Harry Potter: Leave the Dragon Sleeping

This is one of the best HP fanfics I have ever read. The author's analysis of the magic in the HP world is very in-depth and logically rigorous (here's a joke: Rowling has just written novels, how do you know anything about Harry Potter hhh), the plot design is very good, and the portrayal of Voldemort's character (at least among the HP fanfics I have read) is the best in my opinion. The characters given so far are also very charming. Although the update is (especially) slow, I hope this book can continue and I hope everyone will support it.

It's over, it's over, what the hell is the ending? Why didn't I understand it? Didn't the author think about it and continue writing? I feel like there is still a lot more that can be written. There are not many books with such a complete magic background!

This book by the author gave me a refreshing feeling. To be honest, except for "Harry Potter: I Am Legend", no fan fiction has given me a new feeling for a long time. This book, like "Ha Chuan", adds its own things to the original without deviating from the original. In this book, we see something more realistic and different: whether it is Snape's keenness and change, Dumbledore's unintentional politics, and the aggressiveness and ambition of the magical nobles. The protagonist also shows us a character like the Dark Lord Grindelwald: smart, powerful, ambitious, wanting to change, ruthless, but possessing humanity, which makes his followers follow him wholeheartedly. A true Slytherin was written. But this book is not like other books. Along the way, the protagonist kills gods and Buddhas. Rather, it deeply expresses each person and each story, especially Ogli's recent paranoia and madness, fearlessness, anger against pure-blood oppression, and his own fearless sacrifice, fully showing us the image of a resister and the oppressed. Finally, I would like to thank the author. I hope that the author's book will be a hit and the more he writes, the better!

I hope the author sees it. I saw Chapter 43 and I would like to say something or make a suggestion. It doesn't really matter whether I accept it or not. Of course, improvements may be better! The overall writing is very good, it is a high-quality, good grass level, and there are only a few small problems behind the grass jelly. 1. Typos. The author may not have checked carefully. In most chapters, there are sometimes no typos, and sometimes there are too many typos. Suggestion! Use more punctuation marks or paragraphs to help you spot typos and express the description of the article better. 2. Advanced interpretation of the concept of magic, scientifically and systematically analyzing the essence of magic. This is the highlight and also the shortcoming of this novel. The highlight is that the author has a good foundation of magic knowledge, and also has very scientific concepts and expressions, which is like giving the protagonist a powerful golden finger. Disadvantages! Explain some issues. This knowledge uses a more scientific approach and appears in large numbers in daily conversations about magic, which makes many HP fans feel a little uncomfortable. It is suggested that you can be more euphemistic or use more suitable words instead. Well, other small problems are not very big and will be repaired as you write. Haha Overall, the writing is very good👍 By the way, I also read it. In 1981, your father's writing was also very good, but the style was rather stiff and the sense of substitution was a bit lacking. Look at the back, if you don't want to jump, book it all, I'm still an advertising facilitator, haha

Pure-blooded Harry Potter is indeed better than mixed-blooded ones, and the difference is in terms of money. Harry Potter is pure-blooded and rich, so he can afford all kinds of things and learn magic. Mixed-blooded people have trouble eating unless they are really powerful.

... I think this is the most similar

Is it the author's father that really hurts?

There is a problem with the author's writing method. The protagonist in the final expression is an arrogant and stubborn person who believes that the impact of magic must be quantified. The key is that a person who has not deepened the theory of magic has just come into contact with magic, just like an outsider giving advice to an expert. So some readers are actually dissatisfied after reading this. Why Well, you always praise the science in your knowledge, but you are unwilling to understand the spiritual aspect of magic. Isn't it the same as those who are stubborn in magic and unwilling to get in touch with and understand materialism? Where does he have the confidence to ridicule pure blood? He is nothing more than a "scientific religious pure blood"

The writing is good, but for some unknown reason, this novel is now extremely confusing, and the chapters don't match up at all. After reading dozens of chapters, I didn't understand the rest, and it felt like the protagonist was mentally ill.

The first review of the author's new book, I hope the author will write better and better

Let's start a new book, it's so confusing.

The author's father is the writer I admire most in Qidian. His "1981" is very beautiful! Worth having, full of positive energy!

Rowling is really just writing novels (funny Not to mention all kinds of books, there are many conflicts in the basic settings, but Harry Potter is essentially a children's book, so there is nothing we can do about it; It also specifies that readers cannot like certain characters, and the official teaches you how to read the book. The Malfoy incident is really the first time I have seen it in my life; The most important thing is to change the character arbitrarily for the sake of bad money. The funny thing is that the person she is trying to please is not grateful, hiahiahia

When I read Chapter 36, I felt that it was very strange. The content was a bit broken, and it often jumped to other scenes suddenly, which made people very confused.

It can be seen that the author's outline has been prepared, so go ahead and write it.

Pure-blood rebels (laughs)

Why do I always feel that my reading is unclear and I can't connect between chapters... There are too many jumps

This book will over-interpret, complete and repair the magical world and the original plot. I hope you can provide a piece of magic to help build the magical world. ---To summon magical creature images, the sources are not limited to myths, novels, games and original works ---To summon the magic spell (four characters) and related information, the name of the summoning magic branch and related information. Current departments: -Magic department -Shaman department -Druid department ---Assembled character information -Original supporting characters -Extended story of unique characters ---The original story of recruiting jokers, your message will also have a certain chance to be added to the subsequent plot. Above

A very interesting modern magic system. However, too many fans try to complete the power system that JK Rowling is not good at, but ignore the puzzle adventure and youthful growth that she is good at. The characters cannot stand upright. The male protagonist is the tool of strength, and Quirrell is the tool of the male protagonist. Only Myrtle can be interesting, why is it so good to write about a ghost girl?

The author posted a request, but there were a lot of requests in that post. I searched and there was no independent building. I built one myself_(:з∠)_

I never dreamed of that! Someone actually used Myrtle as the heroine!

Finally I see someone who doesn't want to go to Gryffindor. This should be stated in the introduction.

I started writing it in 1989, and it is estimated that the book will be finished before Harry goes to school. . . .

You think I'm jojo, but actually I don't want to be a human being?

Ask, is the heroine Myrtle?

I don't understand. I can't connect to many places. What's up with that scam? How come the protagonist has 45 guardian spirits?

The character Cary Myrtle doesn't even deserve a name😢

After reading 10 chapters, I can see that the author's writing is not bad, but he is too self-indulgent. He chose the setting at the beginning. Quirrell, who has been in the job for two years, may have plot considerations, but it is actually a major poisonous point. There are also subsidies. Hogwarts actually provides money. It was Dumbledore who took the money for Voldemort and then went to Diagon Alley by himself What a pity.