Hero Template

I came here because of the setting, but I didn't want to read it after reading it. I don't know the specific reason, but I can give a few suggestions on the setting 1-What is the main line of this book, what is the protagonist's thoughts, and what is the reason why the protagonist becomes stronger when I see the protagonist coming out to fight because of touching the class? If the performance is not obvious, you can look at what your best friend writes at the beginning 2-Monsters appear too frequently. Under the current situation, a lot of people can be killed at every turn. I feel that human beings should have disappeared long ago with this frequency. I thought about why I have this feeling and compared it with Mystery. Although Mystery is the mainstream of monsters, it is super annoying to fight against the extraordinary, and its advanced combat power is like God. Faith is needed, so the number of humans must be preserved, and the monsters and weirdness in this book are killing people, but there are very few extraordinarys to fight against, and the heroes often die, which feels unreasonable, 3-, that is the writing, including plot promotion and character characterization, which needs to be understood step by step 4-that is the setting of the extraordinary and the environment. I think there are very few extraordinary people at present and they require talents. Countries are more like tribes than countries, but they are better after all. 5-In fact, when I read the book, it can be considered to be below the level of food and grass. It can be read, so I collected it first to see if I can become a eunuch.

The people in Guya Town are really annoying. I saved the town, not the person, and brought him back to the world from hell, but all the townspeople will be liquidated. You have nothing to fear when the incident is not resolved, but you have no confidence after it is resolved. I can torture you to death as much as I want.

Except for the first few chapters, the rest of the chapters are too bland and not very exciting. The same goes for the golden finger, which does not give people a refreshing feeling. For this kind of golden finger, you have to give people the feeling of drawing cards to be interesting.

Speaking of which, I think the protagonist's name is so funny! It always reminds me of a certain goddess, and the phrase "Eris's breasts are made from pads!" (ಡωಡ)

It feels so inconsistent that the protagonist, a time-traveler, is no different from a supposedly ordinary boy, more innocent than the heroine! This was written so many years ago┐(─__─)┌!

The worldview is too hopeless, has no solution, and is difficult to gain traction

Template? The protagonist is adding entries to himself, right?

Let me go, is the protagonist Conan? Wherever you go, the group will be destroyed

The writing is good, but it's missing

There is no main line, the writing is messy, there is no characterization, and it tastes like chicken at least. It is like wax. Some people say that the writing is good 😵

Is the cover picture the opening of the Qiandudi Cthulhu series?

The handling of Guya Town is not what I want and I left.

The protagonist is the Lone Star of Heavenly Evil, who will die wherever he goes and destroy a lot of people.

Haha, thank you everyone for your recommendation votes. Well, especially the book friends of Yan Moge Yishen and 0527, they have been giving me recommendation votes. I have written it in the author's words several times, but I can't seem to see it on the website, so I just want to say thank you again in the book review area, haha.

The cover is well chosen, a gentleman is indispensable

Everything else is fine, except that the author's description of the conversation between the protagonist and his son doesn't look like a father and son at all. The interaction is almost like an ordinary friend rather than a close relationship with family members. It just looks weird and uncomfortable.

I just read it for the setting, and the rest is generally understandable to a new author. Come on,

Although it feels pretty good, I still can't remember who the protagonist is after watching a dozen of them. . I can only say that there is a slight problem with telling the story.

This title is interesting👍

What are the rules for the main character draw, based on time? Task? Encountering something strange? Murder and arson? Did I miss it? I always feel that the main character suddenly wins the lottery for no reason, which is very embarrassing.