Dominate the Super Bowl

After all these years, the author still doesn't know how to write cool articles. Obviously the best gimmick is Brady's nemesis. That's the thrill of winning from beginning to end. He has to write about paying the price for the growth of his companions. Yes, some people say that growth is important. Yes, some people say winning and losing are normal. Yes, some people say that winning the championship will be enough, but in reality it will be fine. But this is a novel. Don't you even dare to think about it in your novel? I suggest you read Ai Jiang's basketball articles. Although he often suffers from youthful illness, he tortures Jordan in his debut and personally sends him to retire forever. Then he tortures the deputy goat. He also writes about losing games and losing championships for various reasons, but the coolness is always there. There are more than ten or twenty chapters describing the competition, and then you lose the opportunity because of your partner's mistakes, and then two more chapters where you try your best and fall short? Aren't you a human being? There was all kinds of publicity about Brady's nemesis before the game, but this is the result? If you want to write about losing in development, wouldn't you make it brief and clean? The characters in the book need to grow, can you grow a little bit?

The pitfalls of very long online articles and sports themes are taken care of in the middle and later stages of this book. Repeat, water. There must be someone who refutes it, so let's analyze it. 1. Hydrological issues. Sports themes are generally composed of three parts - competition, business, and life. The appropriate proportions are configured according to the author's writing skills. 1.1 Commercial activities account for too much. In sports themes, there must be commercial activities, and the protagonist needs to make money. But business activities are the least interesting part to most readers. Many stars come out of the factory and then pretend to be cool and slap them in the face. It's cool to see them fresh, but the word count and rhythm must be appropriate. For four or five consecutive chapters, it is just a pretense of a commercial activity. Most of the stars are irrelevant to the rest of the story. It becomes boring if it is repeated too many times. Sometimes more than ten chapters are devoted to this kind of commercial activities... 1.2 If you are not good enough, don't write too many life plots. There are a lot of competitions, knowledge introductions, and business activities, and the life plot is inherently fragmented. The author is not familiar with the rhythm of balancing different contents, but he still has to write a lot of life plot. Several female celebrities appear and disappear, and then the text basically disappears. Each of them has to talk for hundreds of words to show the fun of the protagonist... At least three young ladies who play ambiguously almost clearly confess to the protagonist, but before the ending, the protagonist neither has a harem nor is single-minded, and they are all hanging. In front of reporters' cameras, they were clearly involved in rumors of scandals, but the other ladies did not get jealous or have any conflicts. Then the portrayal of these female characters is unrealistic and vivid, and the protagonist instantly turns into an irresponsible fish farmer. Apart from the amusing ambiguity in the early stage, what's the point of highlighting the disgustingness of the protagonist in the middle and later stages? Two terminally ill fans, full hair knife, what is the meaning of the repeated pattern? Can't a knife and a miracle restore it? What's the point of repeating the exact same tear-jerking pattern? The little girl's tear-jerking was already very touching and definitely the highlight of the book. And then the little boy does it again? And there are countless chapters for a knife, five or six chapters for death of illness, a few chapters for grief, a few chapters for funerals, a few chapters for commemoration after the game, and after the commemoration, I have to go back to the present moment to express my feelings for a few more chapters. Can't use up a useful knife? Little boy do it again. Does the author know what "blank space" is? I won't talk about how frustrated fans try to cheer themselves up with the same tactics. These routines may be worth hundreds or thousands of words in other books, but the repeated routines in this book are worth tens of thousands of words! 2. Competition issues. 2.1 There is too much space to introduce background knowledge! There is too much pretense between the two games! The protagonist beats four or five defensive players in one game, and has a lot of substitutes for the main players of more than 30 teams. In four college and professional seasons, almost all the defensive players who were beaten by the protagonist have background introductions... All! Not to mention ruining the exhilarating feeling of running the ball, how many words have been lost in this introduction! It's like this from beginning to end! Why should I know about a passer-by with no real ability? His college, draft, physical data, career performance, future development... Is it none of my business? It is appropriate to write down the history of a team and the changes and introductions of the main core players. But why do we need to take stock of three or four chapters about the gossip about this team? Repeat, repeat, repeat! I already know that the Patriots won the regular season and were blocked by the New York Giants in the playoffs. There is no need to repeat this knowledge dozens of times. Others are the same, I don't want to see this curse and that curse 10,000 times, and read seven or eight chapters before the game. 2.2, The most important thing! A common problem with sports topics is that writing too long always annoys people. When the protagonist himself is relatively weak, and the team and teammates are also relatively weak, it is very satisfying to make a comeback against the odds. The protagonist is already the template for a perfect legendary athlete at his peak. The team's weaknesses have been strengthened, the strength and experience of his teammates have become stronger, and even the team's morale and team spirit have been condensed by the protagonist! Or make a comeback against the wind and make a comeback against the wind? Always making a comeback? Approaching Chapter 2000 or is it a comeback? The game was beaten 21:0 in the first quarter. How could you be so embarrassed to write such a score? In the peak season of three consecutive championships, the team and the protagonist were at their peak strength. Even if they performed abnormally, how did they lose so many points in the first quarter? How did you score and get zero? How is the strengthening of the front defensive team and offensive team reflected in this? Where does the protagonist unite the soul of the team? In addition, classic scenes such as the ultimate rescue, Hail Mary, and that ball catch have been used over and over again! How many times have you written the protagonist's extreme catch? Quarterbacks have always been useless, right? If the quarterback is not useless, then the offensive line has always been useless, right? In reality, famous scenes that only happen a few times a season have to be played two or three times in a game, right? The classic protagonist who only meets once every few years or even decades has to come every game, right? In many games, I have the feeling that the defensive team is useless, and occasionally the Nuggets are amazing. The offensive line is useless and needs the protagonist to save the field all year round. The tight ends and receivers are useless. There may not be enough pick-and-rolls in one game. As long as the protagonist runs the ball, he is alone. The description of the long-yardage touchdown run in the article, in reality, the running back is a god, and his body will be disabled in a few months, and all players who should help the running back screen and roll should be shot. This is what happens when sports articles are too long. Generally speaking, many games should just be written down by the score. There should be fewer comeback games, more confrontational games, and less descriptions of winning games... In summary, even four seasons should not have so many chapters. If the details are properly summarized, how about ending it as soon as possible and opening a new pit? 3. Summary: Many things must be written, but if there is too much water and too much repetition, it will change the taste. Many exciting scenes and touching plots are necessary, but if they are over-produced without leaving any blank space, and repeated use of routines, it becomes disgusting. The most serious problem with this book is water. It's not that online articles shouldn't be watery, but if they are too watery, you can't read them.

Author, are you always thinking about the usefulness of the Greater China market? Or is there no market for Asians at all, just like baseball?

The author should find a way to dehydrate his writing. The problems of the old works have not changed at all, they are still so bloated. The author makes too many meaningless exclamations and too many useless descriptions of the environment. For example, they say "kick on the ground, kick on the ground", "roar and roar", and then a group of people shout slogans, and it turns into a sea of ​​some color. If you write once in a while, you can get your blood boiling. But if you write like this every time, people will think you are just talking nonsense. Many things that happen in the blink of an eye, without any sense of speed, are drowned by your unnecessary expression of emotions.

Huh? Writing NFl again? Write less about comebacks from desperate situations...

Can you write about baseball? Baseball is also the second largest ball in the United States.

Some touchdown moments. Via Chun Daosang

You don't even need to read it, just follow the next chapter until the end. There's not much in it. I can't stand it. There's not much in it.

The only core is the quarterback. In addition to the fact that quarterbacks are all supporting players, football is a world of quarterbacks. In ancient times, running backs could still occupy a certain position. Nowadays, football is all played around the quarterback.

A new book has been opened! I would like to give you a suggestion, don't do post-game interviews. Try not to write about the so-called sense of humor that makes you dig at the soles of your feet in the villa. You really can't control this aspect!

To be honest, I really don't see the protagonist as a running back. Although the exposure during the competition is quite high. But there are too many dangers. The author needs to create a god-level skill that is immune to injuries. Then you have to give wisdom to the examiner so that the doctor can come to terms with it.

It's pretty. Then I feel that one is not to write about Jesus Christ. Jesus Christ is very common in English, and the Chinese expression is really strange. Second, either don't write a female protagonist. If you want to write, don't write an innocent male protagonist. It's really strange for people in such a chaotic circle to play one-on-one. In particular, he is in love with a certain Hollywood female star, like a white lotus, wow, it is so poisonous.

Your book as a whole makes me feel like a student who studies hard with his head down on the table all day long and quietly. Only highlight it during the exam. Very dull. Has the author ever thought about changing the style? Write less about professional knowledge and introduce less. With millions of words, you can't keep writing about football, games and training, right? Life needs adjustment and entertainment! Twenty-four hours a day. Sleep for 8 hours. Work counts as 10 hours for you. You also have to devote a quarter of the space to writing off-site plot!

The reading experience is terrible. Why is the sports competition written in the martial arts style and fantasy style? Moreover, a normal warm-up game can be written with more than ten chapters, and the warm-up match of the team game is written with more than thirty chapters. In the future official games and even the professional games in the future, wouldn't it be necessary to write dozens of chapters for one game? The rhythm and atmosphere of the game are not well controlled.

It was the first time I saw football at the starting point. It was a bit sad. I had to explain the rules and the functions of different positions while writing the plot 😢. I have a good friend who is currently working towards the NFL and will soon join the NCAA's second-level competition. If he can appear in the NCAA's first-level competition by then, I will save the replay for everyone to see. I will give you a monthly ticket. Cheers, author.

The influence of football in the United States is really great. But when it comes to other countries, it doesn't have much popularity. In other words, maybe people don't care. So it is really difficult for the author to write this kind of novel. . . It takes a lot of space to popularize science rules, unspoken rules and the like. For example, why does a baseball batter perform a full-scale martial arts attack when hit by a pitcher's throw, or why does an ice hockey pole throw occur? Anyway, come on. . .

NFL running backs are consumables, and people like Henry and Lin are also troubled by injuries. I think tight ends like Biggron are quite good. As soon as this book came out it reminded me of Nick Chubb again

For Brady, the two most important championships are the last two championships won by stepping on Mahomes... Completely killing the controversy about goat.

The author can change his career, whether he writes about the NBA or football. You have great writing skills, but it's a pity that rugby doesn't have a large audience.

Just one or two pieces of science popularization is enough, dozens of chapters are just one game, and then it is all about popularizing science. A paragraph can be repeated several times.

The author writes so well, why don't many people read the book?

Mo Yan has insisted on writing about unpopular subjects for so many years. It is not easy. It is purely for love.

There are no good baseball articles

Isn't there a translation for straight-arm block?

We have already reached the top of the league with a complete victory season, so what else can we write about next? . .

Can you understand this book if you don't understand the rules of rugby?

There are some places where it is not necessary to write in such detail. . .

Why is it that rugby novels are so easy to come by? Even if it has been in the Bay Area for 17 years, why is this book becoming more and more popular?

One monthly pass, three recommended plus one 🙂

Brother, when are you going to write another tennis book?