Making Money Like Crazy in Football

Don't write about China, don't use football to insult China. Really, football is football and China is China. It's good to separate them. Don't mix them together. It's disgusting.

In fact, I still want to see European or South American players. In that case, it would be more reasonable to win the World Cup.

How do I put it? I started reading Dabu's books from Vardy, probably about two or three years ago. At that time, I had no conditions to read the pirated copies, but I felt that it was pretty good and lively. Later, when I was playing Quaresma, I felt that it was almost the same as Vardy, so I didn't read much. Now that I have created my own protagonist, I feel that Dabu's books have not changed much. It is all based on a seemingly absurd and funny entertainment system and a heart that uses tireless training and positive energy to change from one person's funny to a group of people's funny, but it still feels like there is no change, it is still the same way as before, which leads to the way people get along with each other when it is changed to a group of people's funny. Especially the description of the happy group and the background feels a bit childish. I don't know if it's a problem with the writing style or the arrangement of the characters. I think the characters should make readers cry and laugh together, but the characters written by Dabu seem to lack a sense of identity. I am not very talented and have poor writing skills, but I also hope that Dabu can write better works. I can chat and dialogue with the characters I write, and shape the characters with self-interested ideas or personalities. The supporting roles are also a very important part. Come on

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Grab the couch! Come on Dabu's new book!

Otherwise, write that the protagonist is a pure foreigner, and write that a Chinese represents a foreign country and wins the World Cup. Isn't it glorious? Disgusting as hell!

Waste of money, goodbye, the protagonist is just Long Aotian, I thought something has changed, but the result is still like this, flaws must be reported, the world must revolve around you, it stands to reason that the protagonists are almost like this, but why do you, the protagonist, become more and more annoying the more I look at it? You are also great. You always emphasize how hard the protagonist works, how much he wants to win, and so on, as if he is wronged. I don't know if you are just trying to figure it out. You always do some mentally retarded behavior and force yourself to be funny. You think you are an old coin, but in fact you are just a fool. For shaping the protagonist like this, you are really strong, author! Clothes!

I've read three chapters and it's out now, can anyone secretly give me any spoilers? Will you be able to get distracted on the field later without any problems? (We're not looking for trouble, and I'm not criticizing the author either. I know it's not easy to write a book, but I just can't stand the protagonist who keeps wandering off!)

There is no sense of immersion. I have read one in the sports genre called "Run Out of My Life". The early and middle stages are well written. I recommend you to read it. The only attraction of yours is that the protagonist can earn money, but the core motivation is ignored. He is not poor, he is not depressed, he is not under great pressure, he is not looked down upon and abandoned by anyone, and... Even if he immediately becomes the world's best player, he will not feel anything. I feel that climax is not the key, progress is not the key, and being proud of the greenery is not the key. The key is all the previous foreshadowing, loneliness, poverty, dissatisfaction, and then the process of hard work, and finally the so-called climax. Only such people's appearance in front of them will not be abrupt and will be wonderful. You have nothing to say at the beginning, and you immediately launch a Chinese heavy artillery. I can only say that I am indifferent. I even know immediately that you don't even understand the foreshadowing at the beginning, and the subsequent writing is even more casual and abandoned.

Old author, is this it? That's it? That's it? I was persuaded to quit by what you wrote in the first chapter. The protagonist is just a zz. Without the system, he will live his whole life. With the system 1vs21, he is still on Bayern's second team. The protagonist's mental state is the same as that of someone who has never played football 🙂