Reflection Door

I don't know what you are trying to do is to make up the word count or to express something.

It's so well written. The cruelty and danger of the world slowly permeate from daily life. If you just go around the street, you can feel the mutual squeeze and undercurrent of all the forces in the world (it reminds me of the feeling of playing New Vegas. I can feel the anxiety of war everywhere even if I don't run the main line and stay out of the matter). The writing is excellent, and there are often some dry humor and strong sarcastic quotes that make people laugh. For now, the full text reflects a strong sense of separation, anxiety, or dislocation, which makes people feel that all readers are far away from the truth, that everything around them is abnormal, and makes people want to doubt everything around them, from their own identity to their sister's behavior, to everything that seems unreasonable from the beginning. All kinds of details, when this sense of dislocation becomes more and more intense, can people feel it. This is called gram. The real gram does not need to describe too many disgusting monsters, or death and evil. It only needs to make you feel this mysterious dislocation - the raging darkness hidden under normal rationality, and that is already half the battle. I still remember that there was a highly praised answer on Zhihu about how to decorate a room that smells good. The guy said, find a room and seal it completely with cement, leaving no light in. Just leave it there and live with it every day, but you will never know what horror is brewing inside. This hazy feeling of being inexplicable and seeing things through but not telling them off, continues to this day, which really makes people feel chilly. I don't rule out that the author's style will change in the future depending on the plot, but now I have to say, the taste is really right! The plot is currently advancing slowly, but this slowness does not mean that the amount of information is not large. In fact, the amount of information is huge, giving us a little understanding of this cruel and beautiful world. In short, it's hard to say now, but I think it's definitely a promising future, so keep up the good work.

The writing was messy, the front part was pretty good, but the back part was a bit mediocre. I didn't get any enjoyment out of it, nor did I have any sense of involvement, and I had no expectations. Is it because updating two books at the same time distracts the energy? It feels like I'm just following the outline, but it's too dry. I originally thought this book would be drier at the beginning and then get better, with a faster pace and obvious conflicts. Who knows, it gave me the feeling that I had just reached a good state, and then continued to slump. It's not fun to get. And I don't quite understand what the protagonist means. In a world with mysterious powers, I don't think status is particularly important. Just like Einstein, did he still need to be in politics and go to work to gain social status and money? It feels like an urban (I don't know if it counts) story forcefully disguised as fantasy. A bit like Kosma's dog-tailed ferret. I think an author should have confidence that the next book will be better.

Author, please awaken your soul of long chapter names quickly. My soul of long chapter names cannot disappear just like that. 😆😆😆

What can I say? I can only choke in silence. Still looking forward to this book. For example, the plot about the younger sister and everything else, it's really a pity. ╮()╭

Lao, do you look down on me, Du Lin? No one supports it?

I felt good about the last book, why don't I write it?

The new book by the author of Xma Empire is worth reading

The trilogy of Archpope, Renne, and Cosma has written a dark epic about religion, nobility and capital. I am here to declare a challenge. If you have the ability to write about proletarian militarism revolution in the next part, do you dare? I promise,

The author has admitted that he was wrong.

The most uncomfortable thing about this book is that the author foreshadowed it for the sake of foreshadowing. I don't know what other people think, but I think this is the poisonous point. For example, deliberately describing that the protagonist forgets something and loses some memories is definitely something, but it is too deliberate. This feeling is the same as when I saw the mysterious part, I didn't use my spiritual vision to see the evil spirits in the women's stomachs. It's all for foreshadowing, but it just feels very deliberate to me. From the beginning to now, I haven't understood the role of sister. Maybe she has something. Maybe it was just to provide the author with water for daily use. I find many of the descriptions in the article very strange. I don't know if they are meant to reflect my sister's weirdness or if they are simply being put down. For example, it was written many times in the article that Ciel would often become soft-hearted when seeing his sister, and he even did things like clearing dungeons alone. I think there must be something wrong here, so I don't understand why I wrote such a strange passage. Ciel was definitely knocked down. Because it is from God's perspective, we can know that Ciel must be cursed, but why has he never paid attention to issues such as his amnesia before? This is definitely intentional. There is also a section where Charles was interrupted because he thought about the embarrassing scene with Charlie that day. I have reason to suspect that Charlie was deliberately preventing Charles from exploring. Up until the free chapter, the place where it starts to get weird is after the Queen is stabbed in the back and then saved by Charlie. I really saw the feeling of mystery before. Because I haven't read the author's previous book, I can only compare the mystery side by side. Later, things started to develop in a strange direction. First I wrote a lot of daily life, and then my sister helped to open the harem. There must be something inside, but there is something strange that I can't explain. Just like the mirror thing, I felt an inexplicable and sudden feeling when I saw it. More than this, I don't remember much, but up to the free chapter, a large part of the feeling I felt when writing the article was that it was ironic, realistic, a lot of negative, and inexplicable. I don't accept refutation. You can disagree with me but don't try to convince me.

If you write about American gangsters directly and make up history, more people will read it. This one is not good-looking.

It's been a bit strange since the incident of assassinating the queen. First, the style of the painting changed from mysterious and dark to the feeling of a Japanese light novel???, And then the article has some incomprehensible prefaces and follow-up words. In addition, the author's car is driving faster and faster. How do I feel about reading pornographic novels again? I was really surprised at the beginning, the writing style and atmosphere are all perfect, but the style of painting just fell apart in the second part???

But I thought the writing was quite good up to the end of the queen's incident. There are more jokes, the protagonist's behavior is different from the previous one, the same is true for my sister, and my sister's classmates are also inexplicable. In the front, the protagonist is cautious in his words and actions without losing courage, but in the back, the interaction between the protagonist and his sister is awkward. When writing about the harem, you can't write in detail. The younger sister has to be included in most of the stories and then written as if they are not related by blood. There is no point in spending so much ink. Instead, focus on exploring the world and constantly getting stronger. Wouldn't it be nice to have the interaction with the younger sister as an embellishment? When the Kosma Empire arrived, the woman was also persuaded to give birth. However, the author's writing also has its audience, but it's just a bit depressing for me to finally find a book of my own and have to abandon it. Finally, I apologize for the possibility that my review may offend readers who have enjoyed this book.

The protagonist is a sister-controller, and everything is done for her sister. At first glance, it is like the awesome writing method used by the master. Anyway, all plot developments are based on the sister. The protagonist goes through all obstacles for his sister and does everything, even ignoring the curses and abnormalities on his own body. If the author later writes that the sister is actually a succubus queen, and the protagonist is a summoned tool man, who is physically and mentally enchanted by the captive, then I will immediately give it a thumbs up and give it a full subscription. The more I read this book, the more it looks like a pornographic novel on the M-series resource aggregation. Even the training scenes are completely sidelined, but the delicate description of the male protagonist's sexy physique and the desire to have sex as soon as he sees his sister is still in place, and it is suitable for pornographic movies 👍.

The original protagonist felt that he could no longer survive in this world and wanted to commit suicide. Before committing suicide, he was afraid that his sister would suffer more if she lived alone. He wanted to take his sister with him before he died, but his sister killed him instead. The younger sister learned alchemy, trained the human body, and resurrected her older brother. She is now the protagonist, and the older brother controls one. The resurrected protagonist, a modern reporter, has been resurrected with mysterious qualities, and is quite interesting so far.

In the first fifty chapters, I felt that this book would not last long. I can't say why. It was just my intuition. Based on my intuition after watching it for nearly ten years, and based on my understanding of the first two books, the positioning of the protagonist is too different from the previous two books. This means that many things need to be changed, even the basic style. This is not a good thing, and will directly affect the readers' senses and their own mentality. As for the reincarnation of the dirty land, I honestly don't think it is necessary. I really love Dulin's style. I hope the author will adjust it as soon as possible, and I look forward to the next book!

A certain 404 is completed. I am here to celebrate with this book. Thumbs up if you understand it. Thumbs up if you don't understand it.

This, the exemption is limited to two days and then restricted to the weekend. Is there a grudge between the author and the editor?

I feel like the author didn't think well and wrote whatever came to mind. Many places seemed too abrupt. There are also many small bugs. For example, at first it was written that it is easy to gain weight in urban areas, but later it was said that it is not easy to gain weight. At first, my sister couldn't go to Zhongcheng District, so Ciel didn't go either. Then my sister's classmates could live with them in Zhongcheng District. Ciel brought Haley in and gave her the key to pretend to be an assassin. If she was caught, wouldn't she betray Ciel? The author forcibly arranged for her to be taken away to cover up this shortcoming. To assassinate the Queen, Ciel killed the waiter, sprayed a lot of blood on his body, and then reported him dead. How could so many masters and guards not smell the smell of blood on his body? The monster that the great swordsman couldn't defeat 20 years ago was killed by his sister who had studied it for several years. Why didn't the Queen take Alchemy with her as a guard? What on earth did his sister do? The follow-up was also anticlimactic, and she went to investigate the demon sacrifice, which was also anticlimactic. There were too many, and the author didn't write it carefully at all.

I finished reading the latest chapter of Dulin Empire in the hut. It was so well written. There are few chapters that can catch up with Dulin Empire. I look forward to the day when Dulin becomes prime minister.

1. There is no plot at all, it is just like a running account, and there are only a few major plot points. I mentioned catering n times, I can't even count. There are countless metaphors for "like shit". Is this the only thing that comes to mind? 2. The author may want to deceive the readers. Just like some old-fashioned suspense novels of the last century, it is not the plot that deceives the protagonist, but the author who deceives the readers. There is a possibility, but I haven't finished reading it yet. If it is true, then many of the long-winded pages in the front will be as meaningless as a dream, because the purpose is just to deceive readers.

Why is The Blackstone Code so well-written, but the previous book has so many negative reviews?

I almost want to ask, would you blush if you were hugged by a stranger or a woman you have lived with for a while, or if you saw her naked body? At a loss? This feels real and fake, and it's not like the little boy protagonist didn't touch a woman before he died? This is even more nonsense. A man who plays adventure is more wild, and he is much better at playing with women than other people. It's great that you are blushing, upset, and generous. Why are you red?

I was shocked. The author is still continuing "Xima Empire", and then opened a new book, and also opened another one on an external website. Three books at the same time? ?

Extraordinary mystery. This book is a new book by the author of "Xima Empire". The background of the story is steampunk, mysterious and extraordinary, and it has a dark world view as always. The protagonist's original identity is a modern famous reporter. After being in an accidental car accident, he time-traveled into a young reporter who had just graduated from college. In order to make a living, the author once again engaged in news reporting and investigation work. As the investigation deepened, the protagonist gradually discovered another world hidden in the shadows. As an author who has always been highly praised, this book is still very good in terms of writing and plot design. There are no major flaws in the power system for the time being, and the readability is very good. ---Recommended by the official @hao "The Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Shuhuang" Come to us for the Shuhuang!!!

Finally Eunuch. Looking forward to the next book. I just finished the finale of The Empire of Xma.

I feel like this book is far worse than his last book, The Empire of Kosma.

I couldn't stand it after reading ten chapters. There was absolutely no sense or logic at all. An ordinary person used some skills he had practiced in his previous life to kill gangsters and beat other people's bosses half to death. And it was to find his sister.

With such a good worldview, why won't the author continue it?