Mortals Cheat to Become Immortals

After cultivating immortal fighting skills, the distance between the Yuanying Powers on both sides was 10 feet, and the ground sank 3 feet during the fight. It can fly more than ten feet away. It's like a martial arts movie. Brothers, aren't you awkward?

I guess the outline has been revised several times, and the writing can't be said to be bad, but the male protagonist fiddles here and there, and most of the time he is alone and enjoying himself. The part where Lingyi is there is finally interesting. After Lingyi's main soul left, he didn't know what he was doing again. The pile of electrician's magic weapons that the male protagonist refined also felt very low.

Read intensively in the front and skim quickly in the back. The timeline is ten thousand years ago, before the demon invasion. Without spirit root flow, I got the weapon spirit root in the later stage. The background setting of the plot is specious and closer to the original work. The protagonist has never read The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, and does not even know the relevant knowledge of cultivating the spiritual roots of immortality. The protagonist is set to be very childish, like a mentally retarded person, but the protagonist before the time travel was a normal person. This setting feels inconsistent. Looking at the later stage, it is still so childish, and the character descriptions throughout the story are also relatively childish. Background Map Sect Character Settings Kung Fu Settings, there is a lot of filling in, but the author obviously can't control it, so this is a pseudo-fan novel that looks like a fan. I want to substitute the background of the original work, but it is not well written. Not as good as this new fairy tale.

A novel about cultivating immortals is completely changed beyond recognition.

When will you get the Sword of the Great Dutiful Son?

It doesn't matter whether it's done or not, it's just that the protagonist's IQ and behavior make my heart and lungs stop.

I just want to know if the protagonist knows the plot. If you don't know, then you don't want to read it, because I want to read mortal fanfics and don't want to waste time. Has anyone read this book? Can you please reply?

Things to note before reading: The background of this story is before the world of mortals cultivating immortals was invaded by the demon world, which is what it was like thousands of years ago. The plot currently has little to do with the plot of the original work, and the protagonist has not read the original work. However, Goldfinger is very playable and can do a lot of sexy operations. The plot setting is also reasonable, and it can test the ancients of mortals. The author's perseverance is also good. If you don't like it, please don't troll, just leave silently. I suggest that everyone likes to listen, but please don't be too sharp when speaking. After all, there are not many high-quality and high-quality mortals. So far, the only ones I know about are cheating and scientific cultivation. Trolls have a very messy mentality, whether they are readers or authors.

Everything else is fine, except that the protagonist looks like a fool, not like a time traveler at all, like an aboriginal

In fact, the author's creation of this book is very interesting. There are many easter eggs, and you can see that he put a lot of thought into it. For example, the protagonist is similar to Dr. Mo (not his character). Think about it, a doctor saved the immortal cultivator, and finally got the Seven Ghost Soul Devourers from the immortal cultivator. Take a look, take a look, these kinds of easter eggs are really interesting! (The name of the immortal cultivator is the same as that of the mortal cultivator) The difference is that the world of Han Laomo is too cruel and cold-blooded, but this book goes the opposite way. The rescued cultivator is a kind person, and the protagonist is also a kind person. He saved several times ago You can tell from the plot of the early-stage drag queen character that she is really ordinary in terms of personality (the mortals here refer to ordinary people like us). Secondly, as a person who plays World of Warcraft, I also find it quite interesting, and I am looking forward to the development of Warcraft Goldfinger in the later stage. As for those who compare this book with ordinary people in the comment area, and compare the author with Wangyu, that must be a joke😂 If you pursue high-end and high-quality writing, this book is indeed not suitable for you, then there is really no comparison. If what you want is a book that you can read in your leisure time and open up your imagination, then this book will definitely suit your taste. To be honest, the author's writing style does have many flaws, but his imagination is attractive, and that's enough.

When this book came to Immortality, the protagonist's golden finger was very interesting. It was a battle map in Warcraft. There were no monsters, no gold mines, shops, and no products. There were only undead graveyards, a third-level base (which could only produce acolytes), and the Sacrificial Abyss. The protagonist couldn't enter it yet, so he could only peek at the screen. What's interesting is that he used Doctor Mo Juren's Seven Ghost Soul-Eating Soul Seizing Method to get the soul out of the body, and then the protagonist started to cheat, and he became more and more awesome.

After reading 20 chapters, I have some final suggestions before I abandon the book. Brother author, let's write a book... It's true that you can write if you have hands, but what you write may not be a novel. For example, you really want to imitate a mortal and follow the legend of immortality, but mortal... Mortal means ordinary people, not mentally retarded people. There is a certain difference between ordinary and mentally retarded. Do you understand this? Second, the protagonist can have various shortcomings, but he cannot be a loser. To use the starting point's formula, the protagonist can pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, but he cannot be a real pig. The reader is not your father. There is no obligation to waste time on a waste (especially a waste of mentality) protagonist who has to go through millions of words to grow into an ordinary person, right? Third, I haven't understood this cheat until now, and even you, the author, haven't figured it out yourself. It's like I want to go to Tsinghua University and Peking University, but I only got 200 points, so I cheated and let me know the answer directly. But the author suddenly discovered that you can finish the book in one chapter as soon as you open this cheat, so you can only abuse the protagonist and make the protagonist forget how to write... So the whole novel is not about how the protagonist learns, but how the protagonist reads... Author, do you think it is awkward to write a novel like this?

Can any Shen Nong tell me whether this is a mortal novel or a World of Warcraft novel?

After reading more than 30 chapters, I couldn't hold on anymore, so I took a breath and came back to say: Pig's feet among mortals are at least a miscellaneous spiritual root, which can be regarded as the beginning of hell. The protagonist of this book does not even have spiritual roots, which can be said to be the beginning of the abyss. In addition, the protagonist's IQ is not good, and his character is not good. Forget it, I won't say more, you can give it a try if you are not afraid of poison.

1. The protagonist is too stupid. A novice author shouldn't think about writing a growing protagonist. How can he expect anyone to read him even if he drives readers away at the beginning? Is it difficult to copy Han Li's character? 2. Mortals only start to become popular after more than a thousand chapters. Are you, a low-profile mortal, planning to hold on for more than 1,000 chapters? What if those disgusting mortal plots weren't necessary? 3. Did the protagonist change after entering the small secret realm? Do you have to write so much to explain something clearly in two sentences? Who has the patience to watch those SBs fight?

Every time this kind of inexplicable plot makes me really sick, is the protagonist invincible? Are you missing something when you are always running around? Plot for the sake of plot. With such an invincible cheat, the author tried every means possible to restrict the protagonist from using the cheat. This is also disgusting. . Can't you find a place to hide and practice slowly? What can't you buy with a gold finger? ?

The previous writing was okay, but when I encountered some gangsters, they made the protagonist look like a loser. I don't know what the author was thinking. A hero breaks the rules with martial arts. Most people become arrogant when they practice martial arts. But with the author, the more they practice, the more useless they become.

I've read seventy or eighty chapters, but I still don't understand the protagonist's IQ? What does the author want to express?

What I can't stand is the plot. The protagonist is at the third level of Qi Refining, and he goes to buy the exercises with a foundation period. Then add the exercises that you also want. The operation was simply suffocating, and the protagonist didn't even have a snack. You can find out how much that bunch of things cost in the article. I fooled you earlier into thinking that I have never seen the world and have been practicing hard at home. So the stranger you say something is, the more precious it is. When you take someone to buy exercises, you don't even know the way. You told them clearly before that you can't even get in. You haven't practiced any magic yet, yet they take you in. You don't even know the name of this street at first. You guard. It's a warehouse of a big family's pawn shop. If you find some adventures, you can practice directly, or if you find some precious things, it's okay to sell them to buy exercises.

If you want to join the popularity of mortals, then you should know what kind of protagonists mortal readers like. Why is your protagonist so different from Han Paopao? You have already become an immortal and you let a mortal gang show off their power in front of you. Why don't you kill them all and compromise to give them pills? ? Disgusting, holy mother, weak-minded, and the protagonist doesn't know the plot yet, so I can't watch it at all.

I want to say that I endured the poisonous points at the front until I saw the protagonist forcing the protagonist to refine cars and electrical appliances. I admit that I was too naive and too tolerant of the author. Stop the loss quickly, it's just a bit distressing to have subscribed to so many chapters.

During his Qi training period, Pig's Feet was scared away from home by a group of gangsters, and then he could take the initiative to deceive a foundation builder with a Nascent Soul background without any guilt? Even if you sell things well, evil cultivators will cast spells in broad daylight in the market? ? Author, do you think this river is

The author wrote an invincible copycat, but he insisted on writing some torturous plots of abuse of the master. This results in the protagonist's IQ often being very low, and being brainless in weakening some things. For example, that black flame is stronger than the dry blue ice flame among mortals, right? The description at the beginning is that the crystal will turn into black water with just a slight touch. How powerful is this? At the very least, Nascent Soul's late-stage lethality. Then I used it to fight for the first time. I fought with three people in the early stage of foundation building at the same level, and the fight was back and forth. Think about it, as long as you turn it into a wall of fire, he will die as soon as he touches it. Later on, the more I wrote, the weaker I became. First, I said that I would die if I encountered the knotted elixir, and then I said that I could protect myself even in the face of fake elixirs. That ice flame among mortals, what is its power? As long as the Nascent Soul is not within his vicinity, it will freeze to death, but conquering it also requires Nascent Soul cultivation. There are no limitations in this book, which can only weaken its power. This shows that the author's writing style cannot support his creativity.

The setting is quite interesting, but I won't talk about the character of the protagonist. It's fine in reality, but in the novel it can only be done in a hurry.

I only learned the difficulty of cultivating immortals for mortals, but I didn't learn how ruthless Han Paopao was.

How old is the author? Can he finish it?

Doesn't this just approve a layer of original writing about mortals cultivating immortality?

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Ten updates a day, such a ridiculous plot?

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