Scroll of Immortality

Forehead. . . . Since I think I am just a friend, why should I help her improve her understanding of the Dao? I don't understand. Even if it is not a case of enmity, women are the most fickle. Between becoming an immortal and falling in love, they will almost always choose becoming an immortal. It's best not to write it down. You can achieve the Tao alone, and chickens and dogs can ascend to heaven, instead of letting her abandon you. You should become stronger as soon as possible and help her. Even if you can't help, it's God's will. If you are sure that the relationship is fine and there is no shadow, just give up to the Dao. Whether it is her Dao heart that is not strong or your Dao heart is not strong, let's go to eat. This does not go against your own Dao, but it goes against the Dao. The gains and losses involved, you can figure it out for yourself.

Brother, just keep writing. If you are impeccable, you will not fail. I support you here and am impressed by your writing style.

The author's writing is very good, but the first 50 chapters of the book are okay, but after the 50th chapter, something doesn't feel right. The protagonist's cheating is too powerful, just like mindless cheating. He can practice everything quickly, and there are many things to practice. The key is that the realm is not high, and he can casually challenge the realm of the second grade of high school. People, the key to this book's cultivation system is to cultivate immortality. In this book, there is a strong separation between realm and combat power. In other words, if the protagonist is removed, the realm and combat power of other people are in contrast. However, when paired with the protagonist, no matter how high the realm is, the protagonist can be beaten twice if their combat power drops seriously. Of course, I only read Chapter 76, and I really can't stand it any longer. I suggest that you can refer to some of the views in "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" when cultivating immortality. If you are at a higher level, no matter how strong the protagonist's foundation is, you will definitely be beaten to death, and you will most likely be killed instantly. It's very simple. Those whose foundation is much worse than the protagonist may not be able to cultivate to a higher realm. Those who can cultivate to a high realm, the foundation is not much different. As for the protagonist holding the elixir, it is powerful, but the most basic spiritual consciousness of others will definitely be stronger, and the control of the spiritual consciousness will definitely be stronger. Not to mention the second higher realm, I don't believe that in a system of cultivating immortals, holding elixirs is such a big advantage. The chapter about fighting Cheng Danlong is very mindless, and there are golden wings and Buddhist cultivation techniques in the back. All Buddhist cultivation techniques actually have hidden conditions, which is the realm of Buddhism. To put it simply, do you agree with the views in the Buddhist scriptures? If you don't agree, then I'm sorry that you can't get into the Buddhist cultivation techniques. All Buddhist practitioners first practice one type of cultivation to the peak and then transform themselves into another form to practice another one. I didn't realize that those who practice Qi practice are Buddhist practitioners. , So the author's writing style is very good. The setting of this book is a mindless and cool novel where the protagonist is invincible. If you like this type of book, you can read it. It is very good.

I can't say long words of praise, but I can still say what needs to be said. The writing is excellent, the plot is coherent and smooth, there is not much explanation, and there is nothing harmful to me personally. Next, for those who like to read posts and decide whether to stay or not, I will give a summary of the first five chapters of this novel: The protagonist was over 30 years old in his previous life, with an older brother, younger children, and a wife. After being drunk, he took away Lin Zhao, a 12-year-old Juren from Dawu Kingdom who was struck by lightning, and has the memory of the original owner. Goldfinger is a card from a past life (related to thunder) and has the gift of photographic memory. In the world of Gaowu, the map is huge and there are monsters and monsters. At the end of each chapter there is a poem appropriate to the occasion. A few more suggestions: The author should be a newbie and will update 13 chapters in a row on October 31st. You shouldn't do this. After all, the main thing for newcomers and new works is to accumulate popularity (recommendation votes/investors/Y month P votes). Accumulate food widely and slowly become king. Generally, the starting point will be 20/25/300,000 words (big masters like to publish it at night to accumulate popularity). If it is not popular, it will be on the street (there will be no resources for the street). Before putting it on the shelves, try not to update it for 30 consecutive days, otherwise it will be put on the shelves very early. Communicate well with the editor-in-charge. Don't even know if you have signed a contract or put it on the shelves. Interact well with the readers (don't criticize), build groups, build advertising/complaint/character building... (Delete posts if you are not following the rules, such as advertising that occupies the first post 😡) Two or three days before it is put on the shelves, notify brothers and sisters who watch pirated copies, support the first subscription (exploit his niang's 20 updates), and set the principle of explosive updates. Strive to become a high-quality product, complete a high-quality book, make money while lying down, adapt movies and TV shows, book manuscript royalties, sea villas, fair and beautiful and long legs, life... I can't think of so many things for the time being, and I won't reply again, for fear of falling in love in the future. For everyone's sake, please give it a thumbs up! Relative

They are both green-shirted guests at the end of the world, writing half of their lives with their thoughts. Congratulations to the outstanding newbie, I hope you can stick to it.

Regarding Chapter 73, the pig's trotters fight against the six-winged golden cicada, which seems to be too high-level to fight monsters, and the opinions of Hanxi Book Friends alone are sharp. But I am very happy. From the previous book reviews, we can see that Hanxi Book Friends is good at thinking and the questions raised are also in-depth. I will give a brief answer here and talk about my writing ideas in this chapter. Actually, when I was writing this chapter, I considered the question you raised, but finally decided to write it with this result. It was neither random writing when my mind was hot nor to fool readers. In fact, in this book, I don't know if you have discovered that the golden finger of the pig's foot has never been a mysterious token. It's about the monster-like brain, IQ, and systematic thinking patterns developed in previous lives. Therefore, pig's feet can become a boxing master within three years in the mortal world. This is like a monster genius in reality who can graduate from college at the age of eleven or twelve and complete various innovative theories. The world of monsters is completely unimaginable to mortals. In my setting, the mortal boxing master still has broad prospects in the world of cultivation. The premise is that he has the foundation to practice and can improve his energy level. The three most powerful advantages of the Six-winged Golden Cicada are speed, indestructibility, and divine consciousness attack. Those who can block his quick kill may not be able to block his divine attack; those who can block his divine attack may not be able to block his lightning-like quick kill. Both of them are blocked, and there is nothing that can be done with its indestructible body. This is the fundamental reason why the six-winged golden cicada can still look around and look around when surrounded by a group of real people in the Chengdan stage. This is also an answer to another previous book review by Hanxi Book Friend. So why are pig's feet so awesome, capable of blocking many vicious insects that even real people can't deal with? Is this really mindless cheating? Calling a nuclear bomb an immortal is really not the case. My thinking is this: The lightning-fast speed of the six-winged golden cicada is a puzzle to many Qi-flow cultivators, but it is not a problem at all for Lin Zhao. If a great master of boxing is not even aware of his moves, but does not have the sensitivity of the six senses, how can he be called a great master of boxing? It's almost enough to talk nonsense about the Grandmaster. Therefore, one of the core killing moves of the Six-winged Golden Cicada is removed first; The spiritual attack is blocked by the mysterious thunder card, and then one of the killing moves is removed; The remaining one is the indestructible King Kong. In fact, if you read the book carefully, you will find that the Indestructible King Kong of the Six-winged Golden Cicada is flawed, and its weakness is the internal organs. The most basic thing for a great master of boxing is to control the strength. Dark strength is vicious, and transformed strength can attack everywhere. In addition, the pig's feet's unparalleled fist strength and pure true energy are integrated into one, which increases its energy level, so that it can fight against the six-winged golden cicada that is seriously injured. Then why is the pig's foot such a sacred thing? Letting go of the six-winged golden cicada that everyone loves is not something you can't do, but you really can't. The pig's trotters were beaten but not destroyed, and they did not dare to be forced to arrest them. Everyone made up their own minds for the reasons. The above is the basic idea behind why this chapter of pig's feet is so awesome. It's really not just random writing. Of course, everyone has different understandings and perspectives, and it is normal to have different opinions. Thank you again to Du Diao Hanxi and to the many book friends who have always supported me. This book is a new work by a novice and has many flaws. Up to now, the results have been mediocre. Today at 14:00 on December 1st, the editor gave a recommendation for a popular serial. Book friends who are familiar with the starting point routine should understand what this means. Maybe my level is indeed not enough. Now I can only do my best to write, and please forgive me for any shortcomings.

When I see an expert calculating with his fingers, accepting disciples on a certain day and year, etc., I no longer have the desire to watch. If people's fate is doomed, why should they be immortal? What's the question?

Regarding the emotional part of the protagonist, the writing is too boring. There is no need to deal with the plot of many women's bitter love. It is too ridiculous to even show the story of being possessed by a maniac and cultivating immortals. Just one is enough, the plot should focus on the cultivation of immortal magic and fighting, otherwise it will not read smoothly and it will also affect the fan's adhesion! This is not pure literature, there is no need for too much emotional foreshadowing!

This makes my head hurt when I read it, just like writing a poem The plot is described in one stroke. Anyway, I wrote how the plot develops, and you can understand the details by yourself... I am not a reading comprehension person, so the writing is so elegant. It deviates from the essence of online writing. Doesn't the author think that the readers of online writing come here with the intention of receiving literary influence? We are here to escape from reality and find the satisfaction of spiritual fantasy...

The book is a good book, but I would like to make a comment. The names of the spells are too bad. The names of the Cloud and Rain Technique, Ice Cone Technique, and Fireball Technique are too bad. These are the names in Xiaobai's book and should not appear in this book. Zhu Tian Miao You Dong Ji Zhen Sutra, Secret Palace Sanyuan Tong Xuan Divine Thunder, etc. Are good names.

After reading about a hundred chapters, I found Xiaobai Shuangwen with better writing skills, Time Travel, Son of Destiny, both civil and military, all kinds of defies, and he was able to cross two steps without even getting hurt. Good writing is wasted in vain, the real gold and jade are ruined in the middle, so abandon it.

This novel is a bit strange. The golden finger appears in the third chapter. Until the next dozens of chapters, he keeps practicing martial arts and studying medicine without thinking about the importance of the golden finger in his mind. Is this big-hearted or mentally retarded?

How can I put it, the biggest disadvantage of this book is that the enemy will not die. We have the upper hand and cannot be killed. Even if our true immortal kills the soul, he cannot be killed. If he is surrounded and killed, he cannot be killed. Even if he is a passerby with a demonic way, he cannot be killed. It is impossible to read.

The first place that I can't read is the realm of cultivation. The names of the big realm and the small realm are poisonous points that I have never read before. I admire them. I admire them; The second place that I can't read is the forced intrigue. It is clear that the cultivation of peace of mind is very smooth. Hands, forcibly adding things that they are not proficient in, superfluous; The third point that cannot be read is the emotion. Anyone who has watched a ring match knows that during the intermission of the match, the boxers will not notice it, let alone the fierce fight? Slid away.

Monk exercises are not popular nowadays, so they are not popular. What does a monk seek for immortality?

It's well written, Banxiancao. It would be better if there was no infighting and scheming. To be honest, a female protagonist can accept it. You two are ambiguous. The key is that it also involves infighting and trouble. You are asking for trouble. I really don't like watching this kind of plot.

After reading the previous chapters, I found that it was poisonous to persuade me to quit. You are cultivating immortals, not super-brain calculations. Some great characters have created one or two powerful kung fu in their lifetime. The protagonist has learned hundreds of them in one go, and has become proficient in every detail. With no hard work, he has epiphanies from time to time, and easily merges dozens of similar kung fu into one. We all know that too much is too much to be precise. There are only one scoop of the three thousand Taoist teachings. You are omniscient and omnipotent and you can only take one scoop.

Who did the author offend? Have you been criticized since the first chapter? I'm drunk too!

After reading the first chapter, I was really dissuaded. It's too exaggerated to win the imperial examination at the age of twelve. I'm still a scholar.

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