Green Bay Miracle

How many chapters has Liv written? I counted, and I have already written eighteen chapters off the court after this game. The next game is against the Lions, a weak team. If I don't write in detail, I guess breaking chapter twenty off the court is not a problem. I can also give it a try if I go straight to chapter thirty. Chapter 5: Post-match media conference, Chapter 13: Liv related, depending on the situation, the number of disciples of Jesus has caught up. I think the reason why this book's performance is not as good as the previous one is not only because of the niche of rugby themes, but also because of the rhythm problem. Otherwise, the performance of King of the Bay Area is so good and a new book is about rugby. Why is there such a heavy loss of reader stickiness? I think I have become very patient when reading books. Many readers said that the pace of the Bambi book was slow. I thought it was quite good. But how many chapters did a post-game media conference last for King of the Bay Area? How many chapters did I write to confirm my relationship with my girlfriend? How many off-field chapters are there between games? In the second regular season, the game against the Cardinals, the post-game media conference, bonus points, signing of a new contract, and a visit to Ryan, there are 15 chapters in total; in the second season, the regular season game against the Rams, Bambi's birthday after the game, the media conference, confirming the relationship with his girlfriend off the court, the team member's birthday celebration at the bar, going back to his parents' house to eat noodles, being confessed and rejected by Logan's sister, and having sex with his girlfriend, there are 14 chapters in total. ... I don't know whether I want to create a full image or just a low number of words, but after reaching a certain level, there will be little difference between the two in the eyes of readers. What exactly did the update reveal? It's okay to write brilliantly off the court... It's too unpleasant to mention. As a reader who loves the description of teenagers' game skills, I just want to say that this book highlights the shortcomings after increasing the off-court ratio. The protagonist's American humor and eloquence have reached the level at a media meeting where the protagonist says one sentence to the media to shock the allies, secretly gritting his teeth, feeling embarrassed and angry, and giving overt criticism and covert praise for more than a dozen sentences. Do you know that it is actually not that funny? As for the girlfriend scene, it's actually not too poorly written. It's sweet and nice with a few embellishments in the Bay Area. Too much of it ends up being a bit overwhelming. If you want to create a full-fledged protagonist, you can. People say that the slow pace is not to prevent you from shaping the protagonist. It is like the cliché often used in the opening remarks of documentaries about sports celebrities: "... He is a great athlete, but in addition to being an athlete, he is also...", But the prerequisite for this "but" is that he is a great athlete. To create a full-fledged protagonist, it is actually possible to write a few more exciting games. I think Bambi is quite full. This is the sports section, not the biographies section of virtual celebrities. It doesn't ask you why you should do your best to make a living before the Huns are destroyed. Do you want to advance to the playoffs first and then act with a heartbeat? I saw the update today and clicked in. Have you beaten the Lions yet? Not yet! It's really yours👍 I have persisted in reading this book until now, because I really don't want to read it. In fact, the relationship between the reader and the author is not that close. If you don't want to read it, just read it. There is no need for me to write such a long paragraph, and it is easy to be scolded. Isn't it nice to wave my sleeves without taking away a cloud? But I can never forget the excitement of watching "King of the Bay Area" at that time. I always felt that I wanted to say something, but I was afraid that this book had become so popular that no one would read it for a long time, so I finally wrote it down. If the boy just wants to write a story according to his own ideas, it doesn't matter what I say, and I support your idea. If a young man has a higher pursuit of achievements than The Detonation, maybe he can occasionally think about whether there is something wrong with the rhythm of this book. Is it necessary to write so much off-screen to create a character? Finally, I wish this book can achieve better results, and I will give you a monthly ticket as a reward.

The description and narration of a game is too slow, and the first half is only completed in 10 chapters. How do you write about the subsequent games?

The pace is so slow, and some of the American-style cold humor is actually a bit awkward to read. Because this kind of humor is better to watch in a movie, because it is in English, it doesn't feel that way when reading in Chinese. It's very unsmooth. Especially these chapters that deal with internal conflicts are inexplicably boring and boring. There are too many cold humors. The protagonist of the latest chapter You have to tiptoe when entering the door. An acting coach who has just won an ups and downs victory and got a new opportunity. With the character of Lao Mei, he should not be high-spirited and walk with wind. Now he looks like a little sufferer, groveling. Acting coach, you are also a coach. You have accepted your fate after getting the boss (principal). It doesn't matter if he is a veteran. You hold the command arrow, not the chicken feathers. What's more, now the office is full of newcomers (according to your description, sparks have not yet appeared), and you also have your own team (coaches at the same time). The theories conflict, that is, people who are different do not work together. Now, convincing an old stubborn can change his ideas. Well, it feels impossible. Now I mainly think about how to win the next game. As long as you win, you are right. He has nothing to say. In competitive sports, the winner is always right. If you have a relationship with them again, if your ideas are not in harmony, if you have a battle with ups and downs and more than twenty chapters like the first game, you will not reverse it again and again. As for the old man's influence, the protagonist mobilized a lot of players in the first game. You also said that the protagonist's advantage is that he is close to the players and can command on the spot. You are the coach. You win over most of the players and lead them to win, so that you can control the locker room, right? The coach must excel, Mourinho and Klopp are typical examples. Let the protagonist be a madman who is a rugby coach, which is more in line with the competitive flavor at the core of competitive novels. Can win games, can make news, and has great personal charm. According to rugby movies, they probably directly conflict with the old man instead of cowardly running to please him. Isn't rugby passionate? Passion on the field and more passion off the field are worth watching, right? The players are passionate on the field, but the head coach is timid off the field. The gap is too big. Otherwise, you wouldn't even know who the protagonist is. Moreover, I feel that a young head coach who is passionate and confident can be more recognized by young people, mobilize the atmosphere, and can also be recognized by fans. He speaks in a gentle and elegant manner. It would be better if he is in his 50s or 60s. Well, it's purely a personal opinion.

I would like to give you a suggestion: during the new book period, don't read one chapter at 8 o'clock or one chapter at 10 o'clock as before. It will be incoherent and uncomfortable to read.

I feel like the author went a little too far. Will most fans focus more on Mahomes or Andy Reid? Focus more on Tom Brady or Belichick? If he wins, he must be bragging about Brother Long. The most exciting part of the game is the players on the field. At most, they will think that this Chinese coach is good. But the discussion about the coach is overwhelming, and I even think that the coach is very charming, because this coach watched this game, which is too exaggerated. The author wants to write about the NFL from a coach's perspective, which is great, but writing about coaches from a player's perspective feels like a new role and an old routine, changing the soup without changing the medicine.

Recommended from Shuhai, I read it in one go and finished it in one go. I don't know anything about rugby but I still enjoyed watching it_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_As for the emotional drama, I think the author wrote it well, but I feel that the game and the individual are not balanced for some reason. There are too few emotional scenes, I feel like they could be interspersed occasionally. I don't know why so many book friends are dissatisfied with the emotional drama (๑• . •๑).

It's really weird to write about coaches but describe too much details on the field, and this work is not an ensemble drama. If the author still prefers to describe the details on the field, he might as well create it from the perspective of the players. To be honest, I feel a little sick after seeing it today. I might as well go back and watch King of the Bay Area again.

As a sports fan, I like football and basketball the most. I only watch football occasionally to understand the rules and individual stars. But through the author's novels, I have a deeper understanding of the sport of rugby and the love and hate of American professional rugby. Although some people say that the author's popular science content is too redundant and slows down the pace, but for a newbie like me, these contents make me feel the beauty of this sport and the fun of this book. However, the content written by the author is indeed too slow, but this does not mean that the author is inferior. The various adjectives and psychological descriptions in the novel make people feel like they are actually there. This is the author's advantage, but compared to the 10,000 words, it feels like there is nothing to say. There are a lot of words written, but the content of the story is small, so readers always feel that the author writes slowly. I hope the author can coordinate and improve the story rhythm and description in the future. I would like to thank the author for letting me gradually fall in love with this sport from an ordinary knowledge of rugby and let me feel the beauty of this sport. Finally, I sincerely hope that the author will write better and better, and I will order all of them.

I just read dozens of chapters, I think, a 20-yard long pass, and the commentator said 500 words in just two or three seconds while the ball was in the air. What kind of god is this, talking so fast? It's not that I haven't watched the game, but the commentator is when the quarterback (name) makes a long pass to find the receiver (name). This is a thirty-yard pass, and the commentator cannot speak very fast. Instead, he slows down and emphasizes the tone at the critical moment. If the author wants to describe the passing process, it is better not to use commentary. It is very unreasonable.

Please author, please advance the plot! You are not writing a competition review, you are writing a novel or an online novel! The most important thing is the plot. . . 260,000 Words, tell yourself how much plot you have promoted. . . The only thing that promoted it was probably the conflict between the protagonist and the defense team and then it was gone! The competition can be more detailed, but writing every competition in detail will force people to withdraw their books! If you write a basketball novel like this, you can finish it with one ball, one or two chapters, and one game. . . Please, push the plot forward or my investment designation is over. . .

Hello, author, I read this book from the previous one. In fact, I stopped reading it after halfway through it. I put it on the bookshelf. What I want to say is that the pace is so slow. Three-fifths of a book is about the inner thoughts of the protagonist and the other two-fifths are about other things. Although your writing is very good and there are dozens of chapters, which is fine, but the pace of the whole book is really unbearable. The same is true for this book... Can you not write so much space about the protagonist? Who wants to read this? They are all online novels. You have to write them smoothly and quickly. You can't write several chapters in a row that are about the protagonist's heart. The competition is very exciting to write, but you have to be caught in the middle. I really don't have the patience to read it. It's a refreshing article. It's also very good. Do you think it is... To be honest, I only read half of your last book. The later ones are limited exemptions. I didn't read them and just put them on the bookshelf. I remember there were several limited exemptions.

The descriptive perspective of this book is a bit out of touch with the protagonist. The competition is wonderfully written, but it is not the protagonist who is performing. The only place where the protagonist can express himself is to break the inherent perceptions of Americans. However, the United States is no longer the city on a hill it used to be. There is nothing exciting about asking Americans to identify with Chinese and Asian Americans.

I just finished reading the author's famous book King of the Bay Area. I was a little dizzy after reading a few chapters, but I finished reading this book 233 First of all, this article is very friendly to newcomers like me who don't know anything about rugby. Starting from about chapter 10, it starts to use every detail to popularize science. Every time a term that has not been explained before appears, it will be explained. I feel like I can go watch the game now hhh The pace is slow, firstly because there are a lot of action and environment descriptions and some small subplots, which seem very watery. It is this kind of writing that makes this article not as exciting as other sports articles, but it is very graphic, and the influence and character of important characters are lifelike. Secondly, because there is a lot written about the game process, those who follow the game can only read it intermittently over a few days per game (but the author seems to be very diligent), but I quite like it, and it feels like I am watching a game (but sometimes it feels like the author's clockwise, counterclockwise and left and right are also wrong). There are a lot of translation accents and American humor, as well as discrimination and exclusion from foreign countries. It can be seen that the author strives to make us immersed in the scene. It would be awkward if book friends still read it from a Chinese perspective. In short, although the performance of this book is not good, I still like it, especially the vivid images of many supporting characters233

The previous book was like that, the protagonist had to go through all kinds of hardships This book is like that again, in a game that was 17 points behind, after overtaking, the defensive team could actually mock the protagonist like this? Is it the Virgin who still hopes to reconcile after being targeted like this? I hope this book can make things smoother for the protagonist. What you have written is full of problems and contradictions, which makes me sad to read.

Really! A sports book that doesn't include coaching is not a good sports book!

The wonderful foreplay and the hasty ending, although it is said to leave everyone in suspense, but everyone must want to continue watching. The excitement just started and ended abruptly.

Emmmm, how can I put it this way? The plots described in the previous two days' updates made me feel like I had seen them all before. The two chapters updated today revealed the mystery at once. Isn't the plot of the draft a copy of the general plot of the movie "Draft Day"?

To be honest, I only started paying attention to rugby after reading the author's book😄

The book is a good book. The pace is just too slow.

I originally thought that the author had posted the wrong chapter... But it turned out... This was too fast, rushing to finish the book?

It's too slow. Zhang Ping and Shu Ping of Shu You. Very few. If you write like this, readers will leave.

As an American football fan, I should be very happy to have an author write a novel about American football, but I don't quite understand that the author should know a lot about football, but he writes it as if it is for a novice, and many of the descriptions of football in it are wrong. . . .

It's been dozens of chapters and I'm just starting to warm up...

While fattening up, I looked back and saw that the King of the Bay Area was gone. 😰 Very good book, informative

Well, if you directly copy the movie, at least include the author's words...

So this Liv is the heroine?

I just finished watching the NFC championship and a Super Bowl. Then I took a curious look at the table of contents. There are 98 chapters of the Super Bowl that haven't been finished yet. I'll wait until you finish writing.

The draft is finally here, look forward to it!

Nowadays, American TV stations are like the one in the past when a certain TV station sold melatonin ads.

It's very well written. Come on, the pace could be a little faster.