From Variety Show Auditions to Top-Tier Star

After following the latest chapter, let me briefly talk about my feelings The combination of football + entertainment is very interesting, and I was also attracted by this interesting combination Generally speaking, this article gives me the feeling that it is smooth and smooth, and the rhythm is good There are games, there are days Usually, there are sports and entertainment, basically everything is written, but the rhythm is not chaotic, and the common problem of "inappropriate details of daily life and plot" that is common in some articles does not appear When writing about daily life, it does not make people feel watery, and writing about competitions does not make people feel tired The character of the protagonist is very interesting from the beginning. Clearly, it can be said that Liren was established quickly and resolutely, which allows readers to quickly immerse themselves in the characters and the plot. However, it may be because it is still in the first variety show plot and the space for play is limited. Although the character of the protagonist is clear, it is not fleshed out enough. I look forward to more events in the future to flesh out the characters. To be honest, I actually read relatively few sports articles (only a few articles really), so I don't have much comment on this aspect. I can only say that for now, there is basically no obstacle for me to read this article. When the author writes about the game, he does a good job of rendering the atmosphere and mobilizing emotions, and the sense of substitution and The fun points are all sufficient There is something to be said about the entertainment part besides sports (after all, I watch much more entertainment than sports). At present, the entertainment part is actually a supplement to sports. The core of this article is football, and the branch is entertainment Although I watch entertainment There are more, and I am looking forward to this part of the content, but based on this article alone, I still have to praise the author. It is easy to change from "I want them all" to "no prioritization, inappropriate details, and chaotic rhythm". Although the current entertainment is not the main line, it is smooth and comfortable to read, and it plays a very good role as the icing on the cake. This is more important So when it comes to the entertainment part, there must be no place here Not to mention the beginning The beginning of this article is a variety show. Generally speaking, when writing about variety shows, there are basically two types of "live streaming" and "recorded streaming" Live streaming is the easiest to arouse readers' emotions, because any behavior of the protagonist will receive timely feedback and various 'comments' The 'barrage' also adds to the atmosphere and provides an excellent match for the exciting climax. It is definitely a tool for showing off, and it can provide effective real-time interaction. The effect can be seen immediately with every punch and move, and there is no need to wait for 'the protagonist has completed mission 456', 'viewer' However, the public is balancing the gap between the feedback plots (for example, the previous "Full-time Artist" used a lot of live broadcasts when writing variety shows), which will not easily cause problems of 'plot separation', 'rhythm confusion' or 'emotional connection failure' Summary of this article The art uses recorded broadcasts, and the writing difficulty of this kind is obviously higher than that of live broadcasts, because a lot of feedback and exciting points have to be postponed, and many of the protagonist's actions will not be immediately praised. To be honest, I felt a little uncomfortable when I watched it at the beginning, that is, "This writing does not look like a variety show." Ah', the perspective is all focused on what the protagonist is doing, and there is very little feedback. The writing style is more like writing about a sports competition rather than a variety show Even without the cooperation of the live audience, the program team and guests can still be used to "praise". The shots and pictures that the program team pays special attention to make the director The variety show effect of performing a "troublesome" smile, etc. In addition, in fact, although there is no audience here, the guests actually take the place of the audience. It is also one of the common ways to let the guests give feedback, and because "the guests are more professionals and celebrities than the ordinary audience", the guests The feeling of pretending to be flattering is actually greater than that of ordinary viewers However, at the beginning of this article, the protagonist used his strength to pretend to be a saint a lot of times, but the feedback from the guests was focused on 'explanation' rather than 'praising', which makes people always feel that they are missing something when reading. When I wrote about the broadcast of the program later, I personally felt that the treatment here was actually a bit "light" In terms of length, the author actually mastered it very well. He will not be a bunch of flattery, shock, embarrassment, slap in the face, and continue to brag... There are so many chapters, which is why I say that the rhythm and rhythm of this article are good. The details of the plot make it particularly comfortable to read, but on the other hand, it is still the same old problem. There is shock and praise, but the praise is not enough Indeed, the author has taken into account that many young fans who "look into the face" are not professional, but the fans are not professional, and the guests are professional! This is where the 'explanation' function of the guests comes into play, because with the audience to praise 'shock' and 'awesome', the guests need to explain 'why it's amazing' and 'why it's shocking'. The two complement each other The audience saw a certain performance of the protagonist and thought it was okay. It seems to be powerful, but I don't understand what it is and what it means. Afterwards, the professional guest explains (and brags about how professional and powerful the guest is), and then recognizes the protagonist, and then the audience who suddenly realizes it comes to praise and sigh. This is a gradual progress. Process Of course, in the actual writing process, this model usually also inserts various tricks such as "the audience's controversy over the protagonist's performance", "the differences and disputes among the guests" and so on. In the end, everyone was conquered by the protagonist's strong strength and wonderful performance, and let's talk about the protagonist again It is a routine for writing variety shows in general entertainment genres, but the recording of the variety show at the beginning of this article and the first and second variety show broadcasts gave me a feeling of "explanation when it is time to praise" and "explanation when it is time to praise". This is why I said that in the beginning of this article, "it is a variety show but not like it" "Variety show" is sandwiched between the writing of variety shows and competitions, but it doesn't please either side After reading the author's previous articles, they are basically about sports. In fact, I think the author should be able to write well about entertainment. For example, in the section about true heroes, there are music, pictures, sensationalism and so on. It's written with a sense of imagery, atmosphere, and emotional mobilization. Even by pure entertainment standards, it's definitely a very well-written paragraph (although I kind of want to complain that the protagonist was a sportsperson in his previous life. He only needs to remember the lyrics and music. He even remembers the arrangement, and he can still do it in a few hours. It's outrageous to decide on the finished product, but when reading novels, you don't have to worry too much about such details) Of course, the above are just my personal feelings and only represent my personal opinions. If the author is willing, just use it as a reference. If there is any offense, I apologize in advance Also, I read it There are really very few sports categories. Please forgive me if I am wrong (I am really a talkative and nagging person. It is easy to write a long paragraph when writing a comment (perfectly matching my ID🤣). If you insist on reading it to the end, thank you, thank you for your hard work 😭)

I have read seven chapters, and I can only say that there are really few sports articles in Qidian. Everything is pushed up.

The current entertainment industry is like this. Many sports people have entered it. Some are good at it, and some are so embarrassing that they can't see it. The author can have such an idea, probably because he has seen the performances of some embarrassing people The idea is really good, both style and style must be grasped. Become a top-notch, but the author is also merciful. He is very good if he doesn't write about diving directly. If you write about diving, I think the protagonist can be named Tian, hahaha Not bad, the plot looks great so far, it is my favorite type. Let's see how you break through in the future. Don't fall into the cliché.

Football is just football, if you have to add entertainment, the national football team is so bad, it's all the author's fault, everyone knows that football needs to be wholehearted to make progress, if you have to add entertainment, isn't this misleading everyone, isn't it possible to join the national football team just by playing casually? Although this is true

High emotional intelligence: no distinction between style and style. Low emotional intelligence: just not the same.

In the novel, it's okay to play in the minor leagues and then upgrade and change maps. That's right. In reality, that's wrong. The whole village hopes that if there is traffic and market, why go to the second-tier league? If you go, it means you think you are not good enough. This is called looking down upon yourself. If you are strong enough, why don't you go to the top league? Leveling up? That means you are still weak and don't even have the potential to cultivate people. Top leagues cultivate people more. The Russian Super League can practice hammer skills. Those who excel in the minor leagues are either local players or those who are favored by wealthy clubs and reserve talents to fish in the minor leagues. For example, Dong Fangzhuo, that's normal, but he was weak and failed. Choose a minor league by yourself, then it's over. First, the market value behind you will depreciate. Second, you will change from a genius to a hard-working talent, a blue-collar engineer, and an eternal wage earner and homeless person. The path to a wealthy family will be halved. Even if you enter, you will be excluded and discriminated against. Third, your spiritual value will plummet. If you have no pursuit, you will not be able to become a leader. Those foreign players in the Chinese Super League were strong, I guess. Later they went to Europe in their prime years. Did any of them succeed? Qiang is just a wage earner of the team, not the owner of the team or the bus driver. So, in reality, if there is a true football king-level genius, the correct strategy is to go to a wealthy club, use market value, and use it as a stepping stone. I have potential and market, try it out, and make crazy conditions. You must be full of storms to support your status as a dragon across the river. I will be your thigh in the next ten years. I will help you with technology to help the poor. Talented demon potential stocks, starting lineup, image rights, and signing fees cannot be reduced. If rejected, then the prince's revenge script should be written, thirty years in the east of the river and thirty years in the west of the river. Then, there will definitely be people from the five major leagues who will come to draw lottery tickets, or use capital connections to sign first, and then go to the second-tier leagues to rent and inspect the goods. Moreover, they must find someone who is qualified for European competitions and show their ambition and greed to win honors. I am not a person who has no desires and desires to earn a salary. After completing the whole set, if you succeed, these early operations will be a fast track for you to rise to the top in the future. You can go to a wealthy club, be the main force, or be the captain, no matter what, you will not be squeezed out and have full initiative. If you can't hit it, you won't lose. Africa and Latin America have successfully landed stars like this. A bunch of Brazilian players who have not yet achieved success are still considered stars. Son Heung-min has been suppressed in the Premier League Golden Boot simply because he has no capital and keeps a low profile. Stand out from the crowd, they are two species, it depends on where you place yourself

As long as the novel involves live streaming, half of it is parallel import.

Update it quickly, three updates a day is not enough! Let me tell you the number, how about ten updates a day?

The combination of football and entertainment articles is innovative, as is the writing style. But the method is too vulgar. It's 2022, and you're still trying to slap someone in the face with pretense, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. If you have read the novel for a few years, you can guess the content of the second half from the first half of the chapter. Also, this method is too dramatic, and readers who really pay will not be sold. Maybe novices will find it good, but if they don't subscribe, it is nonsense. You can refer to the novel Football Play Like Me. My writing style is a little better than yours, I guess. There are also a lot of pretentious and slap-in-the-face scenes. The routines are not as vulgar as yours. At least the sense of déjà vu is much less. Reading the first ten chapters of your novel, I remembered at least 5 novels. And your entertainment department has no new ideas, at least you can easily find 10 similar movies in the urban category. This will make it harder and harder for you to write later. No one else has gotten a high-quality product, and your writing like this will most likely pave the way for others. The writing style is good, but I think the choice of subject matter and writing style still needs to be considered.

I can't stand it anymore since I got food poisoning. Let's see you again. There is also a one-time prop like the temporary card of the basketball article. This is a big obvious poisonous point. It is the same as a stimulant, so it is very uncomfortable. Hey