From This Moment On, I’ll Make the World Feel Pain

Although I just read Chapter 93, the author has successfully convinced me that this is the best Naruto fanfic! The pattern, logic, plot, and IQ are all online. There is no awkward follow-up to the main plot. The author has the confidence and strength to not follow the main plot without ruining the plot. As soon as this article came out, there was no more fire shadow. This should be the last Naruto fanfic I read. The taste is so high that other books are hard to read. If you like Naruto, no matter what, you must watch it!

It should be more refined, 233333, the long review seems a bit long The author, this fan is really good at writing. I accidentally saw it when I was visiting Qidian yesterday I was attracted by the title, the introduction, and the first three chapters. I couldn't help but read it in one breath. It can be said that I have completely written down what I want most about Naruto! When I was young, I was attracted by Naruto's positive energy of going forward bravely. Because I was not a hero, I yearned for heroes. But when I saw the injustice suffered by the prince, Naruto, I felt that the prince was so bright, hypocritical and unreal, which made me uncomfortable. It became even more uncomfortable when I later saw that the prince only talked about words and never did anything practical. The story in the later stages of Shippuden is bullshit, and it was told by Boruto. . . Ugh, you know I didn't pursue Naruto anymore, but maybe it's because some of Naruto's characters and plots were too successful, and there were countless wonderful ninjutsu like the Ninja Phantasm Technique. I started to catch up with my fellow fans. The time travelers traveled to Naruto, and some began to take revenge and destroy Konoha. It was cool, but most of them did not continue. I still travel to Naruto, follow the mold of Xiaobo Feng Shuimen, still work hard to practice and compete with the two pillars to show off, become the school girl of the Ninja Academy, and conquer the harem of Brother Sakura and Hinata. Um It feels good, but something is missing. There are also some that travel to Kakashi, or the original character Senmei Asahi. The writing is really good, but no one has ever told me that in the world of Naruto, peace... Why those powerful ninjas pursue peace, but are always trapped in the flames of war. The author told me a lot, and I suddenly realized it. I'm ashamed, I'm ashamed. When I read novels, I always read cool ones, and I haven't thought deeply about them. The tragedy that confuses Naruto's character has not been thought about. Compared to the pig feet in those fan fiction, they are young, movie-level, and have no ambition to pretend to pick up girls and start a harem, hahaha, and then occasionally do serious things to save Jiraiya. I also have this virtue in time travel (´･̥̥̥̥ω･̥̥̥̥`) Tears in the wind On the contrary, I feel... The author's Naruto is the real strong man. He is the real person who was bullied and looked down upon by the villagers and exploited by Konoha's high-level politics! After knowing the truth, he was filled with anger, hatred, injustice towards his parents' death, and still retained his sanity towards the Sandaime's inaction. In Jiraiya's escape from Konoha, Kakashi's decadence in being obsessed with tasks, he, he, I can't find words to praise him! It is the kind of reason that can clearly see what is wrong with the world that attracts me It is also the determination to work hard to achieve my dreams that attracts me. Compared with the original novel "Zui Dun Prince", the fan Shuang's novel "Pig's Knuckle" is so much higher than the original novel His Royal Highness is well-deserved! As a fan of Naruto, I was so excited that I cried, wow wow wow. . In the book, the first fan is the prince The second fan is Jiu Lama. The otaku fox on the sofa is so cute to me. It and I have a common language, otaku The third is the prince's original brother, but now he is a curious baby who follows the prince and asks questions when he doesn't understand. Erzhu is not bad either! That mean-mouthed "Naruto brother, call me brother" is so funny~ The fourth is Hinata, oh, so cute The fifth brother Sakura, ah, that kind of crazy training under the power of love makes me, a single person, not aware of it, and can't help but applaud her. Brother Sakura may have the skill of "Surge of willpower under the power of love" Gaara is a little panda🐼. Naruto asked Shukaku not to disturb Gaara and let him sleep well. I found that Naruto still loves Gaara very much Suddenly I found that this book has a lot of CPs worthy of my support, so I stood up to Mingjiu! , The little fox is so cute, let me change it! Change! Change! The other characters are also very likable! Kakashi has also begun to practice and become stronger and not decadent The item elements and settings in modern times are also great. I like Naruto, Kurama, Sasuke, watching TV dramas on the couch, and playing games High praise! I'm going to follow the author! I'll see if I can search for the author on the mobile Qidian APP and click on it! In addition, after five thousand years of Chinese history, apart from the dross, the essence is brilliant and the things left to us by our great ancestors are really something that we can't help but be proud of😏 I have no regrets about entering China in this life I am bored waiting for the author to update this book review. Alas, it was updated at seven o'clock last night. I waited until seven o'clock Is one chapter enough? Enough! It's great, Dada, come on~ I'll leave the picture, Prince Hinata and the little fox

The best Naruto fanfic, I've been thinking about the author's new book for a long time, why don't you start a new one? Looking forward to another fanfic! Seeking new articles, seeking new articles, seeking new articles! ! !

Finished reading it, it's pretty good. It can be regarded as one of the few novels that I have finished reading recently. The plot throughout the story is reasonably advanced and basically non-toxic, fully elaborating on the saying that knowledge is power. It made me almost go back to study. . . Naruto is considered to be the best among the fans, and the overall evaluation is Xiancao

Are you updating every day now? Fishing🔪

(Please improve it, please like it) As a reader of Quanbing, please tell me your feelings. This is my first time watching a fanfic on Qidian. It's also my first time watching a Naruto fanfic. My biggest feeling is that it's surprisingly refreshing to vent my anger. The author writes beautifully. Advantages: The first is the sense of immersion. There is no plot that will destroy the world at the beginning, or pretend to be a slap in the face. The writing is very detailed and life-like. I have my own analysis and understanding of Naruto's plot and character. Instead of directly allowing readers to have a "God" or "prophet" perspective, the sense of substitution increases sharply, and the difficulty of writing can be imagined. From this, it can be seen that the author must have put his heart into it! Give it a thumbs up! The good thing is that after reading only a few dozen chapters, I gained a new understanding of the original work and deepened the novel. I am a fan of Naruto. It is not a fantasy or urban novel, nor a time-traveling novel to other worlds, but a proper Naruto world. The second is the golden finger. The golden finger set by the author is not various talents, opportunities or systems, but a space for reading, surfing the Internet and playing games. In other words, using three-dimensional urban objects and integrating them into the two-dimensional world is similar to traveling through history and using hundreds of years of wisdom and civilization to crush the two-dimensional civilization of another world. The biggest advantage is the strong sense of immersion and the eye-catching settings. The third is the plot of farming. The protagonist has a clear goal of destroying the people and the world that bullied him in the first place, and making the other party feel his anger and attitude. But it didn't kill the wolf as soon as it came up. But start by establishing your own power and strengthening your own strength, slowly setting it up, and using wisdom and means step by step to make those in Konoha feel the terror of themselves and have to pay attention and compromise. Seek perfection. The advantage is that it allows readers to better immerse themselves in the emotions and sorrows of the protagonist and to be full of expectations for the future. Disadvantages: First: (Regarded as a complaint) After becoming stronger, the rhythm is a bit strange. Perhaps due to the update, the protagonist's pursuit of power is a bit biased. To open the eyes of reincarnation, it takes two chapters and 4,000 words. But to compete for power and strength, given the current situation, it is obviously more important to win over other forces, develop alliances, monopolize the economy, and expand territory than to enhance one's own power. Of course, it is not impossible to explain that the protagonist's pupil power has increased. It is best to have something novel. For example, an infinite samsara eye, a multicolored pupil, and then separate a white eye or a more powerful pupil technique. Maybe the pupil technique has other functions, such as the power of the pupil can suppress many spiritual beasts or tailed beasts. By the way, since this is the continent of Chakra, we can indeed write about other powerful spiritual beasts evolved from Chakra. Second (it is considered a suggestion), the training of future generations is obviously lacking. Currently only one Sasuke has been trained. As for Konoha Village, there are indeed many supporting characters worth cultivating, such as the passionate Kai, the smart strategist, and the third-generation grandson. Killing people and punishing their hearts means that relatives will turn against each other, which is also a good and refreshing point. Third (regarded as expectation), the emotional line with Hinata. It's a bit rough. Through the dedication to Hinata, more achievements made by the protagonist in the near future can be written. For example, the worship of major film-level experts, the results of various scientific experiments, and the moon does not sleep, I do not sleep, I am a little delicacy in the world.

Thank you for your hard work, the author. In order to write the novel, he is still reading Boruto while holding back his nausea.

Tsk, among so many Naruto fans, you are the only one who writes the most satisfying one. It's not about inner darkness, it's just about fighting injustice for Naruto. Why should the son of the fourth generation suffer so much injustice? Although the common people don't know it, you the third generation don't know it? Crazy conniving, to be honest, I don't hate the third generation, but what he did is too much. If Asura hadn't been reincarnated, I'm afraid Naruto would have been the person who should have gone dark. The person who should have gone dark saved the world. Haha, it's so ironic. Only what you wrote made me feel that this is the real Naruto. The recommendation vote has been cast

A great Naruto fanfic. Different from system stories and time travel stories that always have a modern feel. This book completely writes about the feelings of Naruto who was born and raised in the Naruto world after being changed, and then really makes up for a lot of regrets. The fourth generation couple, Jiraiya, the Uchiha clan... Can finally be happy. It's really great~^0^ But Itachi being forced to be a stallion and having a harem with Sasuke really made me feel dumbfounded hhhh~ Also, I want to see a side story of the tailed beasts playing mahjong together. Kurama is so cute. Chemistry Professor 666. Do the other tailed beasts also need to learn more?

It seems that Naruto does not have the Rinnegan, but a person without the Rinnegan has no soul in destroying Konoha.

The writing is so good, the ideas are clear, and the organization is clear. I really have to admire it. The above is not an irony, I have already ordered everything below.

After the elder Sasuke from the parallel world traveled over, with how concerned the younger Sasuke was about his brother, wouldn't he have thought about asking about his brother? ? ?

This is the first author and novel I have rewarded. Although it is not many, it still represents my feelings. Thank you very much for fulfilling my dream of becoming an anime. The passion in the early stages of Naruto is unparalleled, but I held my nose until I finished watching it, which was very uncomfortable. I'm looking forward to the author's next novel, and I will definitely support it!

Come on, author, your writing is great. Although you write to darken Naruto, the content is not depressing. On the contrary, it makes people feel happy. I hope the author will continue to work hard and support the author greatly.

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Update soon. One of my favorite Naruto fanfics 😍😍😍

I saw it was coming to an end Hurry up and support Although I read the pirated version But I still have to talk to the author This is a book with almost an IQ in every corner The writing is really good Come on, author💪

First of all, congratulations on writing your first book review in your life 🎉 (I have never written one before, and I will probably be too lazy to write one in the future 🤫) Ahem... Back to the topic, this novel is the best pure Naruto fan novel I have ever read so far. (Apart from those wonderful comic works 😜), it is also the only novel in my bookshelf that I can subscribe to in full for the second time (new members can finish it during the one-week free period, so this time they can subscribe to all chapters at once for the second time 🤓). The whole book has less than a million words, no nonsense, no brain-deadness, it is easy to complain, and it is so fun. It has the unique charm of each chapter that makes people slowly appreciate it (including the various talents gathered in the chapter comments 😏). Um... I'm sorry for my lack of words, I can't think of more words of praise (or 🌈?!). In a word, let us follow the Chinese version of Naruto, walk into a different world of Naruto, and experience a different life in the ninja world! (🎵Animal World BGM starts)

It is recommended to change it to: "Let the world feel the power of dead house"

I can only say that it was really fun to watch. Education is very important. This is also the first time I have seen the interpretation of the Third Hokage.

Let me go, the author, you are short of updates 😤~~~Wait a minute, why did you say again 😅

By letting Danzo serve as Hokage, he can accelerate the chaos and collapse of Konoha, and he can also get the support of Konoha's relatives and friends to defect, and he can use his hand to cause Konoha's complete death. As long as Naruto didn't persuade Tsunade and Jiraiya didn't want to be the Hokage, most of the top people would be able to serve as Hokage and only Danzo would be left (Konoha's collapse plan killed two advisors, so no one would stop Danzo from taking over), and no one would check and balance Danzo's power. After gathering the power of the two advisors, Danzo would not be able to fly to the Genius Monster After all, Danzo felt to Naruto a lot like the palace officials who were obsessed with power in the history books he read. His rights came from the things that the third generation had carved out. He had no resistance when the third generation wanted to take them back. He had been addicted to conspiracies all his life. The third generation was too concerned about the overall situation and tolerated foreigners everywhere, while Danzo had no overall situation to speak of. Sent people to assassinate the third generation (the third generation released Danzo out of political balance), used Konoha's own village ninjas to conduct experiments, blackmailed various families in Konoha, and asked them to send their members into the root. Each family dared to be angry but dare not speak out (after all) The Third Generation was supportive), he ignored the death of the Third Generation when the Kyuubi attacked, ignored the Third Generation's death in Konoha's collapse plan, was dissatisfied with the two advisors' choice of Tsunade, and made trouble to preserve his strength when Pain attacked, and ignored the destruction of Konoha (he did not have the so-called love for the village). Doing great things without cherishing one's own life, seeing small profits and forgetting righteousness, no one can be trusted. Everyone in the Roots has been brainwashed and controlled, and the members of the Roots have to fight each other. Members of each family must also be brainwashed and controlled, and they may even control the name of the Fire Nation. You have strong ambitions but no matching ability and sense of responsibility, and you are so bad at finishing dirty things. There are several enemies of Konoha who are related to you, and you cannot eradicate them thoroughly. For such a person to become Hokage will definitely be a disaster for Konoha. Naruto is happy to see this and make Konoha feel the pain. His behavior will definitely tear the inside of Konoha completely. When he masters the ANBU, he will definitely push his method of controlling roots into the ANBU and the school, and will gradually force various families to overestimate themselves. He will definitely attack Sasuke and himself. He is waiting for this opportunity to betray Konoha openly. Even those relatives and friends in Konoha will not stop the two of them. They will even think that defecting is okay, and maybe they will. They will defect along with them (after all, Danzo will probably liquidate them for not doing things well, and even think that they have colluded with Naruto), which will naturally intensify the conflict between them and Danzo's new Konoha. If Twitch takes Hinata as a hostage, then the Hyuga clan will also rebel. By then Konoha will not be much stronger than the Blood Mist Ninja. Naruto wanted to know if the Yuan Fei clan would be wiped out by the Danzo clan. After all, the Yuan Fei clan was one of the families most dissatisfied with Danzo's rise to power. Which families would Danzo attack in order to scare the monkeys? And Danzo became the Hokage, Nagato and Konan would definitely not be able to contain their anger for revenge and launch an invasion of Konoha in advance. Will Danzo protect Konoha or choose to cherish himself? Naruto can publish a book, exposing the events of the Third Generation and Danzo, publishing the dark side of Konoha at his own expense, and adding all kinds of added facts, from the demise of the Uzumaki clan and the Senju clan to the decline of Konoha. The power of the public opinion war is not small. And it was spread all over the world, focusing on Konoha. There were pictures, truth, witnesses, and witnesses. Everyone was dissatisfied with Danzo. Why did such a person become the Hokage's assistant? If the Third Generation was still around, he could use his own performance to tell everyone that it was fake. Most people would not believe it, but now most people will believe that the Third Generation's image of a good gentleman has been completely ruined, and he will be infamy for thousands of years after his death. Not to mention Danzo, the will of fire is also shattered in the hearts of most ninjas. You ninjas are the sacrificed leaves, providing nutrients to the rotten roots and dry trees. The more Danzo banned the spread of it, the more powerful it became No one knew that Naruto had written it, they would only suspect that it was written by someone with a high status in the village. Let it continue to tear apart internally. The last Hokage, Danzo, is very suitable When Obito and the others were reincarnated into the previous Hokage and the Hokage's wife (why did the original novel not reincarnate two Uzumaki women in the original book, the fighting power is not bad), when they read this book and heard that Konoha became history, they felt angry, sad and sad. The third generation and Danzo received the most hostility and anger from the three Hokage and their wives. It would be more fun if Danzo also died and was reincarnated

At the beginning, when I saw the title, actually, I felt that it was Nagato or Yahiko who had traveled through time. I also considered Obito. After I came in and read it, the protagonist was Naruto... After knowing that the protagonist is Naruto and the title is like this, then it is basically certain that it is a blackened Naruto. I have seen a lot of blackened Narutos. Usually the protagonist must be a time traveler. After all, Naruto fans have seen so many stories and their preconception is that the protagonist must be a time traveler. But in fact, the protagonist Naruto is an indigenous person. This is innovative and I feel very comfortable with it. Furthermore, it connects Chinese culture and Naruto very coherently. I can't say it's perfect, but at least the integration doesn't feel inconsistent and looks very comfortable. From the very beginning, Naruto regarded the third generation as his benefactor. He gradually learned the truth and transformed step by step until he turned dark. Then the author will also think from the perspective of the anime. He will not blindly follow the anime and add his own ideas. The creativity is also very good, such as using the League of Legends to open Ersuke's eyes, and Kyuubi becoming obsessed with the fox demon character. These ideas are very interesting. By bringing some things from daily life into the novel, there is a strong sense of substitution. Then I personally feel that the strength has grown too fast. Before I graduated from the Ninja Academy, I was already at the film level when I left. Even cool articles dare not write like this. As everyone said, Kishimoto is just a cartoonist. He knows nothing about the will of fire. The will of fire is in everyone's heart. The rainbow fart is over. There are really not many good-looking Naruto-type books in the fan circle. So I wish the work will become a god as soon as possible.

Let's talk about the advantages of this book! 1. The author did not add new characters, but made Uzumaki Naruto the protagonist. This makes it easy for fans of "Naruto" to identify with it, and it also reduces the number of secondary settings in its own works, so there is no need to quarrel with readers because of some of its own settings. 2. The author let Uzumaki Naruto know the plot of the "Naruto" series. It allows many readers who don't understand why Uzumaki Naruto can still be "kind" in such an environment to see the Uzumaki Naruto they recognize, and it also provides a basis for the development of the plot. 3. The author allowed Uzumaki Naruto to receive traditional cultural training from the East. Years of cultural edification have made Uzumaki Naruto a confident, self-reliant, friendly but not aggressive person. In the Spring and Autumn Period, Gongyang said: "Can the revenge of the ninth generation still be avenged?" Confucius said: "The king's way is restored, respect the king and fight the barbarians. The revenge of the tenth generation can still be avenged!" The first half of this sentence is from "Gongyang Zhuan·The Fourth Year of Zhuang Gong". The original sentence is: "Can the ninth generation still be revenged? Although it can be done in a hundred generations." The context is: Qi Xianggong's ninth uncle Qi Aigong was cooked by the Emperor of Zhou because of Ji Houjin's slander. In the generation of Duke Xianggong of Qi, the Kingdom of Ji was destroyed, and then the Marquis of Ji of this era was killed. Uzumaki Naruto has not forgotten his hatred, but he has not become a person who kills innocent people indiscriminately. He knows what his goal is. He has always had a dream in his heart to make the world a better place, so he accumulates strength, makes friends, and looks for the power he can use. Everything he does is moving towards the dream of "university under heaven". 4. The author has good reasons for increasing Naruto Uzumaki's power (golden fingers are not considered too high). Things like Railgun, Cloud Explosion, etc. All have a clear research process. Many times, book friends will say, "Why do you need more brains when reading a book?" Although it is a joke, it also points out the shortcomings of some novels - lack of rigor. Although the original work has various ** settings, the author has made corresponding arrangements and explanations for the unreasonable plot. You can also say that there are still loopholes in what the author wrote, but the author is also trying to fill these loopholes, right? I have been editing it for a long time, alas, I am exhausted. For the sake of writing so much, please give me a like! 😍

One bag of rice has to carry several floors, one bag of rice has to carry two floors, one bag of rice is too much, one bag of rice has mud, bitterness has mud, who will give you a bag of rice, spicy Tiansen

Naruto knows everything, manga, anime, movies. Only he knows the feeling in his heart. He has to do a lot of things to deal with the threat from Otsutsuki and the future threats from the universe. In order to fight against the future Uchiha Madara, Otsutsuki Kaguya, and the subsequent Otsutsuki clan, as well as a certain immortal who observes the ninja world, he must become stronger as soon as possible. Even in order to fight against powerful enemies in the future, he has to integrate the entire continent. The ninja village system in the ninja world and the daimyo system behind it must be destroyed. This system is just a continuation of the Warring States Period and a wrong strategy of Senju Hashirama. Ninjas should not continue to be the guard dogs of the daimyo, let alone mercenaries who master various skills to kill people, but should be products that promote development. Ninjas experience the pain of war, but they don't know that they are the culprit of everything. Mercenaries are still mercenaries if they don't kill people and create chaos. As for Uchiha Obito, don't expect to be forgiven by yourself. How can you forgive him? The innocent people of the Uchiha clan died. What to do with the souls of those innocent people in the Kingdom of Water? When you raise a butcher knife to innocent people, when you treat your teacher and master wife very well, you are no longer a person. Naruto wants the truth to be made public, so that he can be ruined and die in pain. Disdainful of both Sandai and Danzo, he can despise them as a political theorist. He is also disgusted with Uchiha Itachi. He kills his own relatives and parents and is not worthy of being a human son. The next step is to take action. Should Sasuke also receive education and the whole truth from another world? His current personality is too extreme and he needs guidance, and he also needs help. There are many things that he cannot do by himself. He must need more subordinates and helpers (I don't know if Hinata will be involved. Naruto has a good impression of Hinata, but if Hinata cannot become stronger, it will become his weakness, otherwise if he loves her, he must cut off the bond). Naruto must manage and think about the future coldly. Even for the sake of the future, he hooks up with other girls with background The crystal ball in the hands of the third generation must be destroyed, and his activities in Konoha are monitored by it at all times. This feels very bad, and to become stronger requires ninjutsu and funds. The former must find the seal scroll, or He lurked and left the village to attack those traitorous ninjas, otherwise he would never be able to obtain the desired technique from the top management of Konoha. However, the prerequisite was to destroy the crystal ball without doubting himself (in fact, detonating it with the detonating charms used in Konoha buildings is the best way, as no one would doubt himself).     ，

Pay tribute to the great China. Salute to the hero!

Now, does Luduo like me?

When I first started this book, "The Three Character Classic" almost persuaded me to quit. I am a person who can leave just because of a name, but this book really kept me here. Because of the fusion of some ancient books and contemporary Internet slang, I have never been very fond of today's Internet slang, but it is indeed quite funny. The author has managed to keep his IQ both funny and vivid, vividly showing a high-IQ Naruto, and of course a not-so-intelligent Sasuke. Although their character transformation from the original work to this book only lasts a few dozen chapters, there is no sense of dissonance. If the five thousand years of Chinese cultural heritage were really integrated into Naruto's mind, it would indeed look like this. Many books will have a sentence when leaving a claw, "Kishimoto is a manga artist, what does Naruto know?" Indeed, the main reason why I like Naruto is its world view. With the foreshadowing of countless fan novels and memories, we can start from the arrival of Kaguya. Countless details in the middle change under the understanding of different people. Hiruzen is definitely a typical example. The author also happened to express his own point of view, which was refreshing to me. Sometimes some inexplicable plots really touched me. Those fantasies are realized in fan works, but the ones in our minds are always the most beautiful. The most wonderful sparks of human beings support the pictures and sounds, and special hormones give us special feelings. Often after writing, we can no longer try our best to experience it with our brains. At this time, we need to really use words to bring it in. The author does a good job. We can enter and leave this world effortlessly. This is a great enjoyment (but it seems to only be five minutes a day).        ，，，，， ps: I always like to write nonsense, and my writing style is not good. I don't talk much about the plot, but only about feelings, and I can't stand it.

Please help the author I read a fanfic a few days ago and came up with an idea, which is about the role of the ninjutsu of Izanagi. Sasuke's eyes can use Izanagi without restriction, so I came up with the idea of ​​archiving the body data after my strength reaches its peak, and then when I am about to die of old age, I can activate Izanagi and rewrite my imagination into reality. Can eternal life be achieved in this way? Although a hundred years have passed, I am still a young man.