The Great Dream Opportunity System

The brothers followed. ... 1

The editor told me to release it on Friday, but I wanted to release it on the 1st, so I decided to continue updating with free chapters (Chapter 67 was an operational error...). I hope everyone can support me then.

This book is so well-written! I've read almost 100 pages and am completely engrossed. In today's fast-paced society, I've long been experiencing a reading slump, yet this book has completely captivated me. I would never believe it if I hadn't experienced it myself. This book is unconventional and breaks away from formulas, boasting boundless imagination and superb writing. It is truly a novel that deserves careful and thorough reading. I give this novel an 8 out of 10! Keep it up, author!

I'm here! I'm here! I'm here! (I'm saying it three times because it's important!)

This system has to explain everything to the protagonist; it's practically ready to step in and explain everything itself.

I think adding some crime-solving and reasoning elements would be helpful. Each time you learn so many secrets from the past during a dungeon run, it feels a bit pointless and lacks depth, not exciting enough. If you take something from someone else during a dungeon run, you've incurred a karmic debt, and you should do something within your power, not just focus on your own strength.

Chapter 44 Auction House (Part 1) contains typos, as shown in the image.

The art style suddenly changed 🙂 I'm not interested 🙂 I hope you can make a game about dynasty conquest 🙂 Isn't this how you cultivate power? Playing games in the dream world is too low-class. It would be better to make a real-world task trading platform to trade some cultivation techniques. If you can recruit people, why can't you recruit monsters?

So you've abandoned both books?

This setup is a bit risky... Any bros want to join me in making money?