One Piece: I Can See Experience Points

Cheating is like drinking Coke, it's very refreshing. The authentic pirate style is just like eating ramen, it's also very satisfying. You want to cheat in this book, and you also want to write about the pirate smell, like pouring coke into ramen, a strange smell.

All I can say is that the author's writing is too awkward. It's better for those who haven't watched One Piece than those who have. It's not that your writing is not good, it's just that it's awkward for you to write pirates in the style of writing fairy tales. Too many idioms used

Personally, I think the writing is good, but there are a lot of poisonous points.

Reasons for Abandoning Books Multiple Fruit Abilities,

I think, the fruit has too many abilities, and it feels a bit too cheating.

What does this book say? I wanted to read the book after reading the title, but didn't want to read it after reading the introduction. There is no denying that the navy is a military force that is influenced and controlled by the world government, but what the vast majority of the navy wants is to protect the people from the ravages of pirates. The manner in which the Navy is treated as a human being makes people feel uncomfortable.

This fruit is a bit weak. It would take a great writing style to describe this spider fruit as awesome. Is this a brainless cheat? ? Is this because the author is making himself uncomfortable?

You have a system and you still eat the fruit... It's just a weakness.

Apart from anything else, this is the lowest devil fruit I have ever seen in a pirate novel, but it is also very attractive. In the past, they were all natural-type, fantasy beasts, and there were very few ordinary ones like this.

It says that the golden finger is gone. Isn't it possible to earn gold? If you don't use such a big golden finger, how can you breathe?

Will Ace's Devil Fruit be returned to him

Big. This chapter makes me want to strangle you to death...

Does Ace have a Devil Fruit? What about his Burning Fruit? Everyone else is strengthening it, but Ace doesn't seem to be.

What I wrote before is really good, but after traveling through time, I really can't understand it and it's a bit confusing.

I can't understand it. Three years later, Luffy went to sea. Ace Whitebeard should be dead too. You're not dead, Luffy didn't go to sea and you became the Five Emperors? There is no more war at the top...

Because there is a shortage of books, if I find your book, leave a paw and check in. The proof has come, I am a pirate, a crazy big pirate. Brother, please update quickly.

I'm confused when I see your fruit ability.

I, Bucky, should have a role.

How about a single female protagonist or an ambiguous female protagonist?

No matter if it sounds good or not, give me your opinion after reading it.