Pirate Gene Genius

The author has a great imagination and can actually create his own world view instead of relying on pirates to attract readers. After reading Chapter 50, I found that there are too many flaws. Most of them are caused by the author's poor understanding of One Piece and his loose description of the worldview. I can't complain about the fact that the Shichibukai can't defeat ants, Devil Fruits are everywhere on the streets, Rocks is a user with Darkness Fruit ability, Gion had the codename Peach Rabbit 20 years ago, he asked Rayleigh to practice his domineering skills, it's easier to fight Neptune than kill a chicken, etc. Although this is your own novel, you are God. But it's not just because of the word "pirate" that so many people clicked in. Changing the settings without authorization by the author will definitely bring serious dissatisfaction to Haimi. Not to mention the shortcomings in characterization, as long as the characters set by the author themselves have no distinctive characters, they are like blank sheets of paper. As readers read and realize that the world and the pirates in their memories are gradually going astray, they will naturally choose to abandon the book.

. . . Hmm~. . . A little bit poisonous. It's so inhumane. This is the fruit of the operation. . . Don't really want to do this. . What's the use of your immortality? . Your book will also be finished. . Everyone around you is also dead. Or do you, the author, want to push Im? ? . .

Seeing that generally speaking, it's still broad 😁 A cool novel should look like a cool novel, as long as you don't add those idiots. The only shortcoming is that the current novel is too disgusting with women. The main character kills the girl in the right way, which is comfortable to watch. After all, there is no such delicate writing style that is too awkward to write about women. Overall, it is good. I support the author🌹

If you write about animation, just focus on the major animations about migrant workers. It's a bit jumpy to include games.

This book is really beautiful and refreshing. Collecting partners, I like this type.

I don't have a good idea of ​​money. If you are a pirate group, you must know that pirates spend their money very quickly, especially a small pirate group. Even if you can find 1 million Berries🐮🍺

I have read a lot of chapters and would like to make some comments on what I have seen so far. First of all, it is the improvement of the protagonist's strength. As others have said, since there is a 1/10 improvement in strength every time, it is enough to lead the storm troops in Wufeng. Moreover, the finished product made with Neptune-like genes will definitely not be worse than ordinary people in strength. Otherwise, why would there be an ancient weapon like Neptune? Moreover, violent troops will not affect the production of elite troops. Secondly, I read more than 70 chapters and discovered that the so-called genetic geeks use the system to synthesize some miscellaneous genes to create another species. To put it simply, the protagonist's role is minimal. In terms of plundering genes, since the protagonist likes to be a ** and build an archway, why not kill everyone along the way? Isn't it delicious to combine the strengths of all genes and create an invincible product? He wants to follow the path of killing, but he is not a prostitute, and he still acts like a prostitute, letting go of women whenever he encounters them. What kind of overlord route is he taking? There is also the strength of the subordinates. If it is written according to the system, then the created species must have what kind of strength based on the genes. The creation should at least have the peak strength of its genes as soon as it appears. If you want to improve, you can learn, and you should not write nonsense like undeveloped potential in the notes. Undeveloped potential means that the power of the gene has not been expressed and is directly reflected as ordinary. To say that the potential is undeveloped after you already have all the power from the gene is bullshit. Of course, the most important thing is that the sense of immersion is extremely poor. It is neither a pure dark novel nor a brain-burning novel. It feels like a book that cost 5 yuan a book at a roadside stall 10 years ago. Even if you take away the routines of these years, it is not as straightforward as the cool novels 10 years ago. Maybe he is new and inexperienced. The most important thing is that he is another arrogant author who also talks about trolls and sunspots. I just want to say, little brother, who are you? What qualifications do you have to let people attack you like this? Great God? Or from the Writers Guild? If you write poorly, you should read more comments. Don't mention changes. At least you know what's wrong with you. If you just do it for your own entertainment and don't write something good, who will pay? How can you cook and make shit and force consumers to eat it? Can't you say it tastes bad? Why are all current authors so arrogant?

Once again, I voted for you as soon as possible, 5 monthly votes. I have a question for the author, how many more chapters can be written in this book? ? ? I want to continue voting for you. I'm a big fan, please give me some more tips! !

Japanese anime can accommodate Western names, but Chinese novels cannot tolerate a Chinese name.

Show or not 🤭🤭

The author, I suggest that you can get some minions and synthesize some minions at will. They can do chores, cleaners, maintenance workers, ship watchers, etc., Right? For an ordinary pirate, just add an ordinary animal. It feels pretty good.

Do you guys have any more normal pirate novels? Nowadays, pirate novels are uncomfortable if the protagonist is not dark. I just want to read something like Luffy, a warm-blooded and kind-hearted person who can't stand dark novels.

The crew of the protagonist pirate group is currently planned to be the protagonist + cultivated creatures + original characters (a few original characters may also be considered). Do you have any suggestions for the characters in the original novel? Or maybe you don't want to be original or something like that?

Author, to be honest, I want to add some details😏😏

I have only read about seventy chapters, and I feel like the author has not watched One Piece at all. The timeline is so messed up, and some of the plots don't add up. The Millennium Dragon's island is in the East China Sea, not the Grand Line. Also, the current time of the protagonist is two years after Roger was executed (the timeline of about seventy chapters), which means that the red hair has only been forming the pirate group for two years at most, but you told me that the red hair will be able to become the Yonko in one or two years?

Six recommendation votes, py them 😏 and add some refinement 🤫

The protagonist's ability should explode! Even if the power is not very strong, as the number increases, the protagonist's power explodes. Why take the elite route? And the correct way to use the replacement ability should not be to replace the devil fruit ability user into the sea? Even if you can come up, I will do it again. I will see how long you, a Devil Fruit user, can resist in the sea.

The system has no limit on the number of synthesis units, so why doesn't it explode? ? By crippling a random pirate and then genetically synthesizing it with a pirate, you can get one-tenth of the power and an absolutely loyal subordinate. If you don't do anything that makes a lot of money, you have to save it. How can you earn interest by saving it? ? This author's IQ is really stupid

Does the author know Robin's true role? Taking Robin is the most correct choice. For many novels, rescuing Robin is only based on appearance and popularity. Everyone likes Robin so they save her and make her one of their own. However, these authors have no idea of ​​Robin's true value. Robin is too important to pirates. Throughout the entire pirate world, for later pirates, no matter the four emperors, the government, the navy or the revolutionary army, Robin must be obtained. The government needs to destroy Robin (maybe need Robin's ability to hack things if possible) The Revolutionary Army needs Robin to take down the government. (If possible, win over some just governments and disintegrate the alliance internally) The future direction of the navy is unknown (actually, pirate fans can be independent from the navy. After all, the navy is the navy and the government is the government. The navy is equivalent to a tool man. Many navy do not like the government.) As for the Yonko, it is not yet sure. Whether the Yonko really wants the secret treasure is still unknown (but it is inevitable that someone is related to the government)

I hope the author will not be so "killing decisively" Not the Virgin, but there are some righteous marines who don't need to be killed. After all, they are still needed to maintain order Also, don't describe too many scenes of killing ordinary marines, just mention it in one sentence😥

The Shichibukai can't defeat a group of ants, which doesn't mean that this novel isn't good to read. It might be good if you've read 18 chapters, but I couldn't stand it after Chapter 18.

This novel is very comfortable to read, no ink stains, the protagonist is strong, and the partners are also strong and decisive in killing. It is not like some pirate fans who are grinding and grinding, just looking uncomfortable and feeling uncomfortable. It is quite comfortable to read here. Of course, all this is based on not paying attention to the details, timeline, combat power, etc. There are a few loopholes, but it is no problem to read as a fast food article 🙂

I'm sorry for the title of the book. Gene saw it, but geeks didn't.

This book is full of poisonous points, why are the reviews full of good comments?

I suggest the author watch more One Piece anime before writing about fanfics. What kind of stuff are they writing about?

It's actually pretty good, the details may not be great, but the overall picture is still very good, and the protagonist's character is very much like that of a pirate, and I didn't see the Madonna link.

Signed I hope everyone will support me next time

The subject matter is good, but when you see the game, you will jump into it. Naruto, Bleach, Dragon Ball, One Piece, etc. Well-known IPs have many genes for you to write about.

I actually finished watching it, but... Why, Shanks was pushed into Impel Down. I used to fight with Shanks as if they were good friends, but in the end he won and pushed Shanks into the city. It's poisonous. Also, the fight between Hawkeye and the original Ghost Blade was not described in the end, and the protagonist is a bit too poisonous. In the previous life, an ordinary person became hard-hearted after traveling through time. He quickly adapted and became a boss. Is it possible?

In Chapter 249, I directly persuaded them to quit. I vomited the four female crew members immediately. I tolerated four of them after just one or two. Isn't it a bit too much?