Harry Potter: Let Sleeping Dragons Lie

I hope the author sees it. I saw Chapter 43 and I would like to say something or make a suggestion. It doesn't really matter whether I accept it or not. Of course, improvements may be better! The overall writing is very good, it is a high-quality, good grass level, and there are only a few small problems behind the grass jelly. 1. Typos. The author may not have checked carefully. In most chapters, there are sometimes no typos, and sometimes there are too many typos. Suggestion! Use more punctuation marks or paragraphs to help you spot typos and express the description of the article better. 2. Advanced interpretation of the concept of magic, scientifically and systematically analyzing the essence of magic. This is the highlight and also the shortcoming of this novel. The highlight is that the author has a good foundation of magic knowledge, and also has very scientific concepts and expressions, which is like giving the protagonist a powerful golden finger. Disadvantages! Explain some issues. This knowledge uses a more scientific approach and appears in large numbers in daily conversations about magic, which makes many HP fans feel a little uncomfortable. It is suggested that you can be more euphemistic or use more suitable words instead. Well, other small problems are not very big and will be repaired as you write. Haha Overall, the writing is very good👍 By the way, I also read it. In 1981, your father's writing was also very good, but the style was rather stiff and the sense of substitution was a bit lacking. Look at the back, if you don't want to jump, book it all, I'm still an advertising facilitator, haha

Pure-blooded Harry Potter is indeed better than mixed-blooded ones, and the difference is in terms of money. Harry Potter is pure-blooded and rich, so he can afford all kinds of things and learn magic. Mixed-blooded people have trouble eating unless they are really powerful.

... I think this is the most similar

Is it the author's father that really hurts?

There is a problem with the author's writing method. The protagonist in the final expression is an arrogant and stubborn person who believes that the impact of magic must be quantified. The key is that a person who has not deepened the theory of magic has just come into contact with magic, just like an outsider giving advice to an expert. So some readers are actually dissatisfied after reading this. Why Well, you always praise the science in your knowledge, but you are unwilling to understand the spiritual aspect of magic. Isn't it the same as those who are stubborn in magic and unwilling to get in touch with and understand materialism? Where does he have the confidence to ridicule pure blood? He is nothing more than a "scientific religious pure blood"

The writing is good, but for some unknown reason, this novel is now extremely confusing, and the chapters don't match up at all. After reading dozens of chapters, I didn't understand the rest, and it felt like the protagonist was mentally ill.

The first review of the author's new book, I hope the author will write better and better

Let's start a new book, it's so confusing.

The author's father is the writer I admire most in Qidian. His "1981" is very beautiful! Worth having, full of positive energy!

Rowling is really just writing novels (funny Not to mention all kinds of books, there are many conflicts in the basic settings, but Harry Potter is essentially a children's book, so there is nothing we can do about it; It also specifies that readers cannot like certain characters, and the official teaches you how to read the book. The Malfoy incident is really the first time I have seen it in my life; The most important thing is to change the character arbitrarily for the sake of bad money. The funny thing is that the person she is trying to please is not grateful, hiahiahia