will be the chairman to resist the invasion of other worlds, and then lead the people of the new earth to the extraordinary path. Or can you suppress both worlds and go back to being an ordinary person? Furthermore, in the fantasy worldview, do you want to write about gods? If gods are involved, it will be even more troublesome for you to return to earth. If you don't become a god, you will be just a big fat person on earth. So many gods are watching. After you become a god, you won't eat such a large piece of meat yourself and won't let others eat it. What's wrong with that?

Not until Chapter 96. The plot is too boring and full of water. The relationship between the characters is also handled slowly. If the woman doesn't like it, she will reject it, and if she likes it, she will accept it. A person who shows his love so obviously, but the protagonist is still so dilly-dallying after 96 chapters. If you don't have the writing power, don't write in such a sluggish way, it's very disgusting. I also don't tell the truth to my adoptive parents and look for excuses every day. Why did he commit murder and arson, or did he say he would die if he went out? When the World of Warcraft massacre happened, we didn't need to worry about the extraordinary confidentiality conditions, and we didn't talk about it? To whet our appetites? In such a dangerous world, it is also a world that is beginning to recover. The plot is all watery. There are too many descriptions of the environment and the characters' hearts. After watching too much, I will feel tired. This book is watery, has too many redundant descriptions, and is a little bit poisonous. But the people watching were speechless. Don't describe things too much if you don't have the penpower, just be direct. Otherwise, it will feel too speechless.

The title of the book is Warrior, but it turns out it's written as a monk + a ranger. Light weapons don't penetrate armor and rely on dodge to fight. Firearms are no problem, but even in the age of firearms, warriors should be heavy-armored, close-quarters soldiers, and head-shot trench machos. Why have they turned into light-armored rats running around all over the place?

The further you go, the more you feel that the protagonist is actually dispensable. Anyway, most of the whole book is spent writing about other characters. Even a fugitive can be written dozens of times to write about a major event. The protagonist is used as a background throughout the whole story. The more I read the whole book, the more I feel frustrated.

The path of the Paladin with high perception and perfection. These two are branches of warriors, especially the Paladin, which is the warrior of many golden fathers.

Every time the protagonist comes to the scene, it's just right.) How can there be such a coincidence in the world? It's a little bit of an inside job. It's better to just write it off.

It's been 5 years. I've been reading it since you started writing it. It's a book I really like. Have you not finished it in college after so long? 😭

Will you publish new books? If you don't send it, I will cancel it!

Does anyone know if the author is still writing books? Do you have a new vest?

I just saw the climax, why do I think it's not ordinary water when the title says climax?