The Avengers: Arctic Silver Wolf

Avengers polar silver girl 😂

After reading this book, to be honest, I always felt it was weird. The plot was okay, the writing was okay, and it was quite interesting. However, I always found it a bit laborious to read. It took me a long time to realize that when I saw names like Logan, Jeroen, and Coulson, I couldn't immediately combine these names with Iron Man, Captain Wolverine, etc... I have to say, I am a fake Marvel fan. But many people should be like this. When watching Marvel movies, they all remember nicknames, such as Iron Man, Captain of the Winter Soldier, and Hawkeye and Hulk. It really means that they don't pay much attention to their names. So, let me make a small suggestion. In the future, you can write Wolverine Logan, Iron Man Tony, Dr. Banner, Hulk, etc., At least in the first ten or twenty chapters of the novel. Not only can you make up the word count, but the most important thing is to give us readers who don't remember names a process of adapting, otherwise it will be really uncomfortable. Moreover, as an adaptation, you can definitely add some new characters. Although there are quite a lot of existing Marvel heroes, wouldn't it be more interesting to create some unique heroes of your own imagination? Anyway, I personally hope that some new characters will appear, because there are really too many movies in the Marvel series, and the differences in abilities are too big, just like Thor and Black Widow. They have completely unequal strengths, but they were arranged together by Marvel because of their popularity. So I think since the author knows so much about Marvel and his writing is quite tasteful, he can definitely design some strong heroes. I hope the author has more imagination and gives us more surprises! Come on, author!

I want to ask, where is the protagonist?

In fact, after reading this book, I felt really happy because the author added our protagonist, Xiao Liang, to this Marvel world. What's there to be happy about? Because when we watch TV and stuff, these superheroes are all foreigners! Don't tell me about Gu Yi or anything else, they are all supporting characters! Can it be the same? Although Marvel is already producing a Chinese superhero named "Shang-Chi", there is currently no plan to make Shang-Chi into a movie. Therefore, I am very surprised to see Xiaoliang, a Chinese superhero! But... The author, you wrote for a long time without letting Xiao Liang appear! I have to say that the foreshadowing of the plot is indeed necessary, but as the protagonist, you can leave it alone. Can't you write less of these foreshadowings or recall them slowly later? Or maybe the author has some special reasons... But these are not important, anyway, there are indeed more appearances later. Regarding Xiaoliang's experience, I actually think it's quite magical... So why is a broken box quietly waiting for the protagonist to open it? Even if it were me, I would open a bottle and take a look at it. I don't believe that the author has never seen it before? Or is it just like the author explained, Xiaoliang was chosen for the space stone... The person who opened the box in front couldn't bear the power and died? Then the Space Stone stretched out his hand, closed the lid of the box, and continued to wait for his fate, Xiao Liang? Okay, forget it, it is a space stone after all, these explanations are completely reasonable. Then his father carried Xiao Liang to the hospital and said that this stone was bought by Xiao Liang with his life... It's too weird... Including the back, anyway, the original space stone felt that there was no need to hide it, so Xiao Liang had to hold it... He had to have a lot of people see him, and he arrogantly emitted a blue beam of light... My God, as a space gem, it can completely go to Xiao Liang's mental space, isn't it reasonable? There is only one truth! The space stone is definitely conscious! It's definitely intentional! I feel guilty when I write this, because this is the author's behind-the-scenes manipulation... Maybe I accidentally opened a small pot lid? But I think that Xiao Liang is really just an ordinary person now, which is still unreasonable. After being washed away by the power of the original space stone, it is understandable that Xiao Liang did not die. Why did Xiao Liang not have any superpowers after such a big change? In fact, I am very curious about how Xiaoliang became powerful in the future, and what abilities he has. Is it because of the original stone? Or have there been any changes within yourself? I'm very much looking forward to these. Of course, I don't want Xiaoliang's power to come from the original stone. It would be great if he had a brand new ability. Finally... I still have to say, I know this is a novel with a group of protagonists, but I always feel that Xiaoliang appears too little! Other superheroes collided fiercely under the author's arrangement, but our Xiao Liang has been developing silently. To use a very simple metaphor, we are playing the King of Kings. Each of the 10 people is a protagonist and has an indispensable role. From the beginning to the end, everyone is constantly fighting in team battles, encounters, capturing people, and being caught, while our Xiaoliang is constantly fighting in the jungle... Occasionally stealing troops... Anyway, he does not join the team, does not capture people, and does not support... Such a person in the King of Kings, not only the enemy does not like it, but his teammates don't like it even more! Even if Xiao Liang takes off later and Kerry wins the game, at least in the first few minutes of the 20-minute game, Xiao Liang will be sprayed by his teammates and the audience! Therefore, I hope the author can consider my idea and let Xiaoliang have more roles! After all, Xiaoliang, the new hero, is the highlight! The early stage of a novel is much more important than the first few minutes of a game! Big cheers for the author! ! !

I searched for books that have been updated within three days. It's amazing that this book can appear.

I saw the silver wolf and thought it was Bronya

The author's ideas are very good, and the writing style is at least readable and won't make people feel embarrassed. But I would like to make a few suggestions: 1. Shorten the dialogues between your characters, significantly shorten them. You can look at the proportion of character dialogue in your chapter, and compare it with the proportion of character dialogue in other authors. Excessive description of character dialogues leaves readers confused. From the reader's experience, you often write a xx location, and then the hero and villain meet, and then a few pages of dialogue begin. You may have a very strong sense of the picture in your mind. But from a reader's point of view, it is almost difficult for me to have a sense of the picture. It is recommended to strengthen the description of the environment and plot. 2. Distinguish priorities. You need to prioritize the relationships between characters. Take the Golden Three Chapters as an example. You write about Nick Fury in the prologue, a naive kid in the third grade of junior high school in Chapters 1 and 2, and then jump directly to Bucky's attack. Moreover, your word count per chapter is several thousand words larger. From the perspective of a reader, I really don't like this kind of book, because I still don't know whose story you are telling, especially the title of your book mentions the Polar Silver Wolf. Of course, most people will guess that the child is the protagonist, but from my point of view, 1. If the child is the protagonist, there will be almost no sense of substitution for a third-grade child with a non-precocious personality. 2. In your prologue, you also said that the Polar Silver Wolf is the result of biochemical transformation, so it doesn't look like it. So I'm not sure about child protagonists. To summarize, I hope readers will try to write from the perspective of a reader when writing a book, or ask someone to read it for you after you finish writing. At least I won't make these non-plot mistakes.

Hulk was originally very cute, but since he merged with Banner, he doesn't feel cute at all.

Not buddy, Chapter 1 19 years 😰

Wow, the writing and creativity of the Lifetime series are very good. I must stick to it this time.