Red Dragon Monk

The sixth chapter started to get awkward. There was no intermediate process. The brothers and sisters of the Red Dragon began to work together and talked to "Brother", "I'm okay" and "It's okay" in the tone of street gangsters. Listen, are these words that the Red Dragon can say? The setting is broken. The author's level of dialogue description cannot be used to write fantasy. It would be more suitable to write urban/underworld, or romance. (The red dragons are all chuunibyou, they are all arrogant, and they are completely unable to write what the red dragon should be like. In the fifth or sixth chapter, they started to enjoy themselves, and the Oscars came out. Isn't it embarrassing?)

It's pretty good. The author's writing is very interesting, but I don't know how long it will take for it to be on the shelves. I'll give you the monthly and recommended tickets after it's on the shelves. Yeah, the plot is pretty good. I just feel that the main character, being a red dragon, is too weak. Reading other similar books, it is simply too satisfying, but I still highly recommend it. Come on, author, try to update more than once a day, so that we have the motivation to continue reading. I still hope that the author will write better and better, and strive to go further. In one sentence, come on, Oli is here! ! ! 🤭

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Excellent dragon seedlings I read it in one go Not too many poisonous points Come on Oli give There are not many dnd dragon novels that suit your taste It won't collapse in the later stage Full subscription support for poor college students 😁😁😁 Rush!

How to say it! At the expense of his dragon clan's special strength! To forcefully comply with the monk's professional characteristic speed! ! ! Anyway, that's all the protagonist can say! ! What's the difference between this and wasting talent! ! ! This is just like a swordsman genius who must learn swordsmanship in order to be handsome! ! ! The sword is domineering and the sword is elegant and agile! ! Both styles actually worked! Real protagonist

Everything else is pretty good, except that the evil god's incarnation contract persuaded me to quit.

What I wrote before is good, but I really feel that it was a failure when it came to the Evil God. Let's not talk about whether signing the Evil God's contract will shift the alignment. Just let the Evil God's "clone" stay and collect the Evil God's power and flesh and blood essence in the future. Isn't it afraid that Bahamut will accidentally see or sense it? And the flesh and blood essence of the evil god's clone. If you eat it as you say, aren't you afraid that there may be some backhand in it? How great is your experience? Where did the intelligence and vigilance go? To be honest, this event was not chosen very well. And why do most dragon novels stick to these? Either an evil god, an old ruler, or an evil deity. Isn't it good for the protagonist to just stick to the lawful path? Isn't it good to be a monk? Or is Bahamut's background not strong enough? When you stare into the abyss, the abyss is also staring into you! The contract is not so easy to sign, it is not like the devil's contract. Even if you avoid all the loopholes in the devil's contract and complete the contract, as long as you sign, your soul will be marked, and you will inevitably fall into the lower realm after death. It's like the evil god's contract. The focus is not on the content of the contract but on the act of signing the contract! How did a pure and kind little boy become a devil king? You must know that there are many short stories in Faerûn that have been mentioned.

There have been fewer and fewer novels about time-traveling Jackie Chan or Warcraft in recent years. In fact, they are very good subjects, and there are many popular books on them. I saw this book from a recommendation and suddenly felt happy. Unfortunately, the upgrade was too slow. There are too many useless plots thrown around at the same time. For this kind of novel, in the early dozens of chapters, all you need to do is write about upgrades, the legend of upgrades, add a life-saving method to it, and then develop the storyline.

Little knowledge: There are many dragon gods, but the King of Good Dragons and the Mother of Evil Dragons are more famous Others include: Chronippus The Silent One, the Observer Weak Divine Power Emblem: An unblinking dragon eye Plane of residence: Outland Faction : Neutral Priesthood: Fate, Death, Judgment Disciples: Dragon, Observer Cleric Alignment: Neutral Domains: Death, Dragons*, Knowledge (Destiny, Planning, Time) Preferred Weapon: Scythe (Claw) Chronippus is neutral—silent, indifferent, objective. He is the dragon god of fate, death and judgment. His form is colorless and lacks luster, marking him as outside the struggle between chromatic and metallic dragons. Farazul Night Dragon Lesser Powers Emblem: Dragon Skull Plane of Residence: Gray Wilds Alignment: Neutral Evil Priesthood: Corruption, Undead, Blight Worshippers: Evil Dragon, Necromancer, Undead Priest Alignment: Lawful Evil, Neutral Evil, Chaotic Evil Domain: Death, Dragon*, Evil (Darkness, Death Resistance) Preferred Weapon: Scimitar (Claw) Farazul, the terrifying night dragon, is neutral evil. He is the energy-draining god of the undead, decay, and exhaustion. Some claim he has a rotten skeletal form, but others believe he looks like an aging black dragon with flesh stretched tightly over his bones. Carix Lord of Fire, Destroyer of All, Cleanser of the World Lesser Powers Sign: Reptilian Eyes Superimposed on Fire Plane of Residence: Tunnel of Violence Alignment: Chaotic Evil Priesthood: Fire, Destruction, Rebirth Worshippers: Dragon , Warlock, Warlord, some Druids Cleric Alignment: Chaotic Neutral, Neutral Evil, Chaotic Evil Domains: Chaos, Destruction, Dragon*, Evil, Fire (Restoration) Preferred Weapon: Scythe (claw) Karyx, the Destroyer of All, symbolizes the pure power and destructive power of dragons. Some argue that Carix is ​​actually insane, a result of his long occupation of the Windswept Depths of the Noisy Tunnel. He looks very much like an ancient red dragon. Hell Jester, Keeper of Legends Lesser Powers Emblem: Open Book Plane of Residence: Wilderness Alignment: Chaotic Good Portfolio: Humor, Storytelling, Inspiration Worshippers: Dragon, Bard, Entertainer Cleric Alignment: Neutral Good, Chaotic Good, Chaotic Neutral Domains: Chaos, Draconic*, Good, Trickery (Rune) Favored Weapon: Short Sword (Claw) Hell is a clean-lined, copper-colored dragon with a ready smile and a happy twinkle in her eyes. Among the dragon gods, she is the most friendly to non-dragons (even Asterina has a reputation for being dangerous). Landis Scale of justice, the balancer, the weigher of life Weak powers Emblem: Sword balanced on the point of a needle Plane of residence: Mechanical realm Alignment: Lawful neutral Priesthood: Balance, justice Worshippers: Dragon Cleric alignment: lawful good, lawful neutral, lawful evil Domains: destruction, draconic*, order, protection (retribution) Favored weapon: long sword (claw) Unlike Chronippus, who only judged the dragon's life after death, Landis gave justice to the dragon while it was still alive. His scales are a dull silver, some say this is because he cares more about judging others than taking care of himself. Tamara Lady of Kindness, Lady of Mercy Lesser Powers Emblem: Seven-Pointed Star on Black Ground Plane of Residence: Elysium Alignment: Neutral Good Priesthood: Life, Light, Mercy Worshippers: Good Dragon, Healer, one who craves mercy Cleric Alignment: Lawful Good, Neutral Good, Chaotic Good Domains: Draconic*, Good, Healing, Strength, Sun (Home) Preferred Weapon: Scimitar (claw) Tamara is the kindest and most merciful of the dragon gods. Some people mistake this quality for weakness, yet such a creature never makes the same mistake twice. She appeared as a beautiful luminous silver dragon, her eyes glowing with the brightness of the sun itself. Natalie can actually believe in Hel. Silly husband + prank will be fun.

I feel like the protagonist is at a loss after changing his meditation method! Besides, are monks and sword masters really compatible? Combining the skills of the monk with the meditation of the sword master is really a genius, and you are not afraid of making mistakes! You dare to believe the words of the evil god so easily, you are really not afraid of death!

As a heterogeneous dragon, it's too embarrassing. I read more than 30 chapters and there was not a single tough battle. The whole text was barely alive. This description was more like a goblin than a dragon. In a real battle, I hit a fixed target and was injured. I was speechless.

After raising it for half a year, it turned out that it seemed to have died long ago 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

1. Chapter 0 is recommended to be placed in the work-related section. Some DND setting classes written in brackets can also be placed there. Most people come here to see the dragon. When they see this first (although they know it is before time travel), their interest in reading begins to be reduced. 2. Journey to the West... Even if it is magical, it feels like eating cake dipped in soy sauce... But it's okay. 3. It's best to have less modern jokes like Oscars. Even if the explanation is from the protagonist, it still feels like a forced explanation. 4. The author is the most humble author I have ever seen. You can refer to the suggestions, but there is no need to follow them all, otherwise it may not be the same in the end.

Believing in Bahamut is like a gang member joining a rival gang. The original gang organization will never let this kid go.

You are writing a Western novel, right? Can you respect the dialogue and not add too many Eastern things?

Well, this book is still very interesting in my opinion. As a reader of 10 years, I suggest that the protagonist has some trump cards. What is a trump card? It is the kind of ability that can turn the table. For example, if you want to balance the power of heaven and earth, you can add skill time and cooling time. Then as the skills become more proficient, you can also add some special metallization to the protagonist's scales to improve the defense of the protagonist's natural scales. The so-called thickest armor, the hardest hit. Or the protagonist can subdue this evil god's clone, change her camp, and become the protagonist's exclusive tool (to cause trouble) and (to cause trouble). Then it is best for the protagonist to officially participate in the plot after the young dragon. Many books about dragons collapse only when the young dragon or young dragon causes trouble everywhere. It is best for young dragons, boys, and teenagers to farm and cultivate a few more legends, so that when the plot comes, they can participate in the historical trend as a force that can dominate one side, instead of being treated like a monkey by the gods and other forces. Personal opinion, for reference only

Personally, I feel that the most successful book on the dnd theme is the book Lord of the Abyss. The author can try to figure it out. After all, the results are there.