Konoha's Nine Suns Ban

Apart from anything else, the women in the original work, including Hong, please don't write that the protagonist is interested in them, and don't snatch the CP in the original work. This kind of behavior is disgusting. If you have to find a heroine, you can choose a heroine who does not have a CP in the original work and one is enough. Of course, it is best not to have a heroine. After all, it is troublesome and the plot is watered down. After reading a few chapters, I always feel that I want to attack Hong, so I can't help but say a few words. If the author doesn't mean that, just pretend that I didn't say it.

The Chinese name suddenly exploded. To be honest, our Chinese fonts are quite special. It would be very inconsistent to appear in Japanese or Western fantasy. I used to think why the British minister was called Chamberlain.

Read two chapters to persuade me to quit. Author, you are not here to make fun of me.

Already read, there are too many typos, it's only chapter 6, the plot is okay, there's nothing bad about it at the beginning,

This plot... Starting from Chapter 2271, I was beaten up and returned to Konoha, and then I started pretending to be young and went to the ninja academy! Pretend to be slapped in the face and pick up girls there! I have no idea what the protagonist is doing. For what?

I admire you for being able to continue writing, that's awesome

I will be slower, but I will be more complete. At the same time, a new book will be released in the next few days.

After reading more than 20 chapters, Kai actually doesn't shout about youth! Are you lying?

To be honest, the author, you can just make something that can absorb the three major pupil skills and the nine tailed beasts. You can make a Kuiyujiang Ten Thousand Demon Body, and you don't have any martial arts skills, and you don't have any martial arts skills. The most important thing is to make a thunderbolt character to be a golden finger, but he doesn't even read the poem number! The invisible magic threads inherent in Lianwan Demon only appear when they absorb tailed beasts and the like! And you're so awesome at absorbing the eight-tailed and blind-seeing protagonist.

After reading the first 16 chapters, it is unclear whether Gold Finger works, how well the protagonist understands Gold Finger, or how much Gold Finger understands, and Gold Finger is almost invisible. Suggestions: 1. Add a description of the cheat 2. Add the protagonist's description of the development of the cheat

The plot is always confusing, the characters appear and disappear inexplicably, and Goldfinger is a complete mess that makes people unable to understand and feel unhappy. In short, reading this book is like a dream. The confusing plot development and the emotional branches are so far away that you can't even describe what it is about.

I made more than 880 from my investment, and I give back to the author with points