I Became a Sun

，         ， ，，，， I have read that other novels introduce certain nouns at the end of chapters, but I think this is too low in word count, and it is not as comfortable as Baidu. You can also look at pictures and have an idea of ​​the appearance. In the future, I will try to reduce the appearance of this type of nouns, or write about the world that is as popular as possible Here is a summary of the uncomfortable points for everyone. If it does not affect the reading, I may learn from my opinions. I can also explain to you some things you don't understand You can **The group chat number: 879531532. You can take a look at the inspiration pictures I sent in the group.

A god has poor vision at night...

Come in and take a look and comment for free. I don't know if it will be deleted 😁 It can be seen that the author wants to write a big picture, but I feel that the author's ability is really limited. Most of the excellent novels in this category can bring readers a magnificent epic feeling. Unfortunately, I can't feel it at all in this one. The author's writing is too excessive and detailed. He is always obsessed with depicting a story in history, which makes him very petty. Moreover, these stories are unnatural and too deliberate in the connection between history. In addition, there is an aspect of the author that I personally disagree with. Of course, this is my personal opinion and I am just mentioning it. The author created the world setting too early. Almost as soon as he created the world, he was thinking about perfecting the world setting. In this way, the world written by the author completely lost its readability. Because of these settings, readers can guess what the subsequent development will be like without looking at it. If the novelty is lost, do you still expect readers to follow the book? So my suggestion is not to release the setting of a world early on, but to slowly release it bit by bit as the world develops, and to innovate at any time, so as to maintain readers' interest in reading. That's probably all the suggestions.

To be honest, I didn't feel it at first, but now I hate Tiamat more and more. She just doesn't have the respect that a creature has for her father. She still clings to the protagonist, making it seem like the protagonist's harem. Moreover, the maid seems to have been forgotten now, not to mention the Familia who have the same background.

Disappointed, feeling very boring. Goodbye!

At present, the character and design of the protagonist have been determined. For me, the development of the story is almost 70% to 80% complete. The protagonist is a god, I'm talking about something like dnd Goblin Slayer. As long as it's interesting, anything is possible and everything is under control. To put it bluntly, it is a wave. Once you enter a world with similar power, this character will fall apart like shit. Why don't you think the same as me (refer to The King Under One Person). Complaints and discussions are welcome, and those who curse will be ignored. Above

So far, the author's writing is very good (from my personal point of view), but the Japanese maid style is a bit out of place, emmm. It can only be regarded as the author's personal hobby. The sentences are smooth and well organized, and it looks very smooth.

Leave a book review, The setting is not popular, the protagonist's thinking is jumping, and the final goal is uncertain. The "Three Golden Chapters" are not powerful. In addition, the cover should be changed to a more realistic and magical style. Of course, if this is your test book, then relax and boldly write it according to your own outline. People always have to knock down the south wall before they give up 🤝.

How should I put it, I think these recent chapters are a bit poisonous... First of all, Saya saved everyone, so I don't think her son would be treated like this by these people, right? If it's like Naruto, just pretend I didn't say it... Then Saya has come out to refute the rumors, but these people still don't believe it? There's no need to write like this, right? And Lucifer didn't do anything. These people treat Lucifer like this just based on rumors? Then regarding Jehovah, it is really wisdom! Fortunately, he is still regarded as the king of the next generation... Is he really sincere about easing the relationship between brothers? If others don't know what Lucifer is like, how can he not know? Regarding the chapter about destroying the shield, I can understand that he doesn't believe in Lucifer, but trusting a stranger like that? I read in this chapter that a person said that Jehovah is just a 16-year-old child and does not understand this. But to doubt his own brother because of the words of a stranger? No matter how rebellious Lucifer is, has he ever made fun of human life before? No, then he will destroy the shield when the evil comes? And Cain and Lilith, want to destroy the city just because they hate Saya's arrogant look? There must be something wrong with their brains. Who saved them? Don't they have any bad ideas in their hearts? In short, these two reasons are too ridiculous. At least they can arrange a bitter and bitter feud! ! ! Also, what if the shield is destroyed and people die? Aren't they two just polished commanders? Finally, there is Lucifer. I think he is a bit deliberately tsundere? And Killua has no sense of existence at all, so what is the use of writing the previous scenes? ps: Please discuss rationally and don't start blaming directly...

1. The author wrote before that I think it's okay not to follow the trend of technology for the time being, because technology is actually not suitable for excessive interference. If you are not allowed to follow the same path, the potential will be much smaller. After all, innovation is much more difficult than imitation. 2. But now that Liangbing has been created, I think I can go into the biotechnology stream as an experiment and accumulate experience. For example, now that we have the magic network and the biological computer, we can even combine the characteristics of the two to form a biological spiritual network, turn it into Gerta consciousness, and create a race similar to the Zerg. For example, the cells of the Sun God Clan are very suitable as the basis. Add the angel's void computer and some new cells that adapt to the environment to create a race that can explode troops and adapt to all environments. At the same time, because the queen has only one consciousness, civilization is the queen, and the queen is civilization. I think this should be very restrained for Zhen.

Me too! In fact, if someone reads a book and thinks he is a mental patient, and if he replaces his own heart with his own heart, can it be regarded as a certain level of dimensionality and seclusion? Those who are sick have failed to seize the body, only half of the body has been taken away, and they are confused and become mentally ill. In addition, the rules of reality do not support their power system... Ancient mysticism is due to the arrival of some system leaders who conform to the rules of reality... Human civilization has never progressed, and it is all driven by the alien demon bosses. In order to transcend, we can only promote group technology It's not that being self-sufficient is an outlier, it's that being self-sufficient generally doesn't require others to follow their own ideas and "don't do to others what you don't want others to do to you." And those who have already formed a fait accompli can only show that they are not rubbish by dragging others into the water (those are the ones who dance the most happily). After all, no one will admit from their heart that they are wrong. In order to persuade others to introduce their garbage values, they are motivated enough to study rhetoric and sophistry. People who are self-sufficient may have a certain degree of resistance, but if they listen to it too much, the general public will only accept their values, and even regard their junk values ​​​​as their ability. Instead, they will envy them, and then they will implement them if they have the opportunity. After all, the majority are ordinary people. For example, the West is open to sexuality. Is it really open? I heard that ordinary people are actually more conservative than us. The reason for this illusion is just because of the news reports and the joy of this small group of people. After all, if it is too popular, it will not have much news value, and who will report it frequently? But there are still many people who will instill these dregs into others, because human nature is to be gregarious. If you do something wrong and you can't go back to the past, you can only drag everyone down, so that everyone will be the same, and you can't blame me for my moral corruption. This is also the reason why social morality will only become lower and lower, because noble people can only live alone, but low people have enough motivation to influence others. Because no matter how noble you are, low people can't argue openly and openly. If they say "old-fashioned" or "feudal", they are GG. You stay here, don't move around.

When you become the sun, you still think with your lower body

To be honest, writing fan fiction in the science fiction area is correct, but using the two-dimensional template is a pain in the ass, and the positioning is wrong 😅

Three chapters! Just three chapters! My level 18 level 6 divine equipment Malphite, which had full poison resistance, was instantly destroyed.

When you become a great being, you should do great things. Why can't you get rid of the vulgar taste? It feels like as soon as you enter the plot, you start to be a woman, a woman, a woman again. .

It is suitable for teenagers below high school who have just started reading novels. .

I always feel that it is inconsistent to associate FGO with Zhu Tianliu, and I always feel that the combat power is not worthy of it. I am just a village chief on a planet. I call you the oldest king to give you face, but you can't refute it if I don't give you face and call you village chief, because the name is not wrong at all. What is awesome? And the protagonist changed from the sun to the so-called god in FGO? Don't you think this is a downgrade? That is to say, the combat power has changed from a galaxy level to a city-breaking level.

Speaking of which, I took FGO Karna's Noble Phantasm and went to DC to pretend to be B. I was shocked by all kinds of things and felt so embarrassed. Does the author have any misunderstanding about the DC universe? Also, Superman may not be afraid of the sun even in his normal state.

The start was ruined, right? Would the Suns have such a low B-bar? If you want to write DC, don't set up a stellar background. Just use the fgo template, right?

There are 200 billion galaxies in the observed universe, and it is estimated that there are trillions of galaxies. Our Milky Way galaxy has more than 200 billion stars. One sixth of your solar tube? Haha... I just smiled and said nothing.

The immature author writes immature books for immature little cuties to read 🤭

A very restrictive and boring way to spend billions of years? There was no sense and emotion left long ago, and the setting was very broken.

If you don't want the heroine, you can give it up. There is a heroine. It seems that the protagonist has feelings for him!

I haven't seen it. The protagonist is the sun? Can you build a Dyson sphere to cover the protagonist? It's fun just thinking about it. 😁

When Shen Nong tested poison, I won't mention the three concepts of logic, but the most important thing is. . . This guy is a Japanese comic fan, a Japanese comic fan with a sci-fi guise, but there is no explanation in the introduction. I never read Japanese comics and I felt very sad after watching it for a while. I felt like I had been cheated!

I didn't read it, but I read the introduction. Since it is about people, why isn't the title of the book "I Have a Sun Clone"? ? Is this considered clickbait?

How to say it? I've read this novel before, and now I'm reading it again. I actually think it's quite good. Looking at your comments, I instantly lost interest in reading it. You are professional sailors, right? Join a group and let me make some money, okay?

B bar is too low. Sentinel, learn about the power of millions of stars. .

The protagonist is a noob, there are so many fantasy worlds, I want a magic one,

A sun, haha ​​(；一_一), I'm afraid it wasn't drawn with yellow graffiti in the funny episode!