Forging the Divine Realm

One problem that comes to mind is that I always write about heroes. Heroes are about to rise, taking the first step and so on. Firstly, it will cause visual fatigue. In fact, there are not so many heroes in an era. Of course, I understand that the author wants to write about the time when all the heroes come together in a time of great chaos. Secondly, heroes should be able to do things that ordinary people dare not do and cannot do. Strength is only part of it, their ambitions, ideals, and actions are important parts of what constitutes a hero. In other words, a hero is not what you say he is, but what he does and says, he is. Take "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" as an example. When Cao Cao first appeared on the scene, he was Yuan Shao's follower, a figure who was invisible to everyone. Through the beating of eunuchs, the assassination of Dong Zhuo, the Battle of Guandu, and the previous counselors who voted for Cao Cao instead of Yuan Shao, and proposed ten wins and ten losses, Cao Cao's heroic image was gradually established. Zhuge Liang was very strong when he came out, and he had foreshadowing. He had songs and was recommended by Xu Shu. Moreover, after Zhuge Liang came out of the mountain, he immediately gained a record to prove his strength. Or take online novels as an example. Feng Jiuge in "Gu Zhenren" is a good example. As soon as he is said to be strong, he immediately uses the protagonist to escape from the dead. In the following, he builds a strong image by describing his past achievements, establishing a moral image by avenging his friends, etc. So far, the many heroes written by the author, including Bran, the Black Prince, the Son of the Viper, the Rose of Highgarden, etc., Cannot support the image of heroes. Only Tamerlane and the First Bow of the East China Sea can leave a deep impression. Ashukele is probably just a template for Yuan Shao and cannot be called a hero. In short, I think that when writing about a heroic character, you must at least tell us why this hero is a hero, what qualities he has that can be called a hero, what he said, and what he did. Instead of saying he is, he is. Secondly, you must be cautious when introducing new characters. They should be mobs. Characters with elite monsters must not be brought into the BOSS position. Important people must not appear out of thin air

The real Rome +10086

Neither holy, nor Roman, nor imperial

The author wants to write a fantasy novel with a medieval background, and then focus on fantasy, and put the historical background in a secondary position, emmm, I think, your title is Shinra, so the people who want to read this are probably mainly historical readers. For historical readers, history and fantasy are like dumplings with pineapples inside. People who like to read fantasy may not be familiar with the historical background of the Middle Ages and may be bored by the complex relationships and characters. So you are very likely to be unhappy with both sides. Of course, I didn't know the author's performance from the beginning, but I'm not very optimistic about it personally. I think there is a book that can be used as a good reference. I am Louis XIV. He also has a historical background and fantasy elements, but he is based on history and pays attention to details, and fantasy is just an adjustment. (Only represents my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it)

I skipped through it, but after reading dozens of chapters, I really didn't understand what the story was about. It felt like I was reading a dozen stories. I am also an old bookworm, and I can't figure out the development of the protagonist. When I think he is going to fall apart, he is not, and when I think he is the protagonist of a refreshing novel, he still wants to take the affectionate route. It is still the feeling that I don't take more steps and only take one small step. . . . . . Although I can't understand this novel, I was greatly shocked!

Come on, big brother who writes Shinra

I hope the author is happy every day. For now, you are no worse than some so-called great gods. What you need is an opportunity, and of course you need to have enough patience. I hope you can become famous instantly and I hope you can keep your original intention and work hard. As long as you work hard and persist, you will definitely succeed.

When I read the title, I really thought it was a historical article. After reading a few chapters, I realized that it had nothing to do with history. If the author likes fantasy settings, it is recommended to refer to the medieval warhammer settings, which will be much more reasonable.

Lord of the Three Rivers

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