Doctor in a Steampunk World

It's really poisoning me. I've read almost 700 chapters. I wonder if the author's outlook is abnormal. The main character is disgusting and has double standards. He always emphasizes that he is low-key and causes trouble every day. He kills all the neighbors who are related to him except one. Nancy was killed by a female gangster. After that, the protagonist started to take revenge. After the revenge, he didn't have a long memory. In the middle, he even accepted a female branch. Girl, just accept it if you want. She also wrote that she has been played by many people, and even provoked those people in the protagonist's face, saying that she had played it and liked it very much. Summary: The protagonist has double standards, he is selfish, stupid and prone to committing crimes, and he cannot move his legs when he sees a woman. Decrease wisdom

I finished reading it all in one sitting. Let me briefly share my thoughts after reading it. First of all, the writing style is okay, the reading is smooth, and the paragraphs are divided into reasonable sections. The overall writing style does not affect reading at all. It is a writing style that I personally prefer. The most important thing about online literature is that the characters have distinct personalities and the stories are exciting and interesting. The writing style should be as concise and simple as possible, so as not to affect reading. The overall world background is based on Mystery and Cthulhu, which can be regarded as a Strange style in the wasteland. It seems that the author wants to create a grand world, but unfortunately his writing skills are insufficient and he is a bit imitated. However, Weird Jakxulu has enough depth to begin with so the overall feeling is not bad, it is watchable and not too poisonous. It's just the protagonist himself. The overall power system is very messy. Anyway there are so many tricks and various exercises. Every time the author keeps saying I have become stronger, I am stronger, and then every time I start the fight, the enemy is a little stronger than me, and then I still win. . . This has become a routine. Let's talk about the characters. First of all, this article basically focuses on the protagonist . I really like this main line progression mode. After all group portraits and multiple branches place extremely high demands on the author, and they can be a huge pitfall if they are not careful . However, it should be described entirely around the protagonist . Of course, the supporting characters, probably because of the lack of space, give a strong NPC feeling as a whole. Generally speaking, the character description in this book has no major pitfalls or bright spots, and is above the average level. Finally, let's tell a story. The world background of this book is quite majestic. Anyway, I saw that it has been updated to 1.8 Million words. The protagonist has not yet moved over the map, and the deep elements behind the whole world are slowly revealed. Personally, I quite like the content of the current story, and I have the desire to follow it. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better

I haven't clearly divided the strength until it was put on the shelves? It feels like the Star Absorbing Technique, which can absorb magic energy all the time without going offline. There should be rules at this time! The logic is not very good. It took a few minutes to absorb a nine-pole monster. The ghost's strength cannot defeat the two-gun knight. Coupled with the magic energy absorbed by the civil strife that broke out in the lower city, it still cannot defeat the two-gun knight! The total amount of magic energy erupted by a ninth-level monster and cult is something that even the title knight dare not accept. At this time, the ghost's strength has not been divided yet? Demon Warrior, Extraordinary, World of Warcraft. In the previous article, because the rules of strength were not divided, I only found out at the end that ghost shadows can not absorb magic energy online. A tenth-level monster rule designed at the beginning failed to see actual benefits. It was only confirmed that ghost shadows can quickly absorb magic energy from monsters! The energy absorbed by the ghost does not seem to benefit the main body, and the energy absorbed by the main body only relies on the magic circle! Isn't there a standard of measurement between the two? I don't understand this logic very well. I wonder how the author set it up? As for books with multiple female protagonists, my personal opinion is that there are too many of them now. The entire story progresses with a female character, and the two swords are clicked in another place. The artistic conception in the early stage will be too different! Overall, it's not too bad. If you are really short of books, you can still read it! It's just that there are indeed a lot of unreasonable things! Only personal comments

The protagonist who has tried poison is an extreme virgin. She is not suitable to survive in that dark age. It is recommended that those who have not fallen into the trap abandon the book.

Ready to stallion? Writing the protagonist as a pig brother who can't move his legs when he sees a woman fits the author's image very well. He is a female police officer, a neighbor's daughter in a slum, and the granddaughter of a retired gangster. I don't know what else will happen in the future.

The first few pictures seemed okay, but then I found that the protagonist's character was too idealistic and completely inconsistent with the survival rules of the world. The reading experience dropped drastically. I didn't read the rest of it and I guess this character is just like that~

Why do you have to hide your identity and act openly like a royal eater?

😥 Even though we have traveled through time, we still have to assume that black and yellow people are inferior people and are treated like dogs by foreign adults. Writers who like to write Western fantasy backgrounds seem to have this kind of oppression. Isn't this strong sense of inferiority still inescapable even in a fantasy world?

I thought Pigfoot was a principled person, but when I saw the bargaining when buying someone else's used book, he was a really bad character. Just because the real owner was away and his son didn't know the goods, you took the opportunity to buy someone else's precious knowledge. For three to four thousand yuan, you still had to bargain to a few hundred dollars to prove your intelligence. What's the difference between Ming and a liar and a robber? If the son is the master, it's okay. But you are like this when the father is not around. Think about it from another person's perspective. If your family encounters such a person, will you think that the other person is a bad person? Wouldn't it be better to give four thousand to maintain the bottom line of knowledge and morality?

He's a fucking shadow ghost all over his body, and he has a pair of fucking black eyes. Can you fucking see it, author?

After reading Chapter 25, the protagonist is identified as a dog licker. First of all, there is a girl named Nancy. This woman is very beautiful according to the setting. I will not criticize her for being so beautiful despite living in a "lower city" with malnutrition. However, in this kind of environment that is even more exaggerated than India, it is incredible that she can live so long without being raped. The second is the policewoman. God, even though the protagonist saved her life, she pointed a gun at the protagonist and said, "I will not give up my responsibility" and despised the protagonist. Then the protagonist "touched her nose" and "smiled bitterly". It was so true that I vomited.

Shennong is dead. I couldn't hold on any longer and couldn't read more than 100 chapters.

The only good thing is that the anti-theft is very good

This book is also called, Simon's Suffering Life, which is so frustrating to read.

Chapter 318: Vomiting, stealing other people's mistresses, pretending to be a virgin at first, not even hesitating to fall out with friends... But things are getting better now. Author, since your protagonist is a stallion, you even steal your friends' lovers (toys), and the protagonist is written like a virgin, is this disgusting?

The protagonist's family background is innocent, his ancestors were martyrs, and his bloodline is passed down from his ancestors. He doesn't understand why he should hide it. Aren't there more circles and resources that the official can access than hiding in the slums? It feels pretty silly

I actually quite liked this book, but I didn't agree with the character of the protagonist. Tiantian says that he is afraid of trouble and is lazy, but he can intimidate others into doing things, he likes to dance when nothing happens, he is like a saint, and he likes to save some disgusting people, but for his own purposes, he can let many innocent civilians die, especially dogs and traitors. There is no complete and charming character. If there is, he is greedy for money, lustful, fearful of death, and pretends to be noble. There is no power system. At the beginning, there are no resources and he can just eat some. He said that Shadow Ghost can challenge the Three Knights map to dominate. In the end, after being a dog and taking a huge amount of resources, almost hundreds of years later, he still needs half his life to fight whoever he fights. This shabby nine games are maintained every day, which is really poisonous.

I always feel that the main character is just a primary school student. I was very embarrassed watching it. He has some super powers. He goes wherever something goes wrong. Others snatch weapons and take them home because they think there are not enough enemies. The main character is described as being afraid of death and also likes to seek death.

The protagonist's IQ is worrying. He is a reckless man. He is a person who has super powers and acts recklessly. He also thinks that he is very low-key. Don't even think about it. Every time your shadow appears, it has something to do with you. Even if others don't know, they will associate it with you.

They are incapable of watching, they are cowardly, and they have no ambition. The weak ones do not want to learn how to fight, and they really like to wander. Of course, most of them are like this in reality, but what's the point of writing it into a novel?

I feel like the style of painting has changed. The first few pictures were okay, but then they started to look more and more like a savior. I still have the feeling of a harem.

After reading less than a hundred chapters, this protagonist is really weird, or perverted! A group of people come to kill the protagonist. The protagonist is the kind of person who kills all the passers-by and minions without changing his expression, and then says, how can such a kind person like me kill someone? Then let the mastermind and murderer go

Being able to write 5 million words is awesome

You have never been exposed to acupuncture and there is no one to teach you. You may not even be able to find the acupuncture points. How dare you test it on a living person you know? In reality, middle school students can almost become apprentices, and there are those who can cripple people and ask the master to stab them back again! What's more, for a novice, even if you have books and pictures, you still can't do it if you haven't practiced it, otherwise there would be no acupuncture bronze medal! And growing up at the bottom of cannibalism, she is still a virgin bitch, cow! ! ! !

The author said that young people need to go on a blind date, which shows that the author is introverted and not good at communication, so the novel is written like a closed door, immature, and like a child's graffiti! If the author has to go on a blind date when he is older, then it is more about why he has to go on a blind date at this age instead of dating his own girlfriend! Looking at the article written by the author, the outline is just okay. The content is childish and I feel mentally retarded!

The author is still updating, NB

After seeing 300 or 400 pictures, I no longer wanted to read them. They were so holy, they disgusted me to death.

I won't mention the other poisonous points of this book. Just talking about the characterization is as childish as a child's graffiti. The author's mind is such that no adult would write like this.

Suddenly I discovered that Capone was actually written by you.

It feels like the fights and dialogue plots were written by different people. The dialogue is childish and the fighting is top-notch.