The Family's Path to Ascension

The plot is too blunt, and many parts are illogical and cannot withstand scrutiny. Especially in the chapters before and after it is released, it is obvious that there is no effort to think about how to write it to be logical. In this section of Fangshi, the mysterious old man at the sixth level of Qi training can accurately predict the protagonist's cultivation and future, which makes it somewhat baffling for his disciples to follow him. It's almost ridiculous to show up after the Thunder Fire Tempered Body. The person who was chasing him didn't care. He just wanted to kill him all of a sudden. The promotion of spiritual root cultivation was not rigorous enough. It was very difficult one level at a time, and it took a few years to go up. The man named Guo was weak when he escaped, and he had no description of his cultivation level. He could just spend money to practice qi to perfection to do things. Do you have this qualification? It's okay if you don't rob him. Will you cooperate with a powerful person just to take revenge? Wouldn't it be nice for him to have spiritual stones to improve his cultivation? There is also the trump card obtained by the protagonist. The stall owner who sold the Thunder Fire Beads picked up the Thunder Fire Beads and then picked up the wooden sign Xuan Qi Cultivation Technique. This gift was not taken seriously, so he just picked it up casually and sold it to the protagonist? I have tolerated all these loopholes. After they were put on the shelves, I really couldn't stand them anymore. It was an insult to my intelligence. The protagonist was struck by lightning. Holes were struck, rocks were struck, and pits were created. Was the injury serious? Can you just eat the spiritual fruit you gave me? The person who suddenly showed up to help just explained it in a few words? Are the six people chasing you still behind? Wouldn't it be too casual to draw the thunder power? Is it so easy to recognize someone without the knowledge of foundation building? Just twelve garbage-like fruit cores can lead to a lot of trouble? Isn't it too far-fetched that every time I buy something, I'll draw out the enemy's trump card, and if I sell something, the enemy will chase me? Can the logic of writing be more rigorous?

The writing is fresh and the story is clearly explained, and you can learn from the immortal alchemy system.

Well written, has the potential to become popular, stick with it✊

Novels about family cultivating immortals have been very popular in the past year, and some of them are really good. But some people were originally from the development family, but later joined the sect inexplicably. This feels a bit disgusting, cheating the starting point coins. I hope this book can seriously describe the family flow, and not later the protagonist becomes stronger, does not upgrade his spiritual veins, does not farm, and does not develop his descendants and goes to the sect to practice. Come on!

I only read two chapters and couldn't understand it 1. The eldest son of the ancestor royal family and the stable future emperor. If you want to become an immortal, you have to rely on yourself. What does it mean? It shows that the emperor in the mortal world is not valuable, or that the emperor of the ancestor is not valuable. Since they are not worth anything, they have been dead for three to four hundred years. How can it still affect the genocide war? It has been more than five hundred years, and whether the royal family still recognizes it or not is a question. Still being talked about and left in disgrace for thousands of years? It can threaten the number one position, causing the number one to be unable to dominate alone. What does it mean? It shows that it is not a problem for the Han family to remain in second place, so who is the second most powerful sect that came out later? And if the second one can dominate the first one, how can the first one be the only one? What is this all about? 2. Is there much Qi training in the family? Why not set the age requirement for Qi training higher and train more people? If it's more, why not let the protagonist stabilize his cultivation by just a few days? And those who have reached Qi training at the age of eighteen should continue to practice hard. The protagonist obviously reached Qi training before he was eighteen. Moreover, he is extremely talented and will achieve great results in the future. So you need to send the protagonist out to do work? Since even the protagonist has been sent out, it shows that there are very few Qi practitioners in the family. Then the age limit should be raised and more Qi should be cultivated. Even if it is a waste point, it is acceptable I really can't understand the settings

There are only two people guarding the family's southeastern medicine field. Isn't it too fake? There are also too few qi refiners in the family. At least they are basically at the first level of qi refinement.

Today, I found this book and saw that there is a prenatal period in it, also known as Xiantian. I don't understand it. Can't I just call it Xiantian? It's very awkward.

The main character's skills are too rubbish. Just by hearing the name, you can tell that they are mass merchandise. The clan leader's skills sound like high-end products, such as the Purple Sky Divine Thunder, or the World-Destroying Divine Thunder, Five Thunder God-Destroying Techniques, Purple Fire Heavenly Sword Technique, and Qianyang Lihuo Jue. These names are just upscale.

The Qi Refining Family is so awesome, even in the Baibao Pavilion, they can even investigate people using fake names. None of the four major foundation-building families dare to say that.

So wonderfully written! ! The author must write to 3000 chapters! ! ! ! I'm really looking forward to the following plot! ! ! Such a beautiful book must be considered a masterpiece! ! The author must keep writing! ! Come on! Keep up the good work! ! !