The Unification of the Ninja World

I've read a lot of Naruto fanfics, but I haven't had the feeling of being fascinated by it. I felt really comfortable reading this one. Come on author! ! 👍👍

The writing is too messy and the logic is too poor. It feels like the author is the only one who cares about obscenity and is confused.

It is a rare and wonderful work. In terms of writing, the communication between the characters is relatively smooth and you can read it comfortably, which is quite rare But the plot and logic are quite awkward. Realistic logic and cool logic alternately intersperse the plot, catching you off guard and unable to feel what the protagonist is going to do next. It teases you from time to time, it's quite torture Those who have read less of this kind of books can try it. Forget it if you are an experienced reader, it will be quite confusing.

The root cause of so many tragedies in Hokage's Konoha is the corruption of the ordinary ninja clan's upper-level leader, the Hokage, and his advisors, as well as the peek at the power of the blood-successor ninja clan. As long as Sarutobi, Shimura, and Mito move to another place and these four clans are exterminated, Konoha will be much better.

Without Shisui and Itachi, these two iron fools, the Uchiha clan would not necessarily be exterminated. The reincarnated Orochimaru is not afraid of Konoha, he can kill three generations and still escape intact. Even if the Uchiha clan, which is n times stronger than Orochimaru, failed in the coup, most of the elites could escape. In the end, the clan was annihilated by Shisui and Itachi.

The author's writing is so messy. The first plot was okay. After the opening of Sandai and Senju, the smoothness of the whole plot dropped sharply. There were a lot of mindless dialogues. Moreover, I hope the author can clarify his thinking. Political struggle is not about selfishness and conspiracy. If you want to write a good political drama, at least you have to show the protagonist's political line to the readers. Just kill this and that. What is the reason for your struggle? That's not to say that you can't describe methods such as assassination, but if you kill people just to fight for power, the situation is too low. Is it really a village struggle for hegemony? ! Moreover, the protagonist's influence on the third generation has been over, right? With this level of struggle, I don't think the three generations can just let it go. Do you believe the protagonist? In short, if the author wants to write a passionate novel, he should write more positive descriptions, such as taking in a younger brother, protecting Konoha in World War II and Three, the bonds of companions, etc. If he wants to write about power and strategy, he should organize his thoughts. Unification will require bloodshed, and it cannot be just a battle between ninjas. If you don't develop productivity, unite the people at the bottom, win over a group of like-minded comrades, develop force, and propose a unified program, is it possible for you to unify the ninja world?

I have always watched pirated copies and never subscribed, but when I saw the postgraduate entrance examination results shared by the author, I felt inexplicably moved. As a middle-aged greasy man who no longer has dreams, when I saw the author's efforts, I felt that he should be supported. I hope that the author will persevere. I will fully subscribe and vote for recommendations. Come on, author😁😁😁🤝🤝🤝🤝

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There is a wave of Kakashi in Naruto fan fiction. I have read a lot of Naruto fan fiction, and they basically use Kakashi as the unit of measurement for chakra 😁😁

I would like to ask everyone, what are the measurement units in Naruto? What I know is (ಡωಡ) Chakra measurement unit - Kakashi Presence measurement unit - Aburame clan Money measurement unit - Asuma's bounty

There are 108 topics, at least 90 of them are trustworthy

This is not the Great Unification, but this is Konoha Grand Palace Dou, right?

Say important things three times I don't want a heroine, I don't want a heroine, I don't want a heroine Oye😂😂

It feels like the introductions are all from the Hokage series, so it would be even worse for Uchiha to die.

Reading the synopsis, I feel like the main character is like a licking dog and I don't want to watch it if he changes the fate of others.

The manga describes the Battle of Kanna-kun Bridge, and at the end it is said that the war between the Ninja World after this war ended, Konoha won the war, Minato made great achievements, Obito sacrificed, and Kakashi was given the Sharingan. This means that the end date of the Third Ninja World War is Konoha 47. According to the Book of Formation records, Namikaze Minato, the Fourth Hokage, was 24 years old (he must have been the Hokage at the time) and sacrificed his life to seal the Nine-Tails in the 48th year of Konoha. The Third Ninja War ended in the 47th year of Konoha, so Minato should have been 23 years old at the time. According to the description of the comics, after the three wars, Minato relied on his outstanding performance and strong strength in the Third Ninja War. After obtaining the unanimous consent of the Daimyo of the Land of Fire, Minato successfully became the fourth Hokage of the Konoha Ninja Village in the Land of Fire. In other words, Minato became the Hokage at the age of 23 or 24. Later, the Nine-Tails Incident broke out, Minato sacrificed, Naruto was born, and became a jinchuriki... Then the question arises! After the third war, Minato became Hokage. That is to say, Minato was not Hokage when Obito was alive. So when Obito made his determination to become Hokage in front of the statue of Hokage, there was already a portrait of the fourth generation. How to explain this?

Everything is in chaos later on, I suspect there is no outline First of all, we decided to unify the ninja world, so how about unification? Killing the protagonist to death inexplicably, to torture for the sake of torture, meaningless The previous combat power was broken, and then the protagonist was forcibly killed, then returned to the original main line, and finally everyone was resurrected. The meaning of this part is completely unclear

Can you control your emotions? I get angry and speechless at every turn. If I stay indifferent, I will die? 😅😅

You can try to establish a parliamentary system to check and balance the rights of Hokage and Shadow Assistant. I think most of the families will promote it with tacit understanding.

Wow, the Uchiha trio on the cover of the author's novel are smiling so happily (*˘˘*).｡.:*♡, I hope they can be like this in the author's novel.

Why is the protagonist named Uchiha Mitsuki? Isn't Uchiha Tsukimi good? Isn't it more in line with Japanese naming? I remember there was a naming website. I forgot what it was called. You could consider using this software to name a major character in this book.

The author's Naruto fanfic has a very touching flavor called warmth. I really like the author's fanfic. I hope the author will not give up. Of course, resting well is the most important thing.

It's so cool, hahahaha😄The biggest advantage of reading unpopular novels is that you can occupy the first place in the fan list by spending a little money. I really admire myself.

There is no place to vote for 2 monthly votes. Do you want it? It depends on your efforts😃

The Sharingan eye settings of the protagonist and his younger brother are so complicated. Will they both have the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan in the future?

There is no place to vote for 3 monthly votes. 😁😁 Author, it depends on your hand speed!

With your first order, monthly pass, and recommended vote, come back in a week to buy it!

Hurry up 🤓 I have a few more monthly votes, I don't know where to vote.

To be honest, I haven't read this book much recently, but you can't blame me if you didn't give me the monthly pass last month. Who said it wasn't on the shelves? Everyone is paying attention to this book, because you are faster!

It's a very good subject matter, but the writing is too messy, making it difficult to read.