The Son of the Strongest Magic Knight in an Empire

Finally someone writes about knights and magic -_-||

Suggestions 1. Change the title of the book. Make it shorter to make it easier to remember. 2. Change the introduction. There is a typo at the beginning of the introduction.

Some suggestions: 1: The author did not determine whether it is mecha or magic fighting spirit. It took too long at the beginning. If readers prefer the mecha route, the academy chapter has really exhausted the readers' patience. 2: If the author is worried that mechas will appear too early and there will be a lot less to write about, then the author, you can write for a long time on themes such as upgrading mechas from miscellaneous machines to special-purpose machines, transforming into Gundams, S-class Gundams, searching for materials, ancient gain magic circuits, squad patrols, small-scale frictions, rebel Hydra, national wars, dimensional invasions, etc. There is no need to turn the positioning into a magical and grudge plot. 3: If the magic fighting spirit is too strong, it will overwhelm the mecha. You can write the weakness of the magic fighting spirit. The mecha is like an ability amplifier. This way the power system will not collapse easily. If you want strong magic fighting spirit, you can write some ancient magic fighting spirit, but only for two or three people, so that the charm of the character will be more colorful. 4: The characters are too hodgepodge, and the reader's sense of substitution will become the original work, but the author can't write which one is difficult to handle. The above are some suggestions for the author. After all, I hope the author's works will get better and better.

Why write a love triangle? Oh my God, a good novel was ruined like this.

Magic modified flash rail, mixed with a little Fire Emblem

There are too many romance chapters, and the protagonist is not wary at all

I'm a bit blind. The male protagonist is so talented, but he doesn't work hard enough.

The first sentence was delayed for a long time without any trace of mechas or magic plot. It was just a daily routine, but in the end it turned into a bloody Korean love drama. . . I couldn't stand watching some of them. . .

After reading the last sentence of the introduction, I felt that he was not good. . . .

The writing is very relevant. Please change the name and introduction of this book to some popular keywords, otherwise many people will not read it.

The male protagonist's character makes me feel disgusting, like a licking dog

Just discovered this book! Come on in and take a look! Not bad😊Come on (ง •̀_•́)งauthor! Don't stop updating!