The World’s Greatest Football Manager

The third volume written by the author is also very good. Without the first two volumes, this book would have done well. It's a pity that many readers were dissuaded by the previous one. I hope the following one will be more exciting.

Let me give you some thoughts The author is definitely a true fan who wants to write this novel well. He has a deep understanding of all aspects of the Chinese Super League. This book is the only one I have read in the past few years that dares to write about domestic football and writes well. Come on, author 👍, and the results will be very good after laying the groundwork. But having said that, there are many problems. Let's not talk about anything else. Just talk about the heroine, Xiaoxia. I don't want to see her Yan Ruyu for a second. It's too poisonous. Author, if you don't know how to write about women, don't write blindly. Xiaoxia is the same. The words used are really awkward. The author is great. Anyone who can read football novels or even watch the national football team you wrote will not care about the female protagonist. Even if the protagonist is single all the time, it doesn't matter. You really need to read the female protagonist to read the emotional story. The ones written in the city are much better than yours. Because of the female characters you wrote, I gave up the book twice and picked it up again. Please stop writing about the female protagonist. Please let us readers let go of the heroine. Secondly, regarding some vulgar plots, such as the original Lao Wang, such as the interaction with Gao Fushuai, don't you think many places are too vulgar or even disgusting, such as the interaction with Gao Fushuai, and even some with Xiaoxia. Watching them made me feel uncomfortable, although the man is a second grader until death. , But in the book, they behave like two mentally retarded people, and I won't go into details about how they suddenly become brothers with Gao Fushuai. Later, the two of them fight like two elementary school students. Maybe the author thinks this is interesting and funny, but as an old book fan and an adult, many scenes are really naive and vulgar. Then there are some plot choices, which are simply what should be written and what should not be written. . . For example, Luneng and Evergrande lost in the second round of the AFC Champions League. No problem. The game was well written, but what about the follow-up? The press conference, the reaction of the media, the reaction of the fans, the reaction of the team, especially Wang Dalei's, shouldn't he say something? Don't think it's just water, this is only good if it is written well, but the result is nothing. Where you could have written a few more chapters of high-quality content, you focused on writing the heroine, and just jumped to the transfer discussion after the game. It is too blunt. Also, the protagonist's suggestions are based on big data. Okay, so can we write some suggestions that are usually based on big data and subtly affect the thinking of the coaching staff. Otherwise, if suggestions are made on the fly at critical moments, everyone will be subconsciously unconvinced. I know this will increase the conflicts in the plot, but it is not good to always raise doubts. Just as the author mentioned in your book that only players with characteristics can succeed, so does the book. Why did everyone choose your book among a group of football novels that rushed to the street? Why did I pick up the book again after abandoning it twice? Because you write about the national football team, you write about domestic football, you write about the areas that we are most familiar with and the most unfamiliar. It is novel, and you can see that you write with real care. I have to give you a thumbs up for this. The plot of domestic competitions, the comments of domestic fans and the Shandong dialect in the Taishan team (Shandong people feel very friendly) are the characteristics of this book. The rest is really mediocre. The off-field brotherhood, the relationship between men and women, and the plot of the second female lead are all poisonous rather than enjoyable. I still hope the author can focus more. Finally, just a piece of immature advice from me, that is, youth training, whether it is children sent to Europe or those in the reserve team, my suggestion is to finish it from the beginning and don't write too much. This is definitely the most difficult part to write, and readers (such as me) may not necessarily buy it. It is very simple. If you write about a group of dummies that you have never heard of, will everyone agree with it? No, if there is no sense of identity, then it is just data. Unlike real people in reality who are alive and everyone can like it if written in a novel, a dummy is just a dummy. The protagonist is also a dummy, but the main reason why the protagonist is alive is because of the writing and the reader's subconscious self-introduction. Why would people like a few sentences of past data? Unless you write about a talented young man who can find the data in reality, and write it step by step, then everyone can understand it. However, this requires too much writing and energy, and it is purely thankless. I have a lot to say, because I still like this novel, and I hope it will get better and better, instead of abandoning the book again. I hope the author will continue to work hard. There are not many football novels with a good starting point, and most of them are nondescript football novels. I hope this book will carry forward its advantages and get better and better.

Author, I'm convinced. A good subject has been ruined by you. What the hell is the first volume? Ninety-nine percent of it is discouraged. 😅 I advise you to revise the outline, or the content of the first volume. Otherwise, ten people will come, nine will leave, and the remaining one will be like me and want to complain. The one percent who really want to read your novels

It's so normal for a weak team like Luneng to be abused by a stick. No matter how hard the author licks him, he can't clean up the tragedy.

A very good book, a rare work that starts low and moves high, and the more you write, the better. The author is very knowledgeable about football theory and his writing style is also good. It has gotten better and better since the second volume. Please give me your support and hope to continue working hard.

It's a good book if you insist on reading to the end, but the first volume is too full of life, so I suggest shortening the length, or it doesn't matter whether Lao Wang exists or not. I think this can attract more people. The subsequent volume on Taishan Team is really well written, allowing people like me who have never watched the Chinese Super League to understand the problems with the Chinese Super League.

It is a very good football article. It is recommended to read it from the third volume. Of course, if you are a real warrior and dare to face the bleak Chinese football environment, you can read the first two volumes.

Can you simplify the plot of this woman? It looks so embarrassing.

It's getting more and more interesting. Although it's slow to start, the preparation is in place and the previous pitfalls have been filled. I'm really looking forward to the plot behind it, but I still hope that I won't have a romantic relationship with that woman.

What Lao Wang wrote was a bit too disgusting. I finally miraculously won under the protagonist's tactics. I thought to myself, this guy finally looked at the protagonist squarely, right? In the end, it got worse. This guy is really a stone in the pit. On the other hand, would anyone like to watch this character "act" and watch a plot where the protagonist is disgusted? If you want to say that some people really like this fight-and-fight scene, then you can at least give yourself an advantage by writing the protagonist, right? I didn't mix with a bunch of players at all, I didn't know anyone, and the only rich second generation didn't have much interaction. I was just fighting with this pig-headed head coach. You have to write that the other side of the fight has to show signs of leaving, which is okay, but there is no sign at all, so I persuade you to quit. Firstly, if the protagonist is capable, he can definitely get rid of this b who occupies the toilet and does not shit. Secondly, as the comments said, the rich second generation can definitely set up a club, even if it is still an amateur. At least it's more formal, and then the protagonist is still stupid and just wants to win first, so let's think about the future. Don't talk about arranging other characters, but arrange the motivations and purposes of the protagonist's behavior No matter the subject matter, even if it is slow to get started, it is important to go straight to the topic. As a result, you, the protagonist, have spent so many chapters on such a team, wasting your life without doing anything, and holding the system in your hand is of no use. This kind of beginning is really not fun.